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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was awesome! it made me laugh😆

ur family seems like so much fun😊
Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

uff shabz how could you??? 😡

dude instead of writing these short stories- though amazing 😳😉
make long long long ones abt premeer....😉😉
aaah loved the little scene of fun btwn preet nd his bhabhi!
shoooo shweet lolz
nd haila prem full of masti?? 😲😲
uff that just made him look even more cuter in my mind
and here i thought that wasn't possible! 😉
i LOVED it!!!!
rinkz

Arre......I've been told that so many times....
Don't worry hun, I write lil FF's all the time...I think this is the first one you ever read? It's so much easier then writing looong ones....I really got to commend you, you update like 4-6 times a week!
Don't you love Preet!😳He is sooooo cute and adorable....yea I couldn't resist putting in a lil masti for Prem.....
Thanks so much!!!
@ravioli_11 : Awwww really sweet comment hun! Thanks so much! Uffff yaar my family is chaos....sometimes its fun but other times it feels like your being suffocated......lolz but family is family!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

Arre......I've been told that so many times.... then listen to it na!! lolz 😉
Don't worry hun, I write lil FF's all the time...I think this is the first one you ever read? It's so much easier then writing looong ones....I really got to commend you, you update like 4-6 times a week!
yesh it ijj the first time 😳...hm i guess so it is easier i wrote a short one too once it is easier but i like writing longer ones...idk why though! aw give me links to the other ones then i wanna read them...if you can 😳 aww its nothin...pretty easy to write them...hehe i do it for the readers but i think with the skool starting again...i might have to cut it down to specific days now
Don't you love Preet!😳He is sooooo cute and adorable....yea I couldn't resist putting in a lil masti for Prem..... aw yesh me love my preetu!! lolz dnt tell suki or else im gone! 😉😉 hehe yesh even prem should get to have masti instead of being chup-chup lolz
Thanks so much!!!
ur bery bery bery welcome...but what for? i just said the truth na! 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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AAHH....i 4got about the whole brb thing😳...

after i read ur story , i kinda lost my mind😆...
sorry😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG , I LOVED IT... i really mean it..dude this is mind-blowing ..plzzzzz i beg u carry on...write more... but this time a little longer...lol...
i'm just in love with it , i'm reading it over and over again picturing it in my mind... hope something like this happens on Monday...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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It was superb.Very well written.
Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ron16

OMG , I LOVED IT... i really mean it..dude this is mind-blowing ..plzzzzz i beg u carry on...write more... but this time a little longer...lol...

i'm just in love with it , i'm reading it over and over again picturing it in my mind... hope something like this happens on Monday...

Ohhh that is so sweet! Thanks for the lovly comment, it made my day! I would love to continue but I am in iNdia right now for my jijii's wedding so really busy! But I write lil stories like this sometimes....maybe will start a FF....need an idea first!!
@shareen : Thanks!😃
@ Rinkz:Ahhhh I'll try finding the links but later.....im in a lazy lamhe mood!!!😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey its minblowing...no its mindblasting....😆loved the naughty side of prem... hope this happens... cont soooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnn...i want to see heer's face when prem waz holding her... aww...so nice...cont soon plz.....

wid love
PARTH😊

Posted: 17 years ago
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@ Parth Bhaiya: Awww thanks so much Bhayia.....love your comments! Always thinking of Heer aren't you??
@pisces26: Thanks!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Omg shabo, i can't believe i missed this topic.. 😲
First of all.. The Premeer scene was schooo cutee!! Naughty Prem, wasn't even scared that his mom would catch him. Poor Heer, as much as she didn't want to get caught, she does lol. Smart Gayatri mom, leaves the two love-birds/doves alone.
Preets soo cute! He asks Heer for a devrani, not a wife. So smart, and then Heer tells him she doesn't want a devrani. Poor Preet, his plan failed too...
Keep making such cute short stories! There really awesome!

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