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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello Naadia..looking forward to this story..pls jaldi update karo..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice promo!
Ishq hua is one of my fave songs! Lol! ?xXx?
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So Love Is In The Air😍

Hope soon u ll update it my dear😳

looking forward
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Posted: 17 years ago
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update soon
ishq hua i am already imagine prem heer

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Posted: 17 years ago
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4 story promo
Love Hua/Ishq Hua
Heer is a tomboy, not like other girls, always behaves like a boy, stubborn, brave but very caring about her family.

Heer's Family: In Heer's family 3 more people lived.

Mother: Very sweet, caring & also worried for her daughter's marriage.

Father: Sweet, caring, friendly &always supports his daughter's side.

Younger Sister: She is sweet, simple, but not like Heer. She believes in Love & want to live in her dream world.

Prem is a responsible, mature, calm & quiet by nature. He also the elder son of his house, he is also very caring for his family. but, he had fallen in love and had lost his love 2yr ago. And from this incident he become depressed & forgot to live his life normally.

Prem's Family: Prem has a little family like Heers. Mom, dad & younger brother.

Mother: Like all other mother she is also very sweet, loving, caring & worried for her children. She is very friendly & understanding.

Father: Pem's Father is lil strict but kind hearted love his family & know about his responsibilities very well.

Younger Brother: Last but not the least, Prem's younger brother he is very sweet but naughty. He is the apple eyed of the family (im lil confused abt this phrese hope u ll understand) & he loves his family & Prem the most, He can do anything for his brother's happiness.

Lets come to the story….

Heer is mature & grown up girl, so her family is thinking about her marriage, but as we know she dont want to get married. So for this reason every day she had an argue with her mom & at last she wins…

Heer's sister is in love with… Whom?????? any guesses??? with Prem….brother of course & they both want to get married but do have the same problem their elders r not getting married.

One day they both decide to talk to their parents about their relationship. So they do both of the family dont have any objection, but their problem was the same but still they decide to meet.

So Heer's Parents invite Prem's parents to their home.

Heer's mom told Heer & her younger sister to stay at home some guest will come to visit. But heer had a football match that day &no one can stop her to go but she promised to come on time.

6:00 pm the guest arrived…


Prem also come with his parents. Heer was not at home, Heer's Parents seated them & they talk about the reletionship. while they r talking Heer entered, She was sweating her clothes were dirty & therw was some mud on her face & her nose.

Prem's parents were shocked to see a girl like this…


Heer: Namaste

Prem's mother: Namaste, Beta tumhara naam kya hai?

Heer: mai Heer

Prem's Mother: Kia tum Meher ki choti behen ho.

Heer(laughing): No mai Meher ki bari behen Ho

Prem's Mother(in shocked look): so u must b playing with ur kids. where is ur husband???

Heer(again laughing): Husband?? Children? No aunty meri shaddi nehi hui,abhi to mai khud 1 bachi hu.

Heer's answer made gayatri lil upset but she become surprised when she see Prem was smiling at Heer.

She was so glad that after 2year she saw her son smiling she was thinking, Is ladki mei koi bat to zaror hai!!jisne mere bete k chehre par itne salo k bad hasi lotai,i cant let her go like this. I have to do something about it. Then she cleverly handle the matter & told Heer's Parents they have to think about it & then ll inform.

After reaching home when lalit asked about Gayatri's sudden behavior, she explain the matter to lalit at 1st lalit was not agree with gayatri's decision but so soon, he agreed as he also want to see Prem Happy.

Now they both go to Prem & talked.

Gayatri: Prem beta, tujhe to pata hai ki tere shaddi se pehle hum Preet ki shaddi nehi karwa sakte, to mai aur tere bauji chahte the ki tu shaddi karle.

Prem: Maa aap to sab janti hai na,i dot want to get marry aap mere liye Preet ki shaddi mat rokiye. Let him get marry to his lady love.

Lalit: Prem beta, dekh baath sirf humari nehi balki samajh ke bare me bhi soch log kia kehenge. bare bhai se pehle chote bhai ki shaddi??

after some argue Prem agreed to get married to tht girl which ll b choosen by his parents.

Heer's Place…

Phone ringing, Meher received it.

