FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 35

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

fantastic loved it
preet prem ash scene nice
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Originally posted by: kimmu

Hailaa.. i missed so much..
*edited*

First of all, shush.. I know i take long... But i have two parts to comment on.. 😲

fine.....**keeping mouth shut**😛
I've already wished you and Eid Mubarak, but no biggie in saying it again. EID MUBARAK! 🤗 My eid sucked too, so don't worry. I was stuck with all these guys that 'knew' my brother. And aww... di... i know that promo gave me goosebumps. Heer's expression... ahhh... it really hurt. She waited for a guy for 14 years, and then when she got him, she lost him.. Forget all that, lemme just get to the comment now.. 😃

awww eid mubarak hon🤗........yes no comments on the promo plz😭😭

Part 10

Ahhh that must've really hurt Prem. When he was abou tot pick up the boy, Heer snatched him. What probably hurt him the most was that she was scared of him. But I guess Heer has a reason to be scared too. Where everyone had left her in her life, that baby came as an inspiration to live. Maybe if it wasn't for that baby, she would've given up on life a long time ago. And now she feels that Prem is back, to take her baby from her, what she doesn't know is he's here to take them both away from there world into his. 😍 Can't wait for that.. *sigh*

even i can't wait for that😳........great analysis of the circumstance👏😆

Aww... poor lil Pratham. (Love the name btw, i had to look up the meanings, and i got carried away and started looking up harshad and aditi too. Harshad means delighted, and Aditi means Boundles... perfect together no?.. oh and i had to look up prem and heer too... heer means self respect, and prem means affection.. AHH suits the characters SO well!) Sorry got carried away... anyways, the bond between the mom and son. *sigh* Do thy need say more? (its kimz-pear.. err.. you know shakes-pear.. and kimz-pear.. *cough, looks down* uhh.. bad joke.. )

yesh......symbolizes their 'first' love😳.......no u don't need to say more Mishh kimz-pear😆........

I can totally imagine lil Pratham. He's shoooo cute.. why wouldn't he be? He takes after his father after all.. ☺️ Can we pweese have a love story between Pratham and Ash's kid, which I'm hoping will be a girl... if its not. 😳 Then PLEASE.. do NOT take my idea in consideration.

hmmm request taken under consideration.........remember i m NOT ekta, so I DO CARE ABT MY READERS😃🤗

The way Prem realized that the kid was his... Wasn't it kind of obvious it was his, I feel like slapping Prem for that one sec. of doubt. Then again, i feel like giving him a HUGE hug for the pain he just recieved. The rejection he just recieved form the love of his life. The only reason of his life, which he will get back no matter what. AHHHH! I want Prem seducing Heer. ☺️ I was talking about that with Rinki yesterday.. ooh btw, she's like desperate to comment... but poor her, her comp's broken.

lemme justify him for that one sec of doubt, he was being overpossessive hon😳......remember the first shot, "I won't let anyone touch you after me......" 😳😳.......awwww this is for rinku🤗......i will be waiting for her feedback........😊

I have fallen in love with that dialouge. "that's when her love of 7 seconds had defeated her hatred of 7 life-times..." That has to be like one of the best dialouges ever. Show's how powerful love is, and how one ounce of love is enough to diminish kilo's of hatred.

awww i knew someone would catch it 😳.......glad u liked it hon......i wanted to make it sound real and original......😊

I could sense Heer's helplessness. She feels so.. whats the word. Yesh, insecure. She doesn't want her last hope to be taken away from her too. Pratham is really JUST like Prem. Prem puts his whole hand on Heer, while Pratham just uses his little chubby fingers. Juniors have to keep things junior-ish you know? Once again, I just love Heer-Pratham's relationship. That was a really deep scene... the way she said i love you to him.

i knowww.......the soft cute little chubby fingers are just adorable......i just love the feeling of a baby, when u hold them close to your heart, their soft skin against yours......awwwwwww......it feels sooooooo soothing........😊......No wonder why human is the best creature of Allah......mashallah.......😊

The second Flashback was awesome too. Prem's determination is SO HOOOTT.. ☺️ You started out with his suffocation, restlessness. He was so worried for her. How sweeet! This is what i love about love, you never know when it happens. And when it does, you can't stop it.. *sigh*.. I wanna fall in love... wait, do i? 🤔 Yes I do, imran khaaannn... ☺️ *cough* *cough*

🤣.......now lemme tell you a truth, I honestly do NOT believe in SUCH "LOVE"........they are good in fictions but not in REALITY

Veera, only there for like a moment, yet she was still so sweet. Poor girl's so sensitive... Prem made it worse for her, cuz she blamed herself anyway. But I loved how Prem recovered from angry-young-man to guilty-young-man. HEER! Where aree youu?? Get him away from this guilt, he's never going to forgive himself.

awwww thanks for liking it dear.....😃

I have to say this again. Prem's determination is SO HOT! ☺️☺️☺️

couldn't agree more😳😳😳

Oooh, surprise.. hmm wonder who... 🤔 Ok fine i know, shhh... 😆😆

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Part 11 (coming soon)

So I had a feeling it would be Preet and Ash, after all those are the only good friends Prem has. He has loads of other friends, but there all fake/plastic-y. I can't get over that plastic thing. 😆 Ahh but poor Prem, he felt to... rejected. Protecting his heart... that killed. I felt for Preet and Ash too, they had a party going on for him, and he came in all sad... I'm just waiting for happily ever after now.

😆.......plastic faces😉......awww i had to portray his misery this way......

I'll say it again. PLEASEEEEE.. make ash's baby a girl so Pratham can have an affair. ☺️

🤣.....lets see

Anyways, Preet and Ash are such good friends. You really don't find relations like these anymore. And every character in your fic is just so special, that you just can't help but adore each one. I've never seen 'villian' like the ones in drama's, so I find your fic to be much more realistic. And i simply adore it...

touched hon.........all my pleasure😊

You expressed Prem's pain so nicely. Hearing those painful words from his own voice.... Ahhh.. *hugs Prem* Prem is so luck to have friends like Preet, and a sis like Ash. I loved how Ash explained to a mentally numb Prem, who couldn't think straight, that Heer still loves him. I want to know his reaction. I want to see his determination coming back, and coming back like never before. AHHHHHH! Continue soon!.. 😃😃

awwww love you for the wonderful feedback hon.........now as i mentioned before, u will have to wait for the next one as i haven't started with it yet.............excuse???!!!!......busy busy busy with studies

Since the other comment was long, I tried to keep this short... Didn't want access to be denied from posting it. 🤣

you are too much man🤣🤣🤣

kimz

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

DIDZZZ!!!!!! im here hehe

so will be writing a long comment on the parts i missed, and the one i couldnt comment cuz of the computer crisis, anyway so give me some time kayz...its gnna be LONG!!! 😆

missed ya!

rinkz

ps- the story is going great!!! loved everything...ahhh prem!!! 😳😳

Originally posted by: desigurl_77

Really Gud👍🏼