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Posted: 17 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: anushka10

hey anupama pls update ur FF
it is different and interesting
plsssssss do it soon yaar
did not get onething does prem loves sanjana or heer?
he even does not know that he spend night with heer
poor prem

hey
I am updating it in few min and thanks ur words will keep me gng😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: ashpush

wow dats a totally different ff really interesting
do cont soon
u hav our full support
n welcome 2 d forum

thanks😊
I wll certainly need all ur support since it is the first time i am writing a ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

What was she doing here????

After questioning herself this now a thousand times, she looked around the Conventional Hall trying to find some answers. Being a party in the " AMBALA'S Annual Business Meet" wasnt her idea of spending time actually. Looking around , her eyes caught Sanjana's who winked at her. Standing admist a group of men, dressed in a mini-denim skirt and a body hugging, deepcut tshirt, her elder cousin sister left all men wanting her. Though she felt embarrased by the behaviour of Sanjana but she knew better not to voice her opinion..

She moved her eyes from Sanjana to her chachi - Daljeet Maan. Daljeet stared at her beautiful daughter in awe but as she caught her eyes on her herself she turned back disapprovingly. Feeling slightly depressed after Daljeet's indirect rebuke, she found herself looking at Balwant -- her chacha. She was by far most attached to him.After her parents death he had been her support system when she had been blamed, insulted and rebuked by most people in Ambala. He loved her probably more than he loved his own daughter. Thinking about him bought a smile on her face..

"HEER"

She turned around at the mention of her name to look at her fiance --- Manmeet. Standing tall, goodlooking, Manmeet was Balwant's choice. Having made his name for his shrewd Business tactics Manmeet had fell in love with her and had asked her hand for marriage. Though she wasn't quite sure about the proposal. She had agreed for Balwant's sake.

" Come......I need to introduce you to my colleagues "

Heer got up from the chair and adjusted the pallu of her pink saree. She put her hands in Manmeets and they walked to where his associates were standing.After introducing her, Manmeet became busy with and Heer was left to stand with the ladies. She answered questions directed at her shyly. Though she smiled but her eyes reflected pain.. which went unnoticed by everyone present.

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He sat in a corner table watching his brother flirt with girls. Preet had been doing that since the evening had started. He took up a sip of coffee and looked at his parents Lalit and Gayatri Juneja engaged in a deep conversation with the Mittals. They were the best thing that had happened to him. Having them as his parents and Preet as his brother; he felt blessed. If only his parents wouldn't force him to get married. He was fed up with the marriage issue alltogether. Thankfully his parents had let him decide the girl.....which was being used as an excuse to postpone the wedding from happening.

"AMBALA's Annual Business Meet" and all his parents were asking him was look to at girls in the hall. He cast his glance here and there ---- girls dressed in skimpy outfits dint impress him. They had never and he knew they will never. Before choosing such a girl he would suicide?

He had always had an image of a girl in his mind. A simple yet beautiful girl was his dream. She would have love filled eyes and she would only belong to him by mind, body and soul. And he knew that though it was impossible to have imaginations turn into reality; the day he found such a girl he would for sure , by hook or by crook, make her his..

"PB"

Prem looked up to see Preet with a glint in his eyes. Convincing him to enjoy the party Preet walked Prem to the bar -- Prem's intention to talk to a forthcoming business man and Preet's -- to flirt with a hot chick he had just spotted.Both the brothers walked in a fast stride --- Suddenly Prem bumped into a girl resulting in her drink to fall and her landing safely in his arms.

Prem looked at the girl who had her eyes shut as she holded on to him tightly as if her whole life depended on him..

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Heer opened her eyes to look at the stranger holding her , saving her from falling. Why had she been in such a hurry to not notice where she was walking??Cursing herself she opened her eyes to feel the man's intense gaze on her. As she lowered her eyes the man lifted her slowly but his hands remained on her waist.

Mustering up all her courage , she looked up at him..His intense yet lovable eyes pore deeply into hers. His face radiated a healthy glow with a cute smile playing on his lips. Heer glanced down again trying to detach herself from his piercing gaze..

" I'm Sorry.......I dint see you.."

"Its ok!!"

Getting a satisfactory answer from him Heer turned around swiftly. As she walked to her table she closed her eyes. She had wanted to run away from him. Being in his arms had made her feel different and special at the same time. She knew if she wanted she could have stayed there for a little longer but then she would have lost herself in him!!!

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Edited by @nup@m@ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
hey there just read the prologue and now the first part.must say it is very interesting but quite differnet from the other ff i have read in this forum.ok so i have understood this by far,prem and heer actually feel something for each othe but am still confused as to why he married sanjana.well guess have to read on further to know na.well do update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
really the first part is interesting
did prem marry sanjana? why he is having feelings for heer after marriage? somewat confusing
i will read again and post comment on it
but first part is interesting
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
awesomeeee part do update soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
Fantastic part!
and now they've met each other!
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39

hey dt was gr8!

described beutifully..altho im still a little confused wif storyline..bt i guess dts wt makes it intrestin! im really lookin forward to next part!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey,

Glad you updated it...I was waiting for it .

looks like it's love at first sight for PH :) Can't wait to read further.


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