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Rehana86 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fijiana

loved it.love veera in this (i thought i would never say such nice things about veera)but i will repeat veera is awesome.and heers perfect description for mr cassanova: perfect jerk.now will be intersting to read more

awww.......thanks for the wonderful feedback dear😊

Originally posted by: lian

U dont have promise but please just try to post it soon as i cant wait for a long,Prem is thinking this all,who the 1st met,i want to see what ll happen when they ll meet at Present.

lol......lets see hon....last nite we came back around 11 at nite....n guess wut !!!..i started to work on the next part till 3 in the morning😲.......just got up now😳......so there is a possibility of posting the next part anytime today😛😉.......😆...so tell me where are you from, Dhaka??😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

*reserved*

will read it right now n comment asap!😳
damn...i was kinda late...ooops sorry di😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: kimmu

I'm late everywhere. *rolls eyes*

*edited*

Okay i'm back! HEY! I heard that mumbled finally... 😆😆

ehm ehm **looks away**😛

Loved how you started off, with Heer in Prem's arm and Prem getting lost. Awwww.... I found it funny how first he was admiring her and then he noticed that she wasn't admiring him. Oooh, huge Ego crusher, eh? The guy thats adored by so many females, is being practically ignored/thrown away from this simple girl who he somehow got attracted to. Loving the idea. ☺️
well i can't help myself from including my 'weird sense of humor'.......glad u got it😆😆😆

OMG Prem checking out Heer. Aaaah, I can't really imagine THE Prem doing that, but THIS prem can. So I could just see his naughty grin, and his eyes wandering around her body. AAAAAH, THIS Prem's gonna make me go crazy. 😍 I'm not plastic, would be like me? Do I get a Prem like this? I WANT THIS PREM! ☺️ Heer's lucky I like Premeer's chemistry. *crosses arms an pouts*
☺️......i knooowwwww.....isn't he HHHH...HOOO....HOTTTTTTT☺️

Loved how you showed both parts of the situation, and Heer thoughts. Made me crack up. 🤣 Like i could just imagine her baffled look infront of Prem, while he checked her out. Poor her, bet she felt like killing Veera right then. Getting to Veera, her entry... perfect timing! 😆😆 Loved how she changed her tone when she saw Prem. I don't know why I was thinking this, but was Veer ever interested in Prem the first time she saw him... she probably was. Tehehehehehe......
lol.....i still havn't thot of it......but Veera does admire her boss at some level......but not like those chicks who r after prem😉.....

Hehe, I could imaging the look on prem. I bet he was planning on kidnapping Heer or something. 🤣 And then Veera comes in between. Just love the way Prem talks to Veera, i'm sorry i just can't find Veera to be nive, so I like it when she's being scolded by Prem. Something I REALLY want to see. 😆😆
hehehehhee..........in this package her upper level is kinda cracked.....🤣

Prem's such a cool dude, resting against the pillar. Sorry couldnt' help it. 😆😆 Wait the only thing were missing is this. 😎
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Haila! He called her dumb! 😲 I guess he was provoking her to talk, so did she say that outload, or in her head? I think it was in her head, cuz Prem would be on the verge of strangling her, i think, if she said it outlouf. Oh and btw, what does M****.... I've been thinking of all the bad words i've ever known, but nothing starts with an M..... I'm sooooooo confused. 😆😆 RINKI HELP MEEEE!!! If I'm desperate enough to know, watch me google it. 🤣
he was and that did work, when she said "Excuse me Sir" before dragging veera to a corner😆.....the rest was in her mind😛........n the word is m--o--r--o--n😳.......moderators plz don't bann me😳

Anyways, loved how Heer was attracted to Prem in a sense, no matter how much she was hating him. Aaah, I really badly wanna know what happend between thim. Continue soon!!

that was really encouraging hon.........always compel me to write more😳.......thanks for the constant support dear........loved it
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rehana😊
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Posted: 17 years ago

