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Posted: 17 years ago
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lolz thnx kiruu!! hehe yesh their meeting!...but with it a big surprise!! :] i think ppl will like it...at least i hope they do 😆. Hahaha lolz yesh it could be but then dnt forget our amazing preet-sukz! 😉😉🤣 lolz am glad to be a help to reconstruct your vocab meaning!! 🤣🤣

aaaaah did you catch it???? 👏

hmm hehe im not gonna tell you anything at all this time missy!!! you'll have to wait till sunday to see what happens and how! 😉😉😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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That sounds like a really cool idea and im really looking forward till Sunday now!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: .xganga.x

That sounds like a really cool idea and im really looking forward till Sunday now!

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hey sunayna thankz a lot for the comment!! am glad u like the idea...hope you'll enjoy it and that i make your sunday a good one with the story! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

NICE UNEXPECTED MEETING COOL

hey
thnx a lot!
am glad u like it
hope u'll like the story too
rinkz
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys today is Sunday!! and im updating the unexpected meeting today... but i wanted to tell you all that all of these short stories will be in parts or chapters! So today im going to post the first chapter of Unexpected Meeting and then depending on your comments i'll post the next chapter later on in the week! Hope u all understand what i mean...and will comment once its up! till then adios Rinki
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Unexpected Meeting

Chapter. 1

"Uggh yeh train itni late kyun hai!!" a girl said to herself. She was wearing blue skinny jeans and a white shirt that was tight around her chest and then flowy, ending at her upper thighs. Her long black hair was falling down her back in waves of curls. She was gorgeous with her big doe-like black eyes and fair skin. Every guy in the station was looking at her with lust evident in their eyes. She was standing with another girl who was burried in her book, lost to the outside world. "Kiran tum please apna yeh padna band karo! It's annoying me...how can you be so calm when the train is an hour late". Her friend looked up from the novel and smiled, "uffo Heer stop worrying, remember we have free periods today since the teachers have a meeting! So we can be late and no one will care...aur ab please chup hojao im at the part where the girl finds out her boyfriend is a werewolf!" Heer rolled her eyes at her best friend's obsession with horror stories. She blew at her bangs and sighed completely bored out of her mind. She started humming a song when she heard a whistle and a "Damn she's fine..i'd love to ---- her" from behind her. She turned around and saw a guy dressed in blue jeans and a black dress shirt looking to the front where she was standing. Her eyes burned with anger and before she could stop herself, she was standing in front of him and slapping him. "Watch your mouth...you disgusting jerk!" He looked at her...his deep brown eyes glaring at her with contempt and disdain. His hand neared her cheek but it fell still in the air and he clenched it tightly in a fist. His voice came husky with anger, "your lucky my parents taught me enough manners to never raise my hand on a girl...or else you would've been laying on the floor unconscious!" He pushed her shoulder as he walked to the train that had entered the platform. She turned around watching him leave...for some reason she felt a hint of guilt in her stomach...but she didn't understand why. "Heer!! yeh tumne kya kiya! why the hell did you slap him?" she heard Kiran say as they both stepped on the train. "Kiran tumne suna nahin ki usne kya kaha mere bare mein" she asked her friend still angry at the unknown man...and his arrogance, he didn't even apologize just gave her a bhashan! "Haan maine suna lekin woh disgusting words usne nahin kisi aur ne kahe the...woh toh bas wahan khada tha aur tumne usse bina jaane hi thapad mardala!". "Yeh tum kya bol rahi ho kiran...iska matlab maine usse bina kise reason ke thapad mara...oh no!! ab main kya karongi" Heer asked her best friend in a worried tone. "Just forget it...besides its not like your gonna see him again...hopefully". Kiran said trying to sound consoling. Heer spent the entire time in the train thinking about that guy…how his chocolate brown eyes glared at her angirly…how he raised his hand to slap her but the teachings of his parents stopped him…she was glad he didn't hit her…he was bigger than her and probably would be able to make her fall on the floor with just a push. But somewhere underneath those thoughts lay her appreciation of him…he was really good-looking, she would call him handsome or even hot. For some reason she felt attracted to that guy, something which she had never felt before…sure she had flings and dated guys throughout high school and college but she never felt anything like this for any of those guys. The two girls reached their college and entered to see all the girls standing in front of the main office. "Hey Sarah what's going on?" they asked one of the girls from their class. Sarah turned to them, her short blond hair falling around her face cutely. Her big blue eyes looked at them, twinkling with mischief. "Hey gals...oh nothing much, there's just this new hot guy, apparently he's gonna be our subsitute for Mr. Raul's class". She turned back to look through the glass doors at the "hot" sub. Heer and Kiran looked at each other confused...this is probably the first time the girls are all excted about a sub, normally its always a old bald guy that slept through the class annoying them with his snores, or a old lady that never shut up...always talking about her son and how he's done this...and that. They watched from a good and safe distance as the doors opened and the crowd separated like the sea...showing the man walking towards them...he had black hair and brown eyes, his lips were stretched in a smile that disappeared as he looked at Heer...who was rooted to her spot with wide scared eyes. It was the same guy from the station and he didn't look happy at all to see her. "Heer...meet him, this is your new sub for a week...Mr. Prem Juneja and Prem this is our best student and student persident Ms. Heer Maan," the principal's voice fell on deaf ears as the two looked at one another, completely still...everything seemed to disappear the moment his eyes met her ashamed ones.
~~THE END~~.....for now only! 😉😆
kay guys ill post the next chapter when i get time and course depending on your comments! :]
hope u all enjoyed!
plz leave a comment...
rinki
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow prem new sub
awesome
wonder what will happen
do continue soon.....