Meher: Hello Namaste, Apko kise bat karni hai

from the other side Gayatri's voice flashed, Meher get nervous & said,

Meher: Na… Namaste auntyji aap 1minute hold kijiye mai Maa ko bolati hu

Teji: Namaste Parjai Ji, Kaise phone kia??

Gayatri: Dekhiye Hume apki chotti beti ka rishta manjur hai, magar

Teji: Magar kia parjaiji, Ghabraiye nehi bol dijiye apko jo bhi bolna hai

Gayatri: Aap to janti hai log kitni tarha tarha ki bate karenge agar unhe pata chala ki aap ki bari beti Heer Ki shaddi se pehle choti ki ho rahi hai, to hum apki bari beti ka haat Apne bare bete Prem K liye Chahiye, agar apko koi ait raz naho to hum apki dono betiyoko aapne ghar ki bahu banana chahte hai.
Teji(In Happy & excited voice): Ji uske liye mujhe Heer&Unke bauji se baat karni hogi.

Gayatri: Thik Hai hume apke jawab ka intezar rahega.

Teji narrate all the conversation to Balraj & Balraj said, "if Heer dont have any objection then we can say yes to the proposal, But Heer dont want to get marry to any1,

Heer: Kia Shaddi karna Zarori Hai?? kia mai ap logo pe bojh banga hu???

Balraj: aisi koi bat nehi hai beta

Teji: Yehi duniya ka dastur hai,rab ka banaya hua niam,koi bhi beti apne Maa Bap pe
Bojh nehi hoti par use ek na ek din apne ghar ko chor k sasural tojana hi hota hai

Heer had tears on her eyes, Meher come to the spot&said
Meher: Didi maine apse aaj tak kuch nehi manga, aj pehli bar kuch mangne ja rahi hu, Mujhe mera pyar lauta dijiye.uske bina mai nehi jee sakti. Saying this Meher tried to suicide, when Heer stopped Her & then slapped her

Heer was crying &said yes to the proposal then Meher hugged her & said sorry for her deed.

So it was finalised after 2month Prem-Heer & Preet-Meher ll get marry together

&this 2month was the most beautiful & memorable journey for Prem Heer. which had changed themselves & their lives forever.

Heer was not happy as her decision was not taken by her heart, She just hate to think about to love some1 & spent her whole life with that person, How it is possible?? How Meher want to spent her whole life with that Preet, Y mom is living her life with dad from so long, She ask to herself. She Added Prem??? that statue who always keep silent & i have to spent my whole life.

Hmmmmmmmm

Prem is thinking she is not like an ordanary girl, she had something, Y mo choose her for me & Y dont i object about it, M i happy with it?? Neither happy nor sad I'm like ok. but before marriage i have to spent some time with her......

So Prem request his mom to fixed a meeting with Heer. So She talked to Teji & they agreed for that.

Heer's room…

Teji: Aj Sham Prem Tumhe Bahar le jane k liye araha hai, get ready

Heer: Im not going anywhere, told him to not waste his time.

Teji: Heer this is not done, after some day u ll b his wife & u r behaving like a stubborn kid!!!

Hee: U told me to get married so I'm getting but not ll go with that guy

Teji: HEER!!!!

then Balraj enters & convince Heer,

Heer: Ok i ll go only for dad but i ll not wear a salwar suit /saree & this time u cant force me

Heer is ready, she weared a blue jeans black top. Prem arrived they both start for their 1st trip.

On car…

Prem: R u feeling bored

Heer: Wow!! u can talk I'm shocked

Prem just smile

Heer: Can i turn on the player??

Prem: Yeah Sure.

Heer: Thanks by the way where r we going

Prem: Dont Knw,

Heer: What do u mean by that???

Prem: I didn't decide it, i just want u to take out so that we can talk

Heer: so what we ll talk about

Prem: about our life… Future & past, r u happy with this relationship???

Heer: NO, I'm not

Hearing this prem stopped the car. it was a lake side where the car stopped

Prem: so y u said yes??

Heer: Because of my family…

Prem: Same Here. i also dont want to get marry not only u but to any1

Now Heer shocked by hearing Prems statement.

Heer: So what ll b it??

Prem: We can start from friendship. so ll u b my Friend???

