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Posted: 17 years ago
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I loved it!

Looking forward to Saturday!

?xXx?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hmm..nicey nice!!now have to see how they find each other without any contact info!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part yaar.do continue soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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part 2 is on page 1 after part 1.
thanku all my readers.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great part loved it
do cont soon.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank you for updating....that was a lovely part...both of them realising they are in love....looking forward to part when they meet and confess...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Part 3.

Adi: acha tu fikar mat kar hum kuch karte hain.

Scene shifts.

Additi and piya are in a coffee shop.

Piya: to ab bata. Tujhe us ne kich bataya ke who kahan rehta hai, apne bare mein kuch bhi.

Additi: nahi yaar. Pata nahi ab mein use kaise miloon gi.

Piya: tu chinta mat kar mera dost hai jo meri mada kar sakta hai.

Addit: to theek hai tu use baat karke mujhe batan.

Piya: theek hai. Mein use abhi fone karti hoon.

Additi: theek hai

Piya on the fone with adi: hi adi.

Adi: hi priya.

Piya: mujhe tumhari madad chaye karogae.

Adi: haan bolo kia hua.

Piya: mein kisi ko dhond rahi hoon.

Adi: kis ko.

Piya: aik ladka hai.

Adi: who to theek hai lekin uska koi naam, koi contact no ya kuch bhi.

piya: sirf naam pata hai. Prem.

Adi: prem????

Piya: haan prem.

Adi: lekin delhi mein to pata nahi kitne prem honge. Kuch aur pata hai.

Piya: nahi kuch aur pata hota to tumse help kyon mangti.

Adi: acha theek hai mein kuch karta hoon.

Piya: ok thanks.

Adi: bye.

Piya: bye.

Piya puts the fone in her bag.

Additi: kia kaha us ne.

Piya: hume sirf uska naam pata hai is liye thoda mushkil hoga lekin namumkin nahi use jaise hi kuch pata chale ga who mujhe fone karega.

Additi: I wish he gets sum info.

Piya: ya, u don't worry.

Additi: thanks.

On the other hand adi is thinking of wat priya just said.

Adi thinks: piya ne kaha ke who kisi prem ko dhoond rahi. Kahin who who apna prem to nahi. Kahin who priy hi to nahi…nahi nahi. Prem to kisi additi ke bare mein baat kar raha tha. Mujhe priya se is bare mein baat karni hogi, aur phir sab clear hojayga.

He calls piya.

Piya: hello.

Adi; hello priya kia tum mujhe abi cafeteria mein mil sakti ho.

Piya: kyon kia hua..

Adi: who sab baad mein pehle batao aa rahi ho ke nahi.

Piya; acha theek caf mein miltein hain.

Adi; bye.

Piya; bye.

piya and adi in the caf.

Adi was already there.

Piya cums.

Adi: piya here.

Piya: haan bolo kia hua. Itni jaldi mein yahan kyon bulaya.

Adi; tum kisi prem ke bare mein baat kar rahi thi na.

Piya; haan pata chala kuch.

Adi: I don't know its very confusing.

Piya: wat do u mean.

Adi: mera aik dost hai prem

piya was surprised to hear prem's name.

piya: prem

adi: haan, aur who bhi kisi ko dhoond raha hai.

Piya: kis ko.

Adi: pehle tum mujhe batao ke tum prem ko kyon dhoond rahi thi.

Piya: who actually mere dost ysse dhoond rahi hai.

Adi: kia tymhari dost.

Piya: haan.

Adi: kia naam hai uska.

Piya: additi.

Adi; kia.

Piya: haan, additi. Koi prob hai.

Adi: nahi. Prem bhi kisi additi ko hi dhoond raha hai.

Piya: kia.

Adi: haan.

Piya: iska matlab hai ke who eik doosre ko hi dhoond rahe the.

Adi: shayad tum theek keh rahiho.

Piya: to phir hum in dono ko milwa dete hain.

Adi: theek hai. To phir kal shaam ko hum yahin milein ge un dono ke saath.

Piya: yeh theek rahe ga.

Adi looks at the his watch.

Adi: ab mein chalta hoon mujhe kuch kaam hai.

Piya: ok. Bye.

Adi: bye.

Next day

Piya takea additi to the caf and adi takes prem.

Prem and adi are entering from the left side and piya and additi are cumming from right.

Suddenly they both c eachother.

They both r shocked for a while.

Prem: arre addititum yahan.

Additi: haan who mein piya ke saath ayi thi.

Prem: shall we.

Additi smiles and nodds.

All four of them are sitting on the same table.

Guys rite now I have to go so….later on sorry….

Prem aur additi kab kareinge apna confession jane ke liye parte rahiye iq ki short story, only on Indian Forum.

Till then gud bye.

Apki Iq

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Posted: 17 years ago
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finally they met
amazing update
do cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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They meet each other!

Looking forward to the next part!

?xXx?

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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow so they meet....oh cant wait for the next part.....plz update sooon....

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