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Posted: 17 years ago
#31
awwwwwww. 😊😳 that was such a swweeeet story!! so cuuute!! hope you post more stories like this soon. that was soo amazzinng!! 👏 and thanks a ton for the PM!!
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Edited by sakeena - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#32
aww that was sooo shweet!! i hope that whoever the gal is stays happy with her "prem" :]
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Posted: 17 years ago
#33
promo
2nd story
silent love
Use dhoondoon kahan, use paoon kahan

Kahani mohabbat ki hai mukhtesar
Gaya dil se phir woh na aaya idher
Kahani mohabbat ki hai mukhtesar
Gaya dil se phir woh na aaya idher
Kabhi koyi tha meri raahon ka ek humsafar
Kar gaya dil ka woh soona nagar
Koyi rasta na koyi dagar
Use dhoondoon kahan, use paoon kahan
Aaj main hoon yahan woh kahan
Kahani mohabbat ki hai mukhtesar
Gaya dil se phir woh na aaya idher
Kabhi koyi tha meri raahon ka ek humsafar
Use dhoondoon kahan, use paoon kahan
Aaj main hoon yahan woh kahan

Neele aasmaan pe badal chhaa rahein hain
Panchi apne ghar ko wapas jaa rahein hain
Use dhoondoon kahan, use paoon kahan
Aaj main hoon yahan woh kahan
Kahani mohabbat ki hai mukhtesar

Door parbaton pe phool khil rahein hain
Pyaar karne wale saath chal rahein hain
Use dhoondoon kahan, use paoon kahan
Aaj main hoon yahan woh kahan

Kahani mohabbat ki hai mukhtesar
Gaya dil se phir woh na aaya idher
Kabhi koyi tha meri raahon ka ek humsafar
Kar gaya dil ka woh soona nagar
Koyi rasta na koyi dagar
Use dhoondoon kahan, use paoon kahan
Aaj main hoon yahan woh kahan
Kahani mohabbat ki hai mukhtesar
Gaya dil se phir woh na aaya idher
Kabhi koyi tha meri raahon ka ek humsafar
Use dhoondoon kahan, use paoon kahan
Aaj main hoon yahan woh kahan
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Posted: 17 years ago
#34
Must b sad,waiting for the silent love,Love need No word to explain
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Posted: 17 years ago
#35
eagerly waiting for the 2nd story update
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Posted: 17 years ago
#36
ahh yeh hui na baat..ab jaldi jaldi doosra story post karo..achcha bachcha😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
baji plzzzz rite the story im soo eager to read.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
hi baji and shilpa di i just read ur 1st story and believe me iluved it.
real mein bhi aisa hota hoga cant believe this but it was amazing.
sooooooo beautifully written.
luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
sry for late reply
can't wait for 2nd story
loved it
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40

Silent love - a true story

Heer was a college student .Very simple, ordinary girl. She was very serious and mature. .

It all started as she used to stand in front of the row during the morning assembly.

One day her friend asked '' heer have you seen the new guy in college he is so handsome''.

Heer -'' I am not interested in guys ''

Friend - '' Oh how could you as ?..''

Heer just smiled '' so why are you asking me''

In assembly ground he entered and all girls fainted. He was so handsome ,any one could die for him.

Few days later , He was selected as an assembly host. As his voice and his style was out of the world.

Heer friend asked '' heer why don't you give me your place a class fellow as it is no use for you to stand in front you will see his feet.''

Heer ''ok take ''

but suddenly she saw her class teacher coming. She did not move as it was the order of her teacher that she should lead as all the rest were very non serious. . He came and stood at just 5 feet distance. He shouted on top of his voice '' get read for the national anthem''

Days passed by.. turned in to months.. daily he used to stand in front of her for 30 min.She used to see his feet and he her face. If any thing funny happened they used to smile .

One of Heer's friend fell in love with him as heer had a group of 6 girls they were always together . he use to see her . walk along her in break her other class fellow thought he is looking them .Season changed, they got so used to of each other if one is absent other use to feel .

It was the fare well party Heer and Prem were the hosts .

