DILLAGI (FF) - Prem & Heer PART 3 pg 8

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DILLAGI

I was just sitting and came up with this idea of a FF. After reading the awesome FF's on PH in this forum I couldnt stop myself from writing one. I hope you all like it.I wont be able to continue everyday but possibly 2 times a week but with a promise of long parts..Do comment if u feel that i should continue...

CHARACTER SKETCH
Juneja Family
Lalit Juneja
: An old but smart businessman, settled in canada for the the last 20 years. He left his country India to achieve something and now that he has done that he wants to return back to his motherland to fulfill a promise. He was married to Shipra who was his college sweetheart from whom he had Kulraj and Prem. Shipra died of Blood Cancer and after her death Lalit got married to Gayatri, Shipra's younger sister. At first he married her for the sake of his two children who needed mother's love but later began to love and respect her for what she was. Gayatri gave birth to Preet and Veera.
Gayatri Juneja
: A loving and caring wife of Lalit Juneja. Though she is a step-mother to Prem and kulraaj but that's only in name.This is so because she loves them more than she probably loves her own children, especially Prem. Prem is her everything. He holds more importance in her heart probably even more than her husband.
Kulraaj
: Not an important character. She is the eldest daughter of the Juneja family and is married to the love of her life. She is again very close to her family and Prem is the apple of her eye.
Prem Juneja
: 25years old and he has achieved everything that his dad wanted him to. He is the ideal son and an ideal brother. Staying in Canada has not affected him in any way as he is traditional at heart and values them greatly. Though he is very practical but still deep down his heart he is very sensitive and that is why he cant express his feelings to anybody. For him his family is very important and he can do anything for them, especially his Dad.He beleives in TRUE LOVE but fate has other things stored in for him. Girls are mad for him but he has set his heart for someone he dosent know, someone he has never seen...just to fulfill his dad's promise. He is not sure whether he will be able to accept his Dad's choice of his lifepartner but to keep him happy he is ready to marry an unknown girl.He is handsome and very passionate about everything that he does.
Preet Juneja
: the ultimate play boy. He has completed his graduation barely passing but has no regrets since he broke the record of having the maximum number of girls that year.Secretly in his heart he does believe in true love but he knows the kind of girl he is looking for does not exist -- somebody who can tame him!!For him his PB or prem Bhaiyya is everything and his life revolves around him.Though lalit hates his youngest son for being the rebel he is, Prem somewhere in his heart admires him for that.
Veera Juneja
: A spoilt Brat.For her money is everything and that's what she is alive for. She loves her brother's very much but hates India for its poverty. If she had her way she would never return back to her motherland as everybody else wants to.