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Posted: 17 years ago
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AHHH! Omg yess you posted it! First of all, you should've mad me slap the real guy 😡 Grr.. how i hate guys who do that, its just disgusting. But wow, you really gave an unexpected meeting when you said you'd give an unexpected meeting. First I thought Prem would come and beat up the guy who said that, but Prem was the guy she slapped.. 🤣

I'm so glad Prem was a good boy and didn't slap her. But ahh its going to be so funny when Prem's gonna be teaching the class and teasing her.. so how many chapters are there going to be? Ahh I can't wait for the rest of it! Post it soon!.. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kimmu

AHHH! Omg yess you posted it! First of all, you should've mad me slap the real guy 😡 Grr.. how i hate guys who do that, its just disgusting. But wow, you really gave an unexpected meeting when you said you'd give an unexpected meeting. First I thought Prem would come and beat up the guy who said that, but Prem was the guy she slapped.. 🤣

I'm so glad Prem was a good boy and didn't slap her. But ahh its going to be so funny when Prem's gonna be teaching the class and teasing her.. so how many chapters are there going to be? Ahh I can't wait for the rest of it! Post it soon!.. 😃

haha lolz yesh i posted it! im awesome huh? 😉 hehe well u'll get the chance...he'll appear the nxt day again but this time kiran aka u will remember him nd tell heer then both of u slap him! 🤣🤣🤣 that'll be fun to write man!! haha lolz in this one prem wnt be the savior........yet! 😉 lolz i was laughing when i wrote her slapping her prem...it was just hilarious 🤣🤣
hehe yesh i wnt make our prem slap heer...😉 aaww yesh me gonna have fun writing that!! 🤣🤣 expect them to have a convo in hindi during their class that no one except for kiran will understand since the college is in california...🤣🤣 hmm idk im gonna try to not go over 5 but will try to make it all masti nd fun nd show their love beginning soon with their teasing nd fighting 🤣 ahh me will try but no promises!! 😉😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

wow prem new sub
awesome
wonder what will happen
do continue soon.....

ah yes prem the teacher 😆
thnx am glad u liked it
will try to cont soon 😳

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