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Posted: 17 years ago
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Scene 1
Prem Heer return home. Prem goes 2 Veera's room. Veera is still awake.
"Veera" Prem calls out in his stern voice.Veera feels her brother knows the secret. She gives him a smile trying 2 pretend normal.
"Tum aaj Rishabh se milne gayi thi?"Prem asks looking straight into her eyes. Veera is unable 2 face him.
"Woh bhaiya.."
"Haan ya naa..."Prem has his fists clenched.
"Nahin..."Veera says rather confidently thinking that Prem will believe her.
Prem gives her a tight slap on her face.Veera is stunned, she has tears in her eyes.
"Aaj nahin rokunga tumhe rone se....in aansuon ne mujhe gumrah kiya hai.Tumne aaj sirf mera vishwas nahin toda tumne aaj mera dil toda hai."
"Bhaiya..."Veera starts crying.
"Bhaiya?Apne bhai se itni badi baat chupaayi tumne.Bauji ko kya jawaab doonga main. Tumhaari shaadi tay ho chuki hai aur tumne ek baar bhi mujhse apne dil ki

baat batana zaroori nahin samjha...Tumhe ye lagta hai naa ki Rishabh tumse bahut pyaar karta hai. To lo suno apne pyaar ki dastaan..."
Prem has the conversation recorded on his mobile as Heer had accidentally received the call.Veera finds it hard 2 believe it.
"Bhaiya mujhe nahin pata bhabhi yeh sab kyun kar rahin hai.Aakhir maine unka kya bigada hai?
"Heer ke khillaf ek aur shabd aur aaj mujhse bura koi nahin hoga,samjhi tum.Mera pyaar itna kamzor nahin ki kisi gair ke kahne par main Heer ko galat man loon."
"To aaj main aapke liye gair ho gayi."
"Tumne to mujhe woh chot di hai Veera jo shayad mere gair bhi nahin dete."Prem pulls Veera's hands & drags her out of her room.
"Kahan le jaa rahein hain mujhe,"Veera tries 2 remove her hand 4m Prem's grip.
He drags her through the corridor.
"Prem ruko.."Heer's voice make him halt.
Veera gives a digusting look 2 Heer.
"Heer aaj tum mat bolo hum dono ke beech mein,aaj main dikhana cahta hoon ise ki yeh jiske peeche bhaag rahi hai us insaan ki asliyat kya hai."
"Magar...."
But Prem doesn't stop.
Scene 2
Rishabh is sitting in his mansion telling his servant.
"Tumhe ek advice deta hoon, apni life mein ladkiyon ko kabhi seriously mat lena,aur kabhi kisi ek ladki ke peeche mat bhaagna kyonki ek jaati hai toh doosri aati

hai.Ab jaise abhi Veera gayi toh uski jagah doosri aa gayi.Aur Heer, usse badi bewakoof ladki maine aaj tak nahin dekhi. Mujhse Veera ki sifarish karne aayi thi,us

ladki ki jo Heer se nafrat karti hai.So silly.Agar Rishabh Rampal seriously pyaar karne lagaa toh phir business kaun karega.."RR gives a cunning smile.
"U r such a big dog.."Veera's voice has Rishabh caught off guard.
"Tum?"Rishabh has a puzzled look 2 c Veera there.Veera looks lost & cheated.
"Better late than never."Rishabh tells her with a cunning smile.
"Tumne samajh kya rakha hai mujhe?"
"A puppet in my hands"RR answers.
"Oh just shut up.Main iska badla zaroor loongi."
"Badla?"Rishabh bursts out in a loud laughter.
"Pehle toh yeh socho ki tum Mr. Lalit Juneja ko kya jawaab dogi. Jab woh apni dear daughter ka yeh video dekhenge."RR plays the video of their rain scene.
"I know how 2 play my cards right."
"I hate u.Tum kuch nahin bataoge Papa ko."
"Really? Theek hai magar ek shart par. Tumhe Heer ko galat saabit karna hoga?"
"Mere zinda rehte to yeh kabhi nahin ho sakta."Prem enters.Veera hugs him & starts crying loudly.
Prem strokes her head like a father 2 a child.He holds her face in his hands & wipes her tears.
"Ab bas, chalo yahan se, main hoon naa. Main samjhaoonga Bauji ko."
Scene 3
Prem returns home.Gayatri is still awake.
"Kahan gaye they itni raat ko Prem."Gayatri's voice in the dark startles Prem.
"Woh maa Veera apni dost ke yahan thi naa,to use le aane gaya tha."
"Magar Veera toh tum logon ke saath aayi thi naa."
"Haan maa magar woh apni dost ke yahan apna mobile bhool gayi thi. Mujhe laga itni raat ko Veera ka akele jaana sahi nahi hoga is liye main bhi uske saath chala

gaya."
"Kitni parwah karta hai tu uski."Gayatri goes 2 sleep.
Veera overhears the conversation.Prem enters Veera's room.Veera is not there.He is worried. He returns 2 his room & sees Veera with Heer.
"Mujhe maaf kar dijiye bhabhi....maine aapki ek nahin suni aur aaj.."Veera starts weeping like a child.Heer hugs her,& looks at Prem with a satisfied look in her

eyes.Prem looks at Heer with a smile & tears in his eyes.He slowly enters the room & gently strokes Veera on the head.
"Aaj se main tumhaari Bhabhi nahin tumhaari didi hoon."Heer wipes Veera's tears.

Luv u all frnds the optimist in me forces me 2 write this.Hope u like this!!!!


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmmmmmmmmmmmmm
i hope that really happened and prem say you will marry on the same day just after two days i will be so happy i just hope it really happen some how as this is all what we all are waiting for . JUST PRAY every one What my friend had written come true i will be so happy i can not tell you
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I hope this comes true!! Excellent!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ihope that really happened and prem say youwill marry on the same day just after two days i will be so happy i just hope it really happen some how as this is all what we all are waiting for . JUST PRAY every one What my friend had written come true i will be so happy i can not tell you
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It was excellent.Very realistic.I wish they had followed this.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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excellent !!!.......Thank you soooo much...
Oh how i wish this is what we get to watch next week
Edited by angel82 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oohhhh i thought there was some type of promo showing that! lolz
but i like this even more!!
aaah gosh if only that would actually happen!
awesome wrk yaar!
:]
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Posted: 17 years ago
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I wish it comes true😍😍
Nice & Excellent P👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww thats SO good!
amazing work yaar!
really really good!! 👏
- Deena
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Posted: 17 years ago
#10
amazing mind blowing
hope come true

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