Heer's teacher ,'' plz my darling'' ,as she was her best student, '' go and help Prem I am not feeling well and all the other are so non serious they will not work .''

Heer ''Maam me? ''

Maam,'' yes you go he is there ''

Heer with double mind entered the hall. He was not expecting her.

Prem ,'' where is Maam ?''

Heer with a thirsty throat ,''she is not coming''

Prem,'' ok did she tell you what to do ?''

Heer , ''yes we will do it ''

Prem started looking out side the window. As it was very difficult moment for him. He heard her pulling the ladder . He turned around to help her, he move closer but she quickly said

Heer,?no I can do it ?

With a scary thought ,she climbed the ladder and started to hammer the nail.

Prem looking at her as she use to get down every time to pick up the nail .He had a cute smile on his face he walk close ready to catch her

Maam entered the hall.

Maam laughing, '' Heer you are scared of height then why are you climbing ''.

Heer,'' oh Maam''

Prem ,''come on get down''

He gave his hand

Prem,'' Maam the way she is doing I I think it will be our fare well.'' Laughing

He climbed and heer gave him the hammer. The ladder was old it was not baring his weight

Heer was holding the ladder as tight as she could. passing him nails ever time their hands touched each others . he internally started shaking ladder

Heer,'' please get down you hold I will do''

Prem , ''no I am doing''

Heer,'' you will fall down''

Prem,'' please give me the ribbon'' . She had to climb the ladder as he was acting as if he can not bend down again. Suddenly the ladder lost its balance . Prem jumped and hold her

Maam laughing, '' what you both are up to''

Maam '' Prem see her face''. Prem laughing.'' Go and bring some thing for her''.

Prem bought juice for her. He pulled a chair ,ask her to stand on it and pass things he gave his can to her too.

After an hour the hall was really different.

When other students came they were amazed to see that heer and prem did every thing.

Next day the function ,

Heer was very simple.She wore maroon dress .She wnet to change in her friend's house as she live near. Prem saw her going, he was roaming on road to see her .

Other friends and her teacher asked '' why you are so simple'' ... it was her first time wearing high heels.Prem kept on staring her time and again as she could feel it .

Both were their teacher's pet.

So they had to work together .

Prem entered the hall from back side.

Prem '' Mama, can i take your pic ''. Mama was standing and heer was sitting behind as she just finished her refreshment arrangement. . ''Ready Maam''.He turned the camara at the last moment and took heer's pic . . he took many like that and with a smile every time.

Next day

It was sport day . Heer was completing her note book sitting out side the lab on the stairs.

She heard prem shouting on top of his voice. He was in lab .

Heer went in ,Prem's face was red . A girl was shouting ,'' give me my picture you took that yesterday ''

Prem,'' are you in your sense I never took your picture''

He saw Heer standing at the door.

Prem , ''it was not your ,mind you .'' (He was about to hit)

Heer,'' please'' she threw her books and ran out to call Maam

'' Maam they are fighting'' , as she knew if it she will go to principal, if he hear he will kick prem out of the ...... .....xyz

Heer."Prem is very angry"

Heer ran back

Mama,"prem did you took pictures yesterday of some girl"

Prem,"yes"

Mama," give it to me"

Prem ,"no I will not "

Mama,"why'

Prem,"I promise you their picture is not there , jis kai hai . if she say once I will burn it in front of her I promise . and that girl does not have any problem" those picture was Heer's

Mama ,"calm down . and you both get out of her "the other two girls left

Prem ,"I will not tell her name and if they want to take the complain to the head of department go ahead. I don't care"

Mama ,"prem who that luck girl?"

Prem bend pick up Heer books gave her. He did not reply

Mama you are fighting you don?t remember today it is our HEER match .

Mama putting her arm around her waist.

Prem with a smile ,"they just made me angry" He went out

Mama," Heer who is she?

Heer ,"I don't know "

Mama,"My dear you know"

Heer,'' maam, I can not play badminton.''

Mama , '' you will.''

During the whole match he was sitting behind her . After first set she changed the court and so did he . . she was sweating because of his eyes.

.. when she won he left.