Mann Family
Balraj Maan
: His country is everything for him and that is why he never left his motherland. Staying in a small village mear Ambala. His main occupation is farming and he loves that becoz it keeps him connected to his earth. He is waiting for his friend to come back from Canada and fulfill his promise. He has two daughters Heer and Meher. Heer is everything for him.
Teji Maan
: She is married to Balraj Maan and is a very loving and caring mother. She is a lady with traditional values which she has instilled with great care in both her daughters.She sees herself in her daughters.
Heer Maan
: The eldest daughter of the Maan family.She is 22 years old and very beautiful. Though she is not modern but the word of her beauty and simplicity has travelled as far as to Ludhuana. For her, her family is everything.. their happiness, their needs, their wants is all she takes care off and hides her feelings deep inside the core of her chest. She is extremely shy, reserved and very innocent. She works as a school teacher in the village school very much on the insistence of her chachi. She can easily be manipulated if it concerns a matter of her family.Her best friend is the moon.
Meher Maan
: The bubbly-chubby girl of the family. She is the fun element in the Maan house. She hardly shows her feelings for anyone but feels greatly for her sister. she is extremely bossy and is the boss in the village. Nobody dares to fight with her as she can easily give one back. For her two things are only worth living for --- Food and Bollywood!!!
Balwant Maan
: Balraj's jealous brother. Though he loves his nieces but he hates Balraj's friendship with Business tycoon Lalit Juneja. He always wished to be in Balraj's place. He is married to Daljeet and has two daughters Vishaka and Ashlesha.
Daljeet Maan
: She is the black sheep in the family. The main reason why Balwant hates balraj is because of Daljeet. She is the one who instigated such feelings in Balwant. She is a selfish woman who is desperate enough to stoop to anylevel to get money. She has her eye on Balraj's as well as Lalit's property.
Vishaka singh
: She is eldest daughter of Daljeet and is as cruel as her mom. She is married to Prashant who is a real estate developer in Ludhiana. She hates Heer for her beauty and is jealous of her.
Ashlesha Maan
: She is the youngest daughter of Daljeet. She is very modern but still loves both Heer and Meher. None of the negativity that her mom tries to rub in her comes in her. She respects Balraj and Teji more than her parents and is at most times found in their house.
Prashant Singh
: He is a greedy man looking out only for money. He was in love with Vishakha and that's why he married her... not to forget he got a lot of money in dowry. He is emotionless. He has one twin brother Manmeet.
Manmeet Singh
: He is the owner of the school where Heer teaches. It was on his insistence that Daljeet asked Heer to join the school. He is obsessed with Heer since the day he saw her on vishakha's marriage. For him money is nothing... but Heer is everything. He can go to any limits to have her...Though he is good at heart but his love for Heer has made him turn grey.


Introduction PG 1
Part 1 PG 2 - " FEAR"
Part 2 PG 5 - "ARRIVAL"
Part 3 PG 8 - "LOST AND FOUND"

Love

Ananya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome introduction...you must continue soon....Sorry to mention but your font size is too small plz do increase it next time.....
I liked the fact that Heer is very beautiful and that Ash isnt negative here ....Looking forward to reading ahead to know what Manmeet will do when Heer falls for Prem...
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Originally posted by: sun-j

sorrry but de words r too small!

is it ok now???
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Originally posted by: angel82

awesome introduction...you must continue soon....Sorry to mention but your font size is too small plz do increase it next time.....

I liked the fact that Heer is very beautiful and that Ash isnt negative here ....Looking forward to reading ahead to know what Manmeet will do when Heer falls for Prem...

thanks. ive incresed the font size do tell me if its ok... I like Ash when she is positive..
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ok dear its very very nice and ya do cont soon i will be waiting
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hi ananya....very nice yaar...plzz continue soon yaar...waiting....
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Originally posted by: tanyaaaa26

ok dear its very very nice and ya do cont soon i will be waiting

thanks.. will do so..
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Originally posted by: silparavindar

hi ananya....very nice yaar...plzz continue soon yaar...waiting....

thank you som much for the encouragement
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update now plzzzzzzzzzzz with long part waitinggggggggg
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DILLAGI~~PART 1~~ "FEAR"

