Hi guys, I am writing this short story hope u all like itthis is a weekend treat for all of u.
Although I m not bored on weekends but I know u guys are bored to death'as there is no ph.
Enjoy!
Character sketches
Additi( additi gupta): she is a confident, bold and fun loving girl. She always solves other ppls problems. She lives the life how she she wants. She is also talkative.
Prem (harshad chopra): he is a confident, caring and loving guy. He is always quite and doesn't like to talk that much. He is very calm.
Prem is sitting in the train which is going to delhi. It stops on a station.
A girl enters the train, wearing white kurta and jeans with a thin multicolored scarf around her neck. She is wearing light makeup and and maching bangles and earings'and its none other than additi.
She finds her seat next to prem beside the window and sits there. She's also going to delhi.
The train is moving now'
She sees prem looking at the window deep in his thoughts.
She never saw a person that quite.
She thinks: kia banda hai yaar'itni der se aise hi betha hai'
Additi: hello mister kia hua'
Prem doesn't notice.
She waves her hand.
Prem: haan ..kuch kaha tum ne.
Additi extends her hand for a hand shake.
Additi: hi I am additi.
Prem: and I am prem. (shaking hands)
Additi: nice to meet u..
Prem: same here'
He again keeps quite.
Addit is waiting for him to start their first convo, but he just minds his own business, so he again starts to look at the window.
Additi thinks: bara ajeeb hai'.kuch to bolo'.hai kitna boring hai ye..kia mujhe pura safar isi ke saath guzarna hoga'
Ye to kuch bol hi nahi raha hai shayad koi problem hai'.
Additi: koi problem hai kia'.to mujhe bata sakte ho'
Prem: nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai'.actually who main shuru hi se kam bolta hoon.
Additi: oh'I c.
its quite a long time they both are sitting quite.
Now its hard for additi to control herself from talking'
Additi: eik baat batao , tum bore nahi horahe'.
Prem; nahi'.kyon'.
Additi: arre! Kyon ka kia matlab hai yaar'..kab se khirki ko dekh rahe ho'itni der se koi baat bhi nahi ki'.
Kiaa chakar hai boss'
Prem ; main aisa hi hoon''mukjhe khamoshi pasand hai'.
Additi: acha eik baat batao tumhe pani puri pasand hai?
Prem: nahi kabhi try nahi kia'.
Additi: mujhe pani puri bohat pasand hai..i just luv it'.
The train stops on a certain station'
Additi finds pani puri at the station.
Additi: pani puri!..main abhi aati hoon han'.tumhare laon pani puri'
Prem: no thanks'
Additi: acha main abhi ati hoon han'
She goes on the platform and spots pani puri'
She runs there.
Additi: bhaya eik pani puri to dena.
Salesman; ji '
She's eating pani puri and having a great time just then he hears her her name.
prem: additi!!!!....additi!!!!
She turns and sees that the train is moving'.
She leaves the pani puri there and runs after the train.
Prem is standing on the door.
Prem: addit bhaag!!!!!!!!!!
He extends his hand so that additi can hold it and can come in.
Additi: preeeeem!!!!!..koi roko!!!!!!!....
Finally she catches up. She is pulled bak in by prem.
Additi: hhhh'hhhh'hhhhh(breathing).
Additi: thanks yaar'bachaliya warna train choot jati'
Prem: koi baat nahi.
At night
Prem and additi are sitting in their cabin, just then they hear some ppl shouting.
Ppl: bhago aag lagai hai train mein bachaaaaoo.
Prem and additi hear it.
They both grab eachothers hand'and run out of the train.
Now they both are safe, outside the station on dark streets.
Prem is looking tensed.
Additi: kia hua itni tension mein kyon lag rahe ho.
Prem: ab hum delhi tak kaise jaenge.
Addi: han yeh baat bhi hai.
Prem: ab pata nahi ye riots kab khatam honge aur hum kab ghar ja payenge.
Addit: tum fikar mat karo sab bohat jald theek ho jaye ga.
They both give eachother a smile.
Suddenly they here sum firing and gun shots.
Prem: chalo yahan se chalet hain.
They both run till they c a very old hut.
They decided to go in and stay there until the riots were over.
Now they are inside the old hut.
Prem: hum yahan reh sakte hain.
Additi: han, ye jaga kuch safe lagti hai.
They both go into a room and sit there on the soft material.
Additi observes that prem is still a bit tensed.
Additi: ab hum safe hain to tum ab smile kar sakte ho. Tumhara face par tension se ziyada smile achi lagti hai.
Prem smiles on her compliment.
Its only one room in the house.
Prem: tum room mein so jao mein bahar so jaon ga.
