FF: Kismat Konnection: Ch 6 -Pg 16:Read!! - Page 7

Originally posted by: *Shifali*

Well, Heer has girl power here....gooo Heer😆😆😆

Nah..like Tom and Jerryyy😆 Prem is a Billa not Billi

Haha, well, maybe Prem will fall for her 1st😆😆

Thanks yaar

Heer leaned over to Prem and wispered in his ears and Prem wispered back.

H: Look, I am also not happy with whatever is going on, but I HAVE to reach Mumbai, so you better shut up and follow me, and do what I say. These people think that we are hubby-wife so do as I say.
P: But you aren't my wife
H: Good, and I don't want to be either.
P: I don't care, I can't play this drama, for god sake, I don't have a wife and I don't want a wife like you either...chi!
H: Just shut up jerk and do as I say, I ain't interested in this drama either.
P: Kyun his ache bale knuware ko bakra banane chali ho?
H: Tum already bakre ho, now do as I say.
P: No.
H: Look, I punched you once, I can do it again.
P: But you can't. Didn't you already ready say we are husband and wife?? And wifes don't punch their husbands
H: Well, when husbands start acting stupid, than wifeys have full right to punch them
P: Whatever, but I want something else.
H: OK, whatever you say, and do as I say.
P: Listen to me or else I won't play this game with you.
H: Fine, what is it.
P: So Miss Heer Mann, you have to say "I love you" to me during the time we are in this bus.

Heer was dead shocked with eyes popping out. She had had enough, and there was NOO way she was going to say I love you to Prem. No way...NEVER!

H: Just shut up and do as I say, or get out.
P: Soch lo
H: Urrghh...FINE, but but but, I have a condition aswell.
P: And what is that my dear wifey.
H: Well, my dear husband, that one condition is that if you start to act stupid, or don't listen to me, than I have full right to punch you. And one more thing...after this whole drama gets over, than I have full right to...leave that for me...I will tell you later.

Prem thought for a minute and promised himself that he won't act stupid and listen to her...and always follow her instructions cus that punch that she gave hurt ALOT...ALOT. And about the 2nd condition...he wasn't sure, but he was not going to give up.

P: Fine
H: Good

And with that started Premeer's drama of a married couple.

Yet again I am compelled to praise your excellent writing skills and creative ideas, I just love the way you have created a totally different Heer and Prem which makes it so much more fresh and new to be reading! I think I like your Heer and Prem the best out of all the other ff's I have read in this forum! Way to go!!! Continue soon!

lol really goood!😃