Two lil SS - Based on a real life story! (L)

Posted: 17 years ago
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OK, so as I told a couple of my friends I would post two lil SS here...!
So as most of ya'll know I am currently in India for my cuzins wedding, now the two following PH and Bhabhi-Devar scenes are based on jiji (my cuzin) and her family, our family....we are all like really filmy and all its sort of hard to belivve, but these :scenes" happened two dayz ago when we went to her susural for lunch and then our house for dinner...so they are (or at least I think) really cute and they reminded me immensly of PH and Preet so I thought I would post them.....ok enough blabbering....lets start!!!😃
Disclaimer: All scenes have been extremly filmanized!
Heer ran in to her room happiness glowing on her face! She quickly stuffed the saris in her closet to show Gay3 later😳Right now she was way to happy to be all sharmili, and the reason of her happiness was obvios...Prem! She never realized he had such a teasing side....it sent shivers down her spine. She walked over to the window and sighed with happiness, all was well. She was looking foreward to the coming days but with a lil sense of fright...what will Prem do now. She laughed out loud, threw her duppata over her shoulder and walked straight in to the arms of Prem himself who immediatly wrapped her up in his arms causing her to blush but nonetheless scold him
Heer: Prem! Kya kare tum? CHORO!!!
Prem: *grins* Nahin...aab mujhse intazaar nahin hota!!
Heer: *tinge of red appers on her cheeks* Please.....koi aajainge?
At that very moment Gay3's voice rang through the house.
"Heer!!!!Heer beta, kahan ho tum??"
Back in Prem's arms Heer was hyperventilating! "Hayye Rabba.....abb kya hoga?" Gay3's footsteps were coming closer and closer while Prem grinned down at Heer who was so scared you would have thought Daljeet was back! He was broken out of his daze by an infruted Heer was pushing him into the closet!! "Arre Heer, maa toh.....----" He was cut off by Heer slamming hte door in his face....he sighed and settled down....this could take a while!
Heer qucilky settled her self on the bes trying to be natural just as Gay3 walked in! "Arre tum yahan hai? Aach mujhe jaldi se woh sari dedo, mein tumhari liye aachi se sari le aathi!" Heer starts to get up. "Nahin beta, tum beto, mein lethi...." Gay3 makes her way towards the closet!
"NAHIN" Heer yells out and quickly bites her lip!"Aap kyun?Mein hoon naa?" Her runs to the closet and while she is pushing back various clothes Prem takes advantage of the situation and pulls her hair, duppata, slightly tickiling her waist...teasing her in general....FINALLY Heer gets her hands on the sari and is about to shut the door when Gay3 stops her...."aacha.....toh ye baath hai....chalo....mein toh gayi....."
Gay3 chuckles and shuts the door leaving behing a blushing couple indeed!
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Gay3: Chole.....saab kahan hai????? Nahsta lagya!!!!!!!
Everyone comes bustaling down all hungry and eagrly waiting for the girls of the house to serve them. Meher, Ash, Kulraaj, Veera and Heer come out with platters of food for the Juneja Khandan serving everyone. Slowly the girls start sitting down themselves to eat leaving Heer who is constantly getting up to refill glasses and such when finally a exprated Preet asks her..
Preet: BHABHI......aap inta kaam karte rete hai...
Heer: Kaam???😕Mein toh sirf....
Preet: Aach aap esa karo....apne aap ke liye kuch karo!!!
Heer: Preet......nahin....mujhe kya hona hai??
Preet: App na....apne app ke liye pyari si devrani lekar oue!
Everybody around the table laughs waiting ot see what Heer would say....
Heer: Nahin Preet....mujhe toh devrani bilkul nahi chaiye....*leaves room*
Preet: *face is shocked*Par Bhabhi.....*follows Heer*
Everybody is left laughing and musing over this wonderful relationship.....!
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So there you go....my lil attempt.....ope you enjoyed it....do leave your comments.....good or bad.....they are appreciated!!
Shabz*running off to eat dinner*

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow that was beautifully written, did something like this really happen to you or your family?

Zainab
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aww di its gr8 love it so cute
that took ages 2 read lol
but its truly gr8
Posted: 17 years ago
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@Zainab: Thanks hun!! Yea, basically but I dramatized it majorly!!

@Tweenie: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was actually really good.
Posted: 17 years ago
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@Sekhonforlife14 : Is it that shocking that it was good?😆Thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ahhahahahha lol.. thanks shabo24.. tht was hilarious!.. reli luved it.. lol.. u got a funni famili lol.. it reminded me ov my cuzn's wedding lol =P
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey shabz that was great..did it rele happened in ur family....
it was just amazing...lage raho...
luv iqra
Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: blushpink13

hey shabz that was great..did it rele happened in ur family....

it was just amazing...lage raho...
luv iqra

Hey Iqra....Thanks yaar!😆Yea that happened, I just dramtized it....jiji's devar is so much like Preet....and really good looking too!!😆
@guju_angel: Thanks!Yea I Love shaadis!!!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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uff shabz how could you??? 😡
dude instead of writing these short stories- though amazing 😳😉
make long long long ones abt premeer....😉😉
aaah loved the little scene of fun btwn preet nd his bhabhi!
shoooo shweet lolz
nd haila prem full of masti?? 😲😲
uff that just made him look even more cuter in my mind
and here i thought that wasn't possible! 😉
i LOVED it!!!!
rinkz

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