Heer: hmmmmmmmmm Yes y not. By the way y dont u want get married??

Prem: Because i love some1 else

Heer: to usse shaddi q nehi ki??

Prem: cos she ditch Me Y dont knw but i really loved her & she went with some1else

Heer: its really sad I'm feeling pity. but not for u but for that girl, maine tumhare sath jitna waqt guzara. jitna tumhare bare me suna mujhe laga k tum jis kisi ko bhi chahoge use khush rakhoge.
Prem(smiles):thanks for the compliment.

Prem: Did u love any 1??

Heer: Yes i do & thats my family & my family's happiness lies on this marriage


Heer saw a Dhaaba near that place where Prem had stopped the car & insist Prem to have their dinner that Place so they do & then Prem dropped her home safely in time. That day Heer & Prem just become friends. but nothing else.

Preet want to take Meher out for some while but boths parents told them, "they can only go out if Heer & Prem also go with them, so Preet convince Prem & Meher ofcourse Heer.

Then the 2couple go out together but Preet Meher left Prem Heer in a caf & went alone, they told they ll join.

Prem Heer in a hour, now Prem Heer was alone there nothing have to do

Prem: if u dont mind, kia mai apne office ka kam yaha kar sakta hu???

Heer: yeah sure,u carry on

Prem: Thanks

When Heer got to know about Prem's Project she also tried to help him, which made his work easier & faster prem was glad that Heer can manage it so well. Hours passed Preet Meher Arrived.

Preet:Ye kia bhai, Humne ap dono ko yaha akele chora socha u ll have some good time par ap to yaha kam leke bath gaye, thats not fair.

Prem: Preet tu janta hai na ye project kitna important hai

Heer intruppted

Heer: Humne samaye ka sahi istemal kia, what wrong

Preet: Yelo Bhabhi Bhi bhai ki tarha boring hai,..

They all laugh…

When Prem was dropping them home Prem said, if she could come to his office tomorrow morning. He need her help for this project & Heer said yes.

Next day Heer went to Prem office & Helped Him. they were working like this from couple of days.

It was Heer's 5th day she didn't sleep last night so she was feeling sleepy & got slept.

Prem was not in the cabin.

When Prem arrived, he was just amazed to see his sleeping beauty in her dreams. She was looking so pure & innocence her hair was opened & Prem saw Heer opened Hair for the first time. He felt like his heart beats get faster & its felt different as he realised that he is in love 1ceagain.

background song plays

Jaane Kaise Shab Dhali, Jaane Kaise Dil Khila
Jaane Kaise Kab Kahaan, Chal Pada Yeh Silsila
Meri Aankhon Ko Yeh Kaisa Manjar Mila
Tere Har Naksh Mein Bas Khuda Hi Khuda
(tera Chehra Sanam Ik Rubaayi Si Hai
Mere Dil Jism-o-jaan Pe Tu Chaayi Si Hai) - 2

Betaabiyo Ki Shaamo Sehar Se
Na Tha Main Waakib Dard-e-jigar Se
Gujra Nahi Tha Main Toh Kabhi Bhi
Pyaar ki Dilkash Raahegujar Se
Deewaanagi Ki Yeh Intehaan Hai
Har Chehre Mein Chehra Tera Hai
Saari Duniya Teri Parchaayi Si Hai
Mere Dil Jism-o-jaan Pe Tu Chaayi Si Hai
Tera Chehra Sanam Ik Rubaayi Si Hai
Mere Dil Jism-o-jaan Pe Tu Chaayi Si Hai
Jaane Kaise Shab Dhali, Jaane Kaise Dil Khila
Jaane Kaise Kab Kahaan, Chal Pada Yeh Silsila

Teri Kashish Ka Jaadu Ajab Hai
Har Waqt Mujhko Teri Talab Hai
Yuun Hi Nahi Main Besudh Huva Hoon
Iss Pyaas Ka Toh Koi Sabab Hai
Tere Siva Na Abb Koi Armaan
Abb Jindagi Hai Tujhse Meri
Bin Tere Har Jagah Tanhaayi Si Hai
Mere Dil Jism-o-jaan Pe Tu Chaayi Si Hai
Tera Chehra Sanam Ik Rubaayi Si Hai
Mere Dil Jism-o-jaan Pe Tu Chaayi Si Hai
Jaane Kaise Shab Dhali, Jaane Kaise Dil Khila
Jaane Kaise Kab Kahaan, Chal Pada Yeh Silsila
Meri Aankhon Ko Yeh Kaisa Manjar Mila
Tere Har Naksh Mein Bas Khuda Hi Khuda
(tera Chehra Sanam Ik Rubaayi Si Hai
Mere Dil Jism-o-jaan Pe Tu Chaayi Si Hai)

Prem come back from his Dream as Heer wake up.

