FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 33

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!👏

awesome as always
nice cont soon... asap

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesome as always
nice cont soon... asap

Originally posted by: tania86

awwww cutie i am not going to finish it in haste though, so relax........awww u don't need to apologize for sharing ur pain hon.........ami jani eta shunte idioter moto lagbe but the min i saw his fear for death, amar chokh diye paani porte chilo and i immediately closed the browser as i cudn't see him in that state......😭

kintu ami petition and email kora charbona.........i will keep bothering them until they bring him back......and plz try to contribute to the petitions and emails as well........we have to show them what this show ESPECIALLY harshad-additi mean to us........

luv

rehana

Originally posted by: fijiana

great part yaar just what was needed after a sad week. yeah even i feel reaaly down after the promo but heres to hoping for abetter week ahead(as if it is possible)do continue soon

Shot 11

"SURPRISE!!!" together they cheered up......indeed surprised to be welcomed by his best friends, Prem sadly smiled to them.......sensing the tension in him both moved back to let him step in........dropping the coat on the floor, he collapsed on the couch while rubbing his jawlines with both palms, trying to protect the heart inside him that was about to break down into pieces........before he knew, he completely broke down in front of them taking both Preet and Ashlesha by surprise......

Hailaa.. i missed so much..
*edited*

First of all, shush.. I know i take long... But i have two parts to comment on.. 😲

I've already wished you and Eid Mubarak, but no biggie in saying it again. EID MUBARAK! 🤗 My eid sucked too, so don't worry. I was stuck with all these guys that 'knew' my brother. And aww... di... i know that promo gave me goosebumps. Heer's expression... ahhh... it really hurt. She waited for a guy for 14 years, and then when she got him, she lost him.. Forget all that, lemme just get to the comment now.. 😃

Part 10

Ahhh that must've really hurt Prem. When he was abou tot pick up the boy, Heer snatched him. What probably hurt him the most was that she was scared of him. But I guess Heer has a reason to be scared too. Where everyone had left her in her life, that baby came as an inspiration to live. Maybe if it wasn't for that baby, she would've given up on life a long time ago. And now she feels that Prem is back, to take her baby from her, what she doesn't know is he's here to take them both away from there world into his. 😍 Can't wait for that.. *sigh*

Aww... poor lil Pratham. (Love the name btw, i had to look up the meanings, and i got carried away and started looking up harshad and aditi too. Harshad means delighted, and Aditi means Boundles... perfect together no?.. oh and i had to look up prem and heer too... heer means self respect, and prem means affection.. AHH suits the characters SO well!) Sorry got carried away... anyways, the bond between the mom and son. *sigh* Do thy need say more? (its kimz-pear.. err.. you know shakes-pear.. and kimz-pear.. *cough, looks down* uhh.. bad joke.. )

I can totally imagine lil Pratham. He's shoooo cute.. why wouldn't he be? He takes after his father after all.. ☺️ Can we pweese have a love story between Pratham and Ash's kid, which I'm hoping will be a girl... if its not. 😳 Then PLEASE.. do NOT take my idea in consideration.

The way Prem realized that the kid was his... Wasn't it kind of obvious it was his, I feel like slapping Prem for that one sec. of doubt. Then again, i feel like giving him a HUGE hug for the pain he just recieved. The rejection he just recieved form the love of his life. The only reason of his life, which he will get back no matter what. AHHHH! I want Prem seducing Heer. ☺️ I was talking about that with Rinki yesterday.. ooh btw, she's like desperate to comment... but poor her, her comp's broken.

I have fallen in love with that dialouge. "that's when her love of 7 seconds had defeated her hatred of 7 life-times..." That has to be like one of the best dialouges ever. Show's how powerful love is, and how one ounce of love is enough to diminish kilo's of hatred.

I could sense Heer's helplessness. She feels so.. whats the word. Yesh, insecure. She doesn't want her last hope to be taken away from her too. Pratham is really JUST like Prem. Prem puts his whole hand on Heer, while Pratham just uses his little chubby fingers. Juniors have to keep things junior-ish you know? Once again, I just love Heer-Pratham's relationship. That was a really deep scene... the way she said i love you to him.

The second Flashback was awesome too. Prem's determination is SO HOOOTT.. ☺️ You started out with his suffocation, restlessness. He was so worried for her. How sweeet! This is what i love about love, you never know when it happens. And when it does, you can't stop it.. *sigh*.. I wanna fall in love... wait, do i? 🤔 Yes I do, imran khaaannn... ☺️ *cough* *cough*

Veera, only there for like a moment, yet she was still so sweet. Poor girl's so sensitive... Prem made it worse for her, cuz she blamed herself anyway. But I loved how Prem recovered from angry-young-man to guilty-young-man. HEER! Where aree youu?? Get him away from this guilt, he's never going to forgive himself.

I have to say this again. Prem's determination is SO HOT! ☺️☺️☺️

Oooh, surprise.. hmm wonder who... 🤔 Ok fine i know, shhh... 😆😆

Part 11 (coming soon)

So I had a feeling it would be Preet and Ash, after all those are the only good friends Prem has. He has loads of other friends, but there all fake/plastic-y. I can't get over that plastic thing. 😆 Ahh but poor Prem, he felt to... rejected. Protecting his heart... that killed. I felt for Preet and Ash too, they had a party going on for him, and he came in all sad... I'm just waiting for happily ever after now.

I'll say it again. PLEASEEEEE.. make ash's baby a girl so Pratham can have an affair. ☺️

Anyways, Preet and Ash are such good friends. You really don't find relations like these anymore. And every character in your fic is just so special, that you just can't help but adore each one. I've never seen 'villian' like the ones in drama's, so I find your fic to be much more realistic. And i simply adore it...

You expressed Prem's pain so nicely. Hearing those painful words from his own voice.... Ahhh.. *hugs Prem* Prem is so luck to have friends like Preet, and a sis like Ash. I loved how Ash explained to a mentally numb Prem, who couldn't think straight, that Heer still loves him. I want to know his reaction. I want to see his determination coming back, and coming back like never before. AHHHHHH! Continue soon!.. 😃😃

Since the other comment was long, I tried to keep this short... Didn't want access to be denied from posting it. 🤣

kimz

awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part but too short do update soon asap with long part.

wow!!!! rehana.....beautiful part!!!! loved it....😳loved Prem's excitement while thinking of his son....beautiful.....prem-ash-preet was also gr8