Shot # 5


"Lets walk then" almost dragging Heer away from the large gate, Veera excitedly expressed her desire......."c'mon yaar.......look at the clear sky......the beautiful shiny stars and this cool breeze" gently hugging herself she looked at her friend with a pout, hoping to get her consent.......after waiting for almost 45 minutes for a taxi, she decided to take a walk with her friend so that both can enjoy the wonderful weather of this beautiful night.......even though it wasn't safe for any girls of their age to walk on the street at this late night, but noticing her friend's cute face, she didn't have the heart to disappoint her.......smiling back at her, Heer held Veera's hand, as both friends started walking home...
The sudden whistle from a jeep to their left made both of them aware of the situation, they might have to face any moment.....sharing a quick glace, both girls tried to ignore the comments that two men were passing on them.......the one in his mid 20's decided to make the first move, "Hey ladies!!!.......want a lift??!!!.."......being encouraged by his partner, the second one thought of stepping in, "...don't worry, we don't bite people....especially hotties like you....right Dheer??." winking at the girls, two of them shared a disgusting laugh.......not being able to take it anymore, Veera decided to give them a piece of her mind while kept going with her steps "....but barking dogs always bite people...."....her this statement did make the gang to get back at her.........pinching her friend to keep her mouth shut, Heer almost wanted to run from there while dragging Veera along with her......"shut up Veera!!!......lets go..."........before they could go any farther, the jeep took an instant turn to stop right infront of them, making the girls immediately move back a couple of steps.......
As the first one was about to get out of the jeep to answer the poor girl, the second one interrupted, "Hey Manmeet, wait man!!!....lemme show her how to bite people" saying that Dheer got off the jeep followed by Manmeet.......before they could take a step towards the girls, both the men immediately took 2 steps back due to the sudden appearance of a Mercedes, making a border between the girls and boys.......
Even though the party was held for the honor of him winning the new palace, but somewhere its emptiness was suffocating him, that's when Prem decided to go for a long drive........hoping to get some fresh air in order to release some stress, so that he can start breathing again......or rather surviving again......
Getting out of the black Mercedes, Prem indolently made his way to the front then leaning against the bonnet of his car, half sitting, he started to unbutton the sleeves of his shirt while offering help, "need any consultation dude???!!"........exchanging look with Manmeet, Dheer decided to answer the rich gentleman, "if it's free then, why not???" flashing a pathetic smile......taking out the lighter, he lit up the chancellor tobacco, then taking a puff to fully light up the cigarette, Prem looked at the men, "...hmm!!!......the first step to impress a girl is to compliment the source of her beauty....." advising the losers with a smirk, Prem turned back to the girls, who were trying to get over the shock of a high class personality giving directions to some cheap b*******.......
Slipping the left hand in his pocket while holding the cigarette with his right, he looked at Veera with a raised eyebrow and clenched jaw, showing his disapproval of her stupidity for walking on the street at this late night while throwing a stern look towards Heer for supporting her insensitive colleague......realizing their fault, both girls kept their gaze down, unable to meet his eyes......."good one......lets start with her mother then....." blurted out Dheer.......the only word he could never allow to be denigrated.......coming out from this git's mouth in such a way that he not only degraded the word, but also offended the purity of its' meaning......trying to control his rage, he smashed the litted cigarette in his fist.......
Feeling proud of his equal creepy pal, Manmeet took over the comment, "if she is like that then think about her mother......she must be a ho..." that was more than enough reagent to explode the reaction, when his turning back had showed Manmeet a complete upside down world as the guy felt a severe knock on his right face due to the strong force of the back of his metacarpophalangeal joint.......causing the victim to fall over his partner, who already felt close to death.......holding the person by his collar, Prem made it clear to the gang, ".....by source I meant heart......if I ever see you two anywhere near a woman, then I will change both history and geography of your faces......got that??.." almost throwing him back to the jeep, he looked at the girls, shouted "Get into the car right now!!"......None of the girls were ready to see any more violent side of their boss as they quietly followed his order......
Looking straight on the road, he was driving as he made up his mind to drop the girls at their respective places.....biting her nails, Veera was trying to control her fear that was giving her a very bad time at that moment while her friend just kept staring at the person through the looking glass......those eyes have something in them.......something hidden......something painful.......
see ya next weekend honey buns🤗.......
luv
rehana😊
Edited by tania86 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
reserved! i'm first!!!!!!..