She woke up in the middle of the night, sweating profusely. She closed her eyes to forget that dream as tears welled up in her eyes. She covered her face with her hands and wiped off her tears. she looked at her side and saw Meher sprawled on more than half of the bed with a plate on her stomach and snoring loudly. She put her hands on her forehead and pressed it tightly. She got up from the bed and walked to the window and looked at her best friend, glowing out in the night sky... THE MOON.
Heer perched herself on the window and kept looking at the moon as the winds played games with her hair.She felt the whisper of the cold wind in her ear and felt her best friend was ready to listen.Heer's heart cried all her thoughts about her upcoming marriage to the moon. It was difficult for her. Today when she was leaving for school her mother had called her and informed her about her in-laws arrival in a weeks time. Since then her heart and mind were playing games. In her heart-to-heart she was always aware of her alliance with PREM..she had grown to love him, respect him.. but for whom???? She had never understood this... She dint know whether she loved him, respected him for what he was or because her father expected her to.
She remembered her early childhood days when she was told about Prem -- she would shy away at the thoughts of marrying him, but now that she had matured.. Was she ready for this??? Did love happen just by fixing a marriage???? She knew she had agreed for it when her father had asked her.. but that was because his happiness mattered to her the most.She could do anything for him and this was another sacrifice that she was going to make for the family.
Tears swelled up again in her eyes...She knew she could do nothing....
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He lay on his bed thinking deeply about the upcoming vacation. He looked at the time 1:00p.m.He got up from his bed and helped himself to a glass of water.He looked outside the window and saw that it was drizzling. He put his hands out to feel it. suddenly his heart was restless..he felt someone dear to him was unhappy and crying. He closed his eyes and walked back to his bed.
This had been Prem's routine for the past 2 months. He had not slept peacefully for these two months... and he knew that he wouldnt till they reached India. He remembered the day (2 months ago) when His dad and mom had broken him the news.He was to marry a girl in India...What was her name??.. yes!! HEER!! Though he liked the name but he was not sure about what he was doing when he had surrendered to his dad's wishes.. these two months had not been easy for him and the family as well. Preet had not taken the issue of Prem's marriage to an unknown girl nicely and had created quite a lot of scenes about it. veera on the other hand was more concerned about the trip to India. She had tried everyway to stay out of it and convince lalit and Gayatri to forget the marriage issue alltogether.
Prem trusted his dad more than anything. He respected his choice also but somewhere the deep longing in his heart to find his True Love remained.He was not sure whether he would be able to love and respect the girl the way his parents expected him to do. He knew how happy his Dad was when Prem had said yes and that is why he was ready to sacrifice his life for him..
Prem buried his face inside the pillow and cried.....


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The Shiv Mandir echoed with Heer's voice as she sang the aarti.Her eyes closed she finished the aarti, prayed for everybody she knew except herself and moved out of the mandir. As she walked down the steps she saw Manmmet walk up the stairs. Manmeet looked at Heer and nodded slowly as Heer gave him a small smile. They both came face to face and Manmeet took Heer in a corner to talk to her.
"Heer is there a problem?? tum kal bhi kafi pareshan lag rahi thi.."
"nahi..aisi koi baat nahi hai..i was just..."
"agar nahi batana chahti to mat batao..."
Heer looked at Manmeet with her innocent eyes. Heer knew him since Vishakha's marriage. And then she had started working for him. Though she liked him but somehow she felt something strange and different when she was near him. The more close he tried to be with her , she would go more far. She had this strange feeling about him. Sometimes she thought that this was because he was the first guy she had ever talked to on a day-to-day basis and sometimes because he was her Prashant jijus brother. Whatever it was Heer felt really uneasy in his company, especially these days as he tried to touch her body and get too close to her...
"Manmeet woh..I need to go home..I will see you in the school.."
As Heer tried to go he caught her hand and pulled her to him.. Heer looked at him with those frightening eyes. He carelessly removed a strand of her hair falling from her cheek as Heer closed her eyes in pain....
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"OUCH!!!!!"
Gayatri ran to Prem as she heard him scream in pain..Prem sat on the chair and saw blood sprickling out from his middle finger. He looked at the nail that had caused it.
"Prem!! kitna khoon beh raha hai beta...kya zarrorat thi ..."
"ma...kuch nahi hua.. chota sa cut hai theek hojayega.. You dont worry..I was careful but pata nahi kaise haath lag gaya.."
Gayatri dint hear Prem and was busy cleaning the wound. He closed his eyes as he felt the pain not in his finger but inside his heart. His heart was beating loudly and he again felt the same restlessness as he had felt yesterday night. He knew someone was in pain but WHO????
Note: Thanks everyone for your encouragement. I wont be able to continue so often but will try my best to post longer parts whenever I do. Plz do leave ur comments as well as criticisms.
Love
Ananya
Edited by ananya7736 - 17 years ago

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