FF:LOVE STORY PREMEER compiled on pg102 (bye aLL) - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
hey di it waz soooooo nice... cont soon.... i m waiting.... plz cont soooooonnnn.....loved the payal scene....


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PARTH😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
hey there continue soon.of course you should continue because your ff is intersting.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83

who said its not interesting and what made u think that....so no more thoughts like that..just cont....i'll always read it....now its going great so u should cont.....

luv iqra
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
oh plz do daily updates if you can...we all jus love reading your FF....
its awesome....
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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
👏👏👏have no words 2 praise ur writing.Its toooooo good!Mindblowing awsome.Looking forword 2 the next update😳Keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86

MY dear friends you must be surprise how I daily update as a epi .I don?t know why I have a feel let me enjoy my each and every day with you all some I know and some are just silent readers. Who knows KAl ho NA ho. After few days I will be with you all cute friends close to my heart friends we all are strangers to each other but our relation ship of words, thought, feelings are same PREMEER a strange bond. I think that LOVE STORY never end you have a lot to say .when my LOVE STORY become boring do let me know to stop it right a way..

I am starting from where I left...

7th PART

SUN light disturbed PREM he woke up he was surprised for few sec where he was then with a smile on his face he saw next to him sleeping HEER. Her head was on his shoulder and the sunlight was disturbing her too. PREM tried to stop it from his hand but failed. He did not want to wake her up as she was looking very cute. He could wait until she wake up herself .but thought of PREET if he comes out on his terrace and see them he will pull his leg for the rest of his life he try to take out his arm under her head slowly .HEER woke up.

HEER: PREM how are you feeling now

PREM: smiling good morning I am fine.(kissed her fore head) I woke you up my dear wife

HEER sheepishly sorry I PREM put his finger on her lips

PREM keep quite in friendship first rule is no sorry on thank you.

HEER with a smile PREM whisper lets go in if PREET see us here like this he will not let us live he will tease us you know him my naughty brother.

HEER quickly get up AHH.

PREM: what happened?

HEER: my neck I cannot turn it.

PREM: rubbing it you slept the whole night like this my dear giving her a pat on her head. SORRY why not you waked me up I do know when I went to sleep when you were running your fingers in my hairs.

HEER with a smile

PREM: What?

You broke the rule.

PREM: oh I really did punishment for me holding her hand pulled her and hugged her

HEER let me go PREET will come out.

PREM let him come we are just sitting here is he have any problem then.He picked her up in his arms and went in HEER could not do any thing in reaction he was so fast.

MAA: beta go and wake them up see if they like to come down for breakfast or let them have there.

VEERA: I will not go Ask MEHER

M AA: you both go

PREET: me too.

We all go DIDI

HEER combing her hairs wearing a very beautiful out fit PREM lying on bed looking at her but pretending he is still sleeping.

HEER: PREM get up I know you are not sleeping why you are doing this you are totally different person like a small child in front of me and for world best business man.

She tickle him he hold her hands and kissed her check

Knocked at the door.

HEER leave me.

PREM: one min last touch to your make up he kissed her don't know when we will be alone again.

HEER with blush face open the door

DIDI hugged her

PREET: BIG B you are still sleeping

PREM: she did not wake me up.

PREET looked at both

HEER with an angry look

VEERA what are you wearing? How old fashion are you both sister.

PREM: face turns red. WHY? What is wrong in this?

VEERA: BHAI you were not like that.

PREET: VEERA behave.

PREM with anger got up. HEER quickly came between PREM and VEERA

DIDI: you both come down we are waiting

PREM: I am not feeling hungry.

They all went out PREET push VEERA out of the room and closed the door.

HEER holding his hand ?why you got so angry PREM she will take some time to accept me and MEHER?

PREM; she better do it quickly or I will.

HEER: PREM calm down she made him sit again and knee down in front of him

PREM: I will not tolerate again.

HEER: Ssshhh. I know you love me. But please if you will do like this she will never come close to me she is bit different from you all.holding his hand next to her lips .

thinking what is his problem why he is behaving like this ? What he is hidding .................. put her head on his knee . to be cont sorry to up date late hope you guys like
Edited by pisces26 - 16 years ago
tanyaaaa26 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
it was superb mindblowing do cont soon i will be waiting
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sun-j

wow asome wat is hidding?????mmm i really wana know plz continue soon!

luv
priya(sis)

wait and see 😉 he is hidding some thing which i dont know my self right know INSHAALALH tomorrow we all will know that
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
that was a very cute part....love the prem-heer scenes.....i hate Veera...but i know Heer will make her accept n love heer...after all she is soooooo sweet........plz do update soon..........
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Posted: 17 years ago
#90
i love veera for being exteremely hateable and heer for being so easily lovable!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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