Additi: nahin nahin mein to kahin bhi adjust ho jati hoon bahar mein songi tum andar jao.
(Usually girls are not willing to do that but additi is a diff one)
prem: tum pagal to nahin ho hagyi ho.
Additi: is mein pagal pan ki kiya baat hai, kitna accha mosam hai bahar main to bahar hi soon gi.
Prem; itni tez bearish ho rahi hai, beemaar ho jao gi. ( there is no door in the living room its open)
Additi: oh ho tum mujhe star plus ki heroine samajhte ho jo bearish se darti hain'.and one more thing main ladki hoon iska matlab ye nahi ke halki si bearish se beemaar ho jaon gi aur agar ho bhi gai to theek ho jaon gi.
He just smiles at her braveness and confidence.
They both are still sitting in the living room just then a part of the roof falls because of heavy rain fall and they both get wet.
They both laugh on this.
Additi: ab to room mein hi sona prega.
Prem: aur tum.
Additi: mein to yahin songi na.
Prem: lekin ab to chat(roof) bhi nahi hai, isiliye tum kamre mein so gi.
Additi: acha eik kaam karte hain aaj tum room mein so jao kal mein so jaoon gi.
Prem agrees.
Its now 2 days living in the hut.
Everyday they try to reach the station but the riots weren't finished.
Now the riot are over and they both go to the station buy their tickets and sit in the train's compartment.
Additi: finally hum pohanchgaye.
Prem: thank god now we're safe.
Additi yaad hai humari pehli conversation.
Prem: haan, tum se sabar hi nahi ho raha tha mujhse baat karne ke liye.
Additi: aur tum to aise the jaise kuch bolna hi nahi ataa ho.
Prem: aura b tumhare saath reh reh ke dekho kitni adat ho gayi bak bak karne ki.
Addit: kia matlab hai tumhara.
Prem: main to bas mazak kar raha tha.
The train stops at a certain station.
Additi: prem! Pani puri!!!
Prem: phir se.
Additi: abhi kuch nahi hoga
Prem: ab mein tumhe bulaon ga nahi.
Additi: han han theek mein ja rahi hoon.
She's again having pani puri and gets sum for prem.
She again heres
Prem: aditi!!! Additi!!!!!
Additi: omg!!!1
Prem laughing: jaldi karo!!!!!
She finally reaches the rain.
In the sompartment prem is laughing holding his stomach.
Additi: Is mein hasne ki kia baat hai'
Prem: dekhs that um kaise dod rahi thi'.
Additi: han'han to.
Prem: pani puri hawa mein aur tum'..(laughing)
It was just tooo funy'..
Additi: acha ab hasna band karo.
Prem: ok'ok I am sorry.
Additi: acha tum ne pani puri kabhi try nahi ki na, ab try karo.
Prem: no thanks tum hi khao.
Additi: are try to karo, I swear tumhe bohat pasand aye gi. Just try it.
Prem: ok'
They both have a great time eating pani puri.
Prem: ufffff, kitna spicy hai'.
Additi: delicious hai na'
Prem: haan'.
They have a great time through out the whole journey.
Now they are at the platform of delhi.
Additi: tumhare saath ye do din kaise guzre pata hi nahi chala.
Prem: haan.
Additi: agar tum nahi hote to mein kia karti.
Prem: aur agar tum nahi hoti to mein kia karta.
Now its time for them to go their own destinies.
Prem sees tears in her eyes as she'll miss him.
He wipes them off
Prem: tumhare face par aansoon se ziyada smile achi lagti hai.
They both smile as it was additi's line.
Additi hugs him tight as she can't control her anymore.
He hugs her bak.
Addit: ye do din mujhe kabhi nahi bhoolein ge. Mein tumhe humesha yaad karoon gi.
I'll always miss u.
Prem: I'll miss u too.
Prem moves her bak.
Prem: acha ab promise karo ke aaj ke baad kabhi nahi ro gi.
Additi: ok, aur tumkabhi udaas nahi hoge.
Prem: I promise.
Prem: in do dino mein mujhe zindagi bhar ki khushiya de di hain. Main tumhe apni zindagi bhar nahi bhooloon ga.
Additi: acha ab batein banate raho ga kia. Chalo ghar nahi jana kia'..
They both share their last hug and go to their own destinies.
Guys that was my short story I know its not gud but still plz comment.
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luv u all,
Iqra
Since ever1 insisted to cont. but only till additiprem milap.
I wrote this part its after they are going opposite ways.
Two more characters added.
Benaf as piya( additi's best friend)
hussain as Adi( prem's best friend)
Part 2
Prem and additi are going opposite ways.