It was his daily routine to come first to see her getting out of her car. Heer was the second one to come with her sibling. He was waiting for her on gate .even in chill -2 morning of Jan

He never said a word but was there. He used to walk to the class.Their classes were next to each others. Put his bag. And come down to play basket ball. She used to sit on stairs.

Days passed by.

It was their results day. Heer was not feeling well.It was a sunny day. They all were standing for more than an hour .Prem was looking at her face as there was nothing to see there . Her face was changing color. She looked at him and suddenly falls on ground. Prem did not bother that there were 10000 people around. He picked her up in his arm. She was so close to him fainted he could feel her heart beat next to him

He walked with a teary eye for 81/2 min.Her class teacher was with him.They reached the staff room .He lay her on bed, kneel down next to her wanted to shake her. But just hold his hand. Maam, '' my son your job is done now you may leave she will be fine.''

Prem left with heavy heart. He won a gold medal that day but he was not happy. After an hour he saw her smiling.

Next day when heer reached , it was unusual as he was not there.

She went to keep her bag in class. When she was coming out he came in and put his hand on her mouth and pulled her behind the door.

Heer was so scared he put his forhead next to hers.. tears were rolling down his eyes and to her face. she was shaking with fear. She could feel his breath very close. To her , he was so close that she could smell his after shave. '' You were in my arm for 81/2 min I can still feel your heart beat '', he went very close to her lips

Heer closed her eyes and turned her face to the other side. Prem punch his hand so hard on wall . and whispered, '' I can not do this how could I ''. heer felt he hurt his hand .

She put her head on his heart for few sec

Perm started walking back it was hard. He let her free, just wiped way her tears and left.

so close yet so far

Days passed. On their fare well, he sing this song

Keh Do Jo Bhi

Mann Main Aaye

Aisa Na Ho

Khamoshi Main

Sun'nay Waala Hi

Kho Jaye

Keh Do Jo Bhi

Mann Main Aaye

Mann Jungle Main

Aag Lagay To

Mann Hi Nahin

Tann Bhi Jal Jaye

Kitnay Zamaanay

Bethay Raho

Phir Sawan Ki

Aas Lagaye

Saawan Ka Kya

Aaye Na Aaye

Aaye Na Aaye

Keh Do Jo Bhi

Mann Main Aaye

Aisa Na Ho

Hum Jaayen To

Tann Sulgay Aur

Mann Tadpaye

Keh Do Jo Bhi

Mann Main Aaye

Mann Ki Baatain

Keh Denay Say

Chain Aaye Ga

Neend Aaye Gi

Roothay Hoye

Mann Jaayengay

Khushion Bharay

Din Aayengay

Sapnay Liye

Raat Aayegi

Raat Aayegi

Keh Do Jo Bhi

Mann Main Aaye

Aisa Na Ho

Khamoshi Main

Sun'nay Waala Hi

Kho Jaye

Keh Do Jo Bhi

Mann Main Aaye

They never talk to each other

After 5 years they met in a fun fair. Heer felt some one is staring at her.She could not see . Suddenly he came in front . He was standing with his parents .Heer's father and Prem's father were old friends .

Prem was flying in sky. He wanted to tell her that how they did not know that.

After 1 day his parents were at her home. And asked for her hand ASAP as now he could not wait. In one month they were married.

tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya

tumhara hoon main aur tum meri

main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu

ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani

jaagi jaagi si hai phir bhi khwaabon mein hai

khoyi khoyi zindagi

tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya

tumhara hoon main aur tum meri

behke behke se mann

mehke mehke se tann

ujli ujli fizzaon mein hai

aaj ham hai jahaan

kitni ranginiyan

chhalki chhalki nigaahon mein hai

neeli neeli ghataaon se hai chhan rahi

halki halki roshni

tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya

tumhara hoon main aur tum meri

main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu

ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani

main toh anjaan thi yun bhi hoga kabhi

pyar barsega yun toot ke

sach yeh ikraar hai sach yahi pyar hai

baaki bandhan hai sab jhuth ke

meri saanson mein hai ghul rahi pyar ki

dheemi dheemi raagini

tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya

tumhara hoon main aur tum meri

main hairaan hoon tumhen kya kahu

ke din mein hui kaisi chaandani

jaagi jaagi si hai phir bhi khwaabon mein hai

khoyi khoyi zindagi

tumhi dekho na yeh kya ho gaya

tumhara hoon main aur tum meri

yeh din mein hui kaisi chaandani

Note to know the truth ( for strong hearts only)