*edit add*

I'll be back after i break my fast.. hehe.. 😳

*EDITED*

First of all, that was so quick! Aah i'm loving my weekends now, can't believe today's sunda.. i wish it was sunday.. ahhhhhh!..
Ufff, Veera veera veera... *sigh* This girl never learns does she? If only Heer knew how to to resist the puppy dog look... Well i know I can't either, thats why i snuck out with my friend once. Peer pressure, so bad! You should never give in, bad things happen... Like what happened with Veera-Heer.

I found it funny that you brought Dheer and Manmeet into this, now the only thing you were missing was Ratpal aka Rishab Rampal. I could see who was after who, Dheer with Veera and Manmeet with Heer. 🤣 I couldn't help but laugh at that part. I guess it was my way of avoiding the serious situation. 😳

AHHHHHHHHHHH! Woooooooopeeeeeeee! Prem's here. With his oh so cool dude ishtyle. 😎 And WTF he smokes. 😲 Nooooo.. i hate smokers, *sigh* looks like i have to adjust.
Why do i feel like where about to get into Prem's pain? Why do i feel like he had a terrible past thats going to hurt me to read? Why? Why? Why?
That sentence... 'so that he can start breathing again......or rather surviving again......' It killed me. It was like he didn't have anything to live for, like he was living... just because he was living. No purpose to live. I'm feeling Heer being the inspiration to his life, the purpose of his life? Pleaseee! I would love that so much. I can already imagine the adoration. 😍

YESH! He punched MM! Woohooo... aah that was like double khushi. I want Veera to get scolded, again. Muahahaa... Always putting Heer into trouble. His anger. ☺️ But at the end, you mentioned his pain, again. Ahhhhhhhhhhh.. this is killing me. What happened with him? TELL MEEE! I'm so desperate to knoww!

kimz
Edited by kimmu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow awesome update yaar...u made the part seem soo real! i luved it
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Posted: 17 years ago

Wow! amazing update,😳 tottally loved it, once again so much suspence!. Oh wow prem, wt a guy! 😳, way to go, eagerly waiting for next update!

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Posted: 17 years ago
Manmeet-Dheer?what a pairing?and what can be expected from the weirdos right?stupid stupid people!!ahh..but Prem dropped by to Heer-Veera's rescue..aur unhe koi aur waqt nahi mila walk ke liye??but it's good they took that walk..umm😳for obvious reasons..it was really nice..now the question is..y is Prem sad?looking forward to next update!!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sonali09

wow awesome update yaar...u made the part seem soo real! i luved it

glad to know that😊.......

Originally posted by: ruexangel

Wow! amazing update,😳 tottally loved it, once again so much suspence!. Oh wow prem, wt a guy! 😳, way to go, eagerly waiting for next update!

i knowww man, this prem is killing me with his admirable attitude😳.....glad u loved it😊
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rehana
Edited by tania86 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ranrags

Manmeet-Dheer?what a pairing?and what can be expected from the weirdos right?stupid stupid people!!ahh..but Prem dropped by to Heer-Veera's rescue..aur unhe koi aur waqt nahi mila walk ke liye??but it's good they took that walk..umm😳for obvious reasons..it was really nice..now the question is..y is Prem sad?looking forward to next update!!

lol.....ain't i gr88 in making pairs😛???.........prem was rather angry than sad di.......but in his anger, the pain was still noticed by Heer through his eyes.........thanks for the wonderful feedback di......always appreciated😊
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rehana

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