Prem thinks: yeh mujhe kia ho raha hai, mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai jaise mai additi se door jar aha hoon. Mujhe uski taraf itni attaraction kyon ho rahi hai. Aakhir kia rishta hai mera uss se.
He shakes his head .
He thinks: nahi nahi aisa nahi yeh sab mere imagination hai aur kuch nahi. Hum dono to sirf dost hain.
Aur phir ye to mai soch raha hoon woh mere bare mein pata nahi kia sochti hogi'sochti bhi hogi ya nahi'
And he says goodbye to his strange thoughts.
On the other hand additi is thinking the same.
Additi: nahi nahi'yeh mein kia soch rahi hoon. Kyon mujhe aisa lag raha hai ke who mujh se door jar aha hai'aur phir..sirf aik mulaqat main hi. Nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta. Aur yeh sab to sirf mein soch rahi hoon na. who to aisa kuch nahi soch raha hoga.
After 1 day.
Additi on the cell with piya: hello piya, I am inlove.
Piya: with who.
Additi: prem.
Piya: prem????
Additi: haan prem.
Piya: tu ne pehle to kabhi uske bare mein kuch nahi bataya'.kon hai.
Additi: kyon ke mein khud usse kuch hi din pehle mili thi.
Piya: kab?
Additi: train mein.
Piya: kia??...tu pagal hogai hai kia. Sirf aik baar train mein mili aur pyar hogaya.
Additi: mili to train mein thi lekin hum do din saath rahe aik hut mein riots ki waja se.
Piya: how romantic.
Additi; haan lekin aik problem hai.
Piya; kia???
Additi: usse nahi pata ke I luv him.
Piya: to bata de na.
Additi: kaise. Hamari aakhri mulaqat station par hui thi aur I don't have his contact no.
Piya: kia???...ab kia karegi tu.
Additi: pata nahi'
Piya; kia usne tujhe apne ghar ke bare mein kuch bataya.
Additi: nahi'lekin haan who yahin rehta hai delhi mein.
Piya: great!
Additi: lekin hum usse dhondein ge kaise.
Piya : who sab tu mujhe pe chorde'.aik baat bata.
Additi: haan bol.
Piya: kia who bhi tujhe se'
Additi: pata nahi kabhi kuch kaha nahi.
Piya: tub hi na aik no ki pagal hai.
Additi: ab mein kia karoon ye bata.
Piya: acha shaam ko milte hain phir baat karenge. Theek hai.
Additi: chal theek hai, ab mein rakti hoon maa bula rahi hai. Bye.
Piya: bye.
Scene shifts.
Prem and adi are sitting in adi's car and adi is driving.
Adi: kia hua prem itna confused kyon lag raha hai kia hua.
Prem: yehi to mujhe samaj mein nahi araha ke mujhe kia hua.
Adi: tu bata na mein teri madad karta hoon.
Prem: mujhe nohat strange feelings ho rahi hain.
Adi: kasi feelings.
Prem: uske baghair kahin man nahi lagta, usse door raha nahi jata aur us ke alawa kuch soch bhi nahi sakta.
Pata nahi yeh kia ho raha hai mujhe.
Adi: tujhe pyar ho gaya hai.
Prem: what????
Adi: yes ur in luv.
Prem: nahi yaar.
Adi: haan yaar.
Prem: lekin yeh sab'
Adi: janta hoon, tujhe yeh sab bakwaas lagta hai in sab par believe nahi hai. But its true ur in luv.
Prem: tu pagal to nahi hogaya yeh sab batein kitabon aur filmo mein hi achi lagti hai asal mein aisa kuch nahi hota.
Aur mein aur pyar no way..
Adi: tu mane ya na mane ur in luv.
Prem: really???
Adi nods.
Adi: by the way who hai kon.
Prem: additi.
Adi: hmm nice name, waise tu aur who mile kahan.
Prem: train mein.
Adi: aur pyar hogaya.
Prem: nahi yaar we stayed together for 2 days b/c of riots.
Adi: kia baat hai aur tu mujhe ab bata raha hai.
Prem: time nahi mila yaar.
Adi: addtit ke saath busy jot ha.
Prem: yeh baat nahi hai yaar.
Adi: acha ab der mat kar aur usse bata de.
Prem: kaise.
Adi: milke aur kaise.
Prem: lekin mujhe nahi pata who kahan rehti hai.
Adi: great! To fone kar na.
Prem: no nahi hai.
Adi: to mere laal ab tu kia karega.
Prem: pata nahi.
Adi: ach tu fikar mat kar hum kuch karte hain.
Guys that's it for Saturday 1 more part coming up.
Hope u all like it.
Luv Iq
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