Heer: Oh sorry pata nehi kab meri ankh lag gai

Prem: Its ok, u need rest, lets go i ll drop u home

that day Prem dont want to let His love to go but he was helpless.

Next Day Prem was very glad as they got the project on which Heer & He was working

He was so happy & excited that He hugged Heer tightly as she entered to his cabin

Heer was shocked & Prem was lil embarrassed as he felt what he had done, He said sorry to Heer & tell Her the reason of his strange behavior, now heer was also very happy to know that their hardwork had successed. then Prem asked her to continue her job but Heer refused saying…

Heer: Ek dost ko dosre dost ki madat ki zarorat thi that y im here but now i dont want to continue. but i ll b there whenever u need my help. Prem smiles.

Teji&Balraj were worried about Heer & Prem reletion as they felt tht Heer is still not comfortable. So they always find excuses to made them close.

Oneday Heer went out with her old friends & Teji request Prem to pick her up from her friends place.

Prem went & for the 1st time Heer's Friend saw Heer's would be husband & they were flarting with Him for the 1st time Heer felt jealous but Y?? she asked to herself but didnt get any answer.

It was Gayatri & Lalit's 35th wedding anniversary this time they want to spent this day with their new relatives & with 2 lovely daughter-in-laws, so they decided to went for a picnic in their farm house

They reached the place they enjoy the day, inn the evening they planned to play a football match.

They were playing when sudden rain falls every 1 went into the house but two people left on the field to play in rain & yes it was Heer & Prem.

They were playing the game was very excited

Heer slipped in the wet grass & fall in Prem now Heer was lost on his passionate eyes & as a result. She defeat by Prem, that day she didnt lose the game but her heart to Prem .

Now as Her felt that she is in love with Prem she wants to bring some changes to herself. Her parents was surprised but also happy now they reassure that Heer ll b happy with Prem, Heer now trying to know about Prems Like Dislikes from his mother Gayatri told her to wear a saree, it was difficult for her but she want to try so by teji & Gayatri's Helped she wear a saree for the 1st time, When Heer entered in the hall wearing a sky blue chiffon saree Prem cant control him to stare her, but as

it was her 1st time she lose her balance & fall every1 cant stop their laughing as they didnt expect this kind of change from Heer, Heer felt embrassed she cried & run from the place.

Prem follows…

Heer. She was in the terrace & still crying

Prem: Heer!! stop crying hum to sirf mazak kar rahe the,or tum he kia zarorat thi ye saree pehen neki

Heer: Tum hare liye

Prem: Mere liye!!!! par Kyun??

Heer: Bcos...Bcos i love u & want to b perfect for u

Prem: U love me??? Me tooo & u dont have to change urself for me, tum jo ho jaisi ho mujhe bohat pasand ho.

They both xpress thier feelings then Prem K*** her & they hugged each other.

after a week they got married & now they r living their life happily…

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Posted: 17 years ago
#76
Wow, what a beautiful story! Short but very sweet!
Love vibs x
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Posted: 17 years ago
#77
aww that was beyond sweet..itni sweet stories humare saath share karogi..to diabetes ho jaayegi..sachi..Naadia u r great..and who is that lucky one to have such a romantic story..wah wah..gosh..that was really really good..I know I keep repeating the same thing..but can't help it yaar..too good!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#78
wow awesome...very interesting story...very filmy....Wishing this couple the very best in their life and may almighty always shower his blessing upon them forever...
hmm I guess i am getting eager to know who the authors of these wonderful real life stories are...
Angie
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Posted: 17 years ago
#79
That was a great story!
Loved it!
Looking forward to the next!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80
amazing story
so cute
loved it

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