parineeta pg.10_part.1 (5/12/13)

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Preity!! 🤗 Superb start! Loved the perfect Bengali touch to the story! ⭐️ I'm really eager to read more.. So do continue soon 😉.. Dhruv-Saanchi first meeting was really cute.. And then little Dhruv came and said sorry to her.. Loved it.. Waiting for the next.. Thank you for the pm.. And take care of my Jiju 😉😆

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Syed695

@Syed695

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Superb..!!! Loved their first meet...and the best he addressing Sanchi as didi..that will b d least v want..but then they r kids for now..Like it n Thanks for the PM Preity!!

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Brilliant I cud visualize evrything its like reading a Bengali novel

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AARMAY1

@AARMAY1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#94

please do continue, nice story loved it.

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_IcePrincess_

@_IcePrincess_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Awesome start Preitzz👏 Sorry for being a lil late in commenting, as usual didn't check my inbox from a long long time😃
Love the backdrop, my favorite the old bengal village! The background itself makes the story interesting to me😆 The prologue seemed good, the first chapter superb. Waiting for more...
Oh, and I caught a familiar name too, Guwahati, eh?😉
PM when you update...May be a lil late at times but will read this one whenever get time for sure! Take care😊

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preity_d

@preity_d

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: _IcePrincess_
Awesome start Preitzz👏 Thanks Archie 🤗 Sorry for being a lil late in commenting, as usual didn't check my inbox from a long long time😃 I knew you'll be late 🤣
Love the backdrop, my favorite the old bengal village! The background itself makes the story interesting to me😆 The prologue seemed good, the first chapter superb. Waiting for more... Bong connection you know 😆 we get attract easily 😳
Oh, and I caught a familiar name too, Guwahati, eh?😉 another connection, will ask some info for further extension of story 😉
PM when you update...May be a lil late at times but will read this one whenever get time for sure! Take care😊 I knew u'll be late, but will surely PM you, who doesn't want a feedback from a writer 😉like you 😃