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Posted: 17 years ago
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i old days story nice idea . hope you up date soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#52
Hey Naadia..it was really a good start..waiting to read the rest..pls update soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#53
lovely awsome & brilliant
i really loved the song phele nasha😃😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#54

college days.....love......wowwwwwwww......thanks dear...u r taking all of us to 3years back....waiting for ur updatee........

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Posted: 17 years ago
#55
awesome
can't wait for update

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Posted: 17 years ago
#56

Kab? Kaise ?Kaha?
jaane kaise, kab kahaan, ikaraar ho gayaa

hum sochate hee rah gaye aaur pyaar ho gayaa

gulashan banee galiyaan sabhee

fool ban gayee kaliyaan sabhee

lagataa hain meraa seharaa taiyyaar ho gayaa

hum sochate hee rah gaye aaur pyaar ho gayaa

tum ne humei bebas kiyaa

dil ne humei dhokhaa diyaa

uf tobaa jeenaa kitanaa, dushwaar ho gayaa

hum sochate hee rah gaye aaur pyaar ho gayaa

Their 1st meeting It was Heer's 1st exam in 12th grade
&she found it difficult the exam will start after some hour,
so she sat in the campus & trying to sort out the problem. She was in white tops & black jeans,
Her hair was tied by her pen & she was disturbed as she cant understand, Suddenly some of her question
paper flew out& it fall down in front of some1's foot & it was non other then Prem, she looked at him
He took the papers & look on it, Heer stand up& go toward Prem

Heer: My papers???

Prem: hhmmm so do u need any help (Prem is very shy & calm he didn?t talk too much but don?t know why he asked Heer this question

Heer was talking to herself, "So He thought he could help me? What should I do? Should I took his help?" then she give a quick reply

Heer: No Thanks

Prem: OK &was going from there

Heer need his help but she said no& was upset that Prem didn?t insist to help her

Then Heer

Prem: Wait! Wait yes I need your Help.

Prem Stopped & Her walks to him &tell her problem.

Then Prem very cleverly sort out the problem & made the thing very easy to her.Heer was very happy
she thanked him & the bell ring& she run.
When the exam finished her was searching for Prem, Prem was in his class, Heer wait for him.

The class finished
after an hour she was waiting. Prem got out from his class

Heer: Hi

Prem: Tom?

Heer: Remember u helped me at morning

Prem: Yes I have. So how was your exam? Did my advice helped??

Heer:Yes,main kia kaho my exam was superb, Thanks to you thank u so much(just like a kid)

oh,bato bato mein,i forget to tell u my name, I am Heer & you?

Prem :I am Prem.

Heer: Nice to meet you& thanks once again & she hugged him

Prem was shocked all of a sudden by Heer act so he didn?t back her but just up his hands.

After 14 days (on Prems Collage building)

Heer: PREM!! PREM!! PREM!!

Every1 was shocked by watching Heer like this coming to him, Prem was lil embarrassed as he
is known as a quite & serious boy & Heer was just his opposite.

Prem (in lil angry voice): What Happened now??

Heer: my exam results were out & you know what mujhe Agrade mila thanks to you, my mom dad was very happy&
I told them about you & they want that u teach me,mujhe pata hai tum tutions bhi lete ho

Prem: I need time to think about it.

Heer: Ok take your time I m waiting.

Prem: Not now give me your num I will info u.

Heer: Ok & gave him Heer num

Prem was thinking not to teach her as she was so childish & he always shocked by her sudden reactions

but at the same time he need some money as well so he said yes to her & going to her home to

Teach her.

Everyday they met & Prem taught Heer, her lessons, in a short time they become very close friend

U can say best friends. Though Heer has had many friends, Prem is her true friend & for Prem

Heer was his only Friend. Now Prem didn?t feel irritated by her act, Heer also brought changes
to him now he started to smile & Heer also bring some positively in Prem.

Farewell of Prem: Now Pre had completed his post graduation & have to leave the collage Heer was upset.
Now she won?t meet Prem in this collage. Tears rolling down from her eyes. Prem wipe them & said

Prem: Silly girl! main thori teri zindagi se ja raha hu,main to bas is collage ko chor k ja raha hu & i will

Be there with u forever

Heer hugged Prem tightly, was it friendship or Love? What they both don?t know about their

Internal feelings.

Prem got a very good job & he was happy with it, he become very busy but he has always time for Heer

When ever Heer called Prem, Prem was there for her. Soon Prem realized that He is in love with

Heer, He was very happy & He wants to propose her. He called her & said he want to give her a treat from his 1st salary. Heer said yes to him & they meet. Heer was in a full white salwar kamiz, she was

Looking simple but very beautiful, Prem was in Black, but there were a spark in his eyes.

There were many questions roaming on Prem?s mind. Heer just looking at him & waiting to hear something

From Prem

Prem: Heer, i want to say something, but 1st u promised me u wont mind

Heer: No I wont, go ahead

Prem: Heer,Jab se tum meri zindagi mei ai ho,tumne is bejan sharir mein ek jaan dal di

Mera naam Prem mere ma/bauji ne rakha tha par iska sahi matlab samjhaya hai tumne,

&now I feel I cant live with out you& want to spent my rest of life with you ,I really love you.Kab?kaise

Kaha?nehi janta bas itna janta hu I really love you, will u marry me?

Heer(with tears on her eyes):Is baat ko kehne ke liye tumne itna waqt laga dia, infact I also
love u.

They both have "Khushi K Anssu on their eyes & then hugged each other. After his un-official proposal

He told his parents about it, His Parents also dont have any objection of it, they got married
.

In Male Voice:

Tare Hai Barati Chandni hai ye barat

Satho phere honge ab hato mei leke hat

satho phere honge ab hatho me leke haat

Jevaan Sathi Hum diya aur batti hum-2

In Female Voice:

Tare Hai Barati Chandni hai ye barat

Satho phere honge ab hato mei leke hat

satho phere honge ab hatho me leke haat

Jevaan Sathi Hum diya aur batti hum-2

With in a month the got married .they are happily married couple .enjoying ever moment of their life .

Do leave your comments as this is some one first try it just takes one min to write .it will give my friend encouragement please you guys cannot feel even one sentence count a lot thank you my dear 🤗friend

Edited by pisces26 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#57
awww..so so so sweet yaar..wow what an amazing love story yaar..dil kush kush hogaya..really I would want to know who on this forum have had such a beautiful love story..I really wish both of them a very happy married life..ahh..so nice..and also I'm waiting for other true story now..hope I'm not pressurising u..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranrags

awww..so so so sweet yaar..wow what an amazing love story yaar..dil kush kush hogaya..really I would want to know who on this forum have had such a beautiful love story..I really wish both of them a very happy married life..ahh..so nice..and also I'm waiting for other true story now..hope I'm not pressurising u..

thanks for replying dear 🤗 i feel very sad when they dont reply
let me up date 10 stories you will sure know the name of this story writer
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pisces26

thanks for replying dear 🤗 i feel very sad when they dont reply

let me up date 10 stories you will sure know the name of this story writer


I'm regretting my own idea of 10stories yaar..really..I'm very eager to know the writers now..ha ha so silly of me I know..😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ranrags


I'm regretting my own idea of 10stories yaar..really..I'm very eager to know the writers now..ha ha so silly of me I know..😆

now you have to wait i have next 2 stories in hand and 2 we are working on it will be seven then we need 3 more so 7 more weeks you have to wait😉

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