After 5 years, they met. As it was very dark in the fun fair ,at one point when heer's ammi and aunty went in the stall he held her hand and whispered -'' Plz wait for me, one year please, i want to marry you .Donot get married . I know every thing about you as our class fellow is your neighbour. You just wait for me'' ........ He touched her cheek and vanished....

After 6 months, there was a news in the news paper - condolence head boy of ....... met an accident and died on the spot.... she fainted.....................

Today she just have his only pic cutout from the news paper to cry on and million of moments. She wanted to share few more but you all will fall in love with him.................... and she don't want to make you all beautiful people cry ..............life is like that it goes on and on ....................she is alive but with a very broken heart................... was this love or ............................ she is courageous i will not ask you guys to leave comments as you never do that .. I forgot to tell one thing before his death she always recieved a miss call on her birthday after his death no phone call with happy birthday music

Maein Zindagi Ka Saath Nibhata Chala Gaya

Har Fikar Ko Dhuen Mein Udata Chala Gaya

Barbadiyon Ka Shok Manana Fizul Tha

Barbadiyon Ka Jashan Manata Chala Gaya

Har Fikar Ko Dhuen Mein Uda?

Jo Mil Gaya Usi Ko Muqaddar Samajh Liya

Jo Kho Gaya Maein Usko Bhulata Chala Gaya

Har Fikar Ko Dhuen Mein Uda?

Gham Aur Khushi Mein Farq Na Mehsoos Ho Jahan

Maein Dil Ko Us Muqaam Pe Laata Chala Gaya

Har Fikar Ko Dhuen Mein Uda?

Sorry for making you all cry

note sorry for making you all cry thank you for giving your time as no one like sad story sorry to make you cry, and one thing this is between you and that girl as no body else know about it thanks for india-forums is first one to share trusting me are brave heer ................life must go on there are silly mistake as when emotions come .................................. i know it is not written propely . i must have fix it but ............. do see what she was going through why typing ..................and one thing that guy just look like our Harshad chopra may harshad live long inshaAllah

thanks to angel82
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XQtzKbHO2nw&feature=relatedtere bin sanu sohnia
koi hor nahio labhna
jo dave ruh nu sakun chukke jo nakhra mera
ve main sare ghumm ke vekhia
amrika , roos, malaysia
kittey vi koi fark si
har kise di koi shart si
koi mangda mera si sama
koi hunda surat te fida
koi mangda meri si vafa
na koi mangda merian bala
tere bin hor na kise
mangni merian bala
tere bin hor na kise
karni dhup vich chhan
tere bin sanu sohnia
koi hor nahio labhna
jo dave ruh nu sakun chukke jo nakhra mera

jiven rukia si tun zara
nahion bhulna main sari umar
jiven akhia si akhan chura
"rovenga sanu yad kar"
hasia si main hasa ajeeb
(par) tu nahi si hasia
dil vich tera jo raaz si
mainu tu kyon ni dasia
tere bin sanu eh raz
kise hor nahion dasna
tere bin peerh da ilaaj
kis vaid kolon labhna
tere bin sanu sohnia
koi hor nahio labhna
jo dave ruh nu sakun chukke jo nakhra mera

milia si ajj mainu
tera ik patra
likhia si jis ' te
tun shayr varey shah da
park ke si osnu
hanjnu ik duliya
akhan ' ch band si
seh raaz ajj khulia
ki tere bin eh mere hanjnu
kise hor nahio chumna
ki tere bin eh mere hanjhu
mitti vich rulnha
(tere bin sanu sohnia
koi hor nahio labhna
jo dave ruh nu sakun chukke jo nakhra mera) - 5
Edited by pisces26 - 17 years ago

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