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Posted: 16 years ago
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CHAPTER 2

" Heer we are going to meet the Marwahs will you be okay???"

" Jee chachu"
" Take care of yourself and Suhani.. we will come back at night"
Heer watched Balwant , Daljeet leave for Ashlesha's in-laws house. Though she was also invited but she couldn't spend the day with them and Ashlesha fussing over her all the time. She knew Ashlesha still felt guity about what she had done to her but her fussing caused Heer a lot of irritation.
Heer bought Suhani down and looked at her as she put her off to sleep. Same eyes, Same lips.. only the nose..her nose... rest she was his shadow. Heer closed her eyes as she remembered him.. He was back in town. 3 years and he was back. Seeing him yesterday again had rekindled her feelings for him but......
"Tring Tring"
Slowly placing Suhani on the sofa, Heer walked over in the kitchen to see who was calling her. Picking up her cell she realised it was a private number. Heer sighed and picked up the phone hoping it was not from work..
"Hello"
"Spend the day with me today"
Heer's breath stopped as she recognized his voice. What did he mean by calling her and asking her to spend the day with him??? And how the hell did he get her number?????She looked once at the phone and then placed her hand on her chest to stop the heavy beating of her heart..
" I'm sorry Mr.Juneja .....I am busy"
And without listening to him she cut the call. She was not going to let him come back to her. She knew what he wanted from her. She was also aware that he would not rest till he had what he wanted..
HE WANTED REVENGE!!!!
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Prem Juneja.....the whole world revolved around him. His parents, his brothers everybody's life revolved around him. He was th ideal son, the ideal brother and he had tried to be the ideal husband... if only things had not gone wrong.. He dint blame Sanjana for it... He could not blame her, afterall she was his bestfriend. The person he blamed was sitting right on his work desk..

He turned around to look at the photoframe on his desk...She... she was responsible for everything.. she had turned his life upside down.. She had betrayed him.. she.......
He called his receptionist and asked for her address. He had given her chance and she had refused. He wanted her to spend the day with him and he was going to make sure he did. He picked her photoframe and bought it close to himself.. looking into her illusioned eyes he whispered.......

" Heer I vowed to revenge and I am back ...... 3 years 2months and 19 days its time you pay back sweetheart........its time you payback"

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Edited by @nup@m@ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
very mysterious part do update soon asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey anupama...its gr8 yaar...prem in his gray side...wow...gud....well ur update waz awsum...i loved it...rele...update soon...
Edited by Parth Garewal - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey great update, did i miss a part ?? the first one was on page 5 right, then this is the second one, is there a time gap between them... or was that a flashback, do update soon really inrtiguing characters this prem and heer
thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi,
I was thinking why you haven't updated yet as it's been a while.....glad you did it :) Tnx.

Omg....this is getting more and more interesting...very intriguing. It's pay back time now....hmmm.. But I hope deep down, they still love each other.

So Heer got pregnant after the wedding night in the hotel and the result is Suhani ? Prem thinks that she betrayed him by switching places/room with Sanjana that night which isn't true....I think there might be a reason for her to do so.

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Pls continue.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow... i'm hooked! amazing part update soon plz! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey definetely very intriguing..wow prem wif revenge. intresting, looking forward to reading more! update soon plzz😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
well it seems a nice FF..not nice but interesting and beautiful..but I have few doubts..yeah few silly ones..so pls can u clear it up for me??

1.whose wedding was it?Prem-Heer?were they married??
2.r Sanjana and Ashlesha both DJ's daughters??
..sorry I know u r going to update us with coming parts but still was very keen to know these things..but do continue..it seems very interesting n different..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow prem with revenge
update soon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow...it was a really mysterious part....a very different ff...waiting 4 the next 1...please don't make a delay

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