FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 9

Originally posted by: jess.amit<3

B-R-I-L-L-I-A-N-T!T-H-A-N-K 😃 Y-O-U
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!!!WHOOOOOOOOHOOOOOOOOO
Haaaaaaaai vaari jaanvaan tere thay rimaaaaaa!!hehe...I dunno whether there is a reply for that but if so...please tell me...😳😆
WOW what a beautiful part! hai..i was seriously blushing and chewing my nails thru-out the whole update! the neev-ayesha part and than the michi part!!😆 was really very good!It's coz you were forcing yourself to read all of it before the Michi part haina???😆
I love AYESHA!😆..yaar ur tapori language is so gooood! hehe do you think so...I dunno...I'm finding it difficult...
it sounded so good and really felt like ayesha wa saying it!😳phew...
man like always the way u write..i imagine everything the exact same way..!GOOD! lol...😉
they should make a new serial named AANKHEIN and copy this aha...kayamath re-birth as aankein? kyun LOL😆storyline..god dammit its going so well!👏👏😳Thanks hun...
okay im off to read it again.! 😆 MORE READING? dont do yourself an injury hun...😆😉
Thaaaaaank u jaaaanu🤗
Keep updating hun..ur ffs are my reason to live!😎🤣.. seriously!😆hehe...meri bhi...
I loooooooooooove ju!
Jessu<3

THANK YOU by lubly jably gol matol sweetpie...😃

Originally posted by: jinc118

Rima change the title to "Part 2"Thanks for that JC...hehe btw...were there many typos?😳...I'm too exhausted to check...

Was wondering about the special mention of "creative liberties" to me...but now i realize that you chorified my gajar ka halva😡.haan...and apologies and HUGS🤗...Sowieeeee..chalta hai darling for you.😃😃ahaha I knew you would be understanding...YOU'RE THE BEST..that's right people...you heard me...whooooooo JC😉 Because i dont' see Neev and PL any other way.okay...that's good...neither did I but you know me...I forget things easily... We both are using the same character that Neev was when the show began and if we make our Neev's similar...its inevitable.you are the besttttttt ever...thanks hun...😊

I love the equal focus on Neesha and Michi.Yes, I'm going to try and maintain that...
Wondering tho about Ayesha and Prachi's similarities. First Neev thought that she almost looked like PRachi in her salwar like elegant and more refined. and then Milind thought Prachi was Ayesha in the dark.yep, that was harder to explain hehe..is the Inder-Amrita story still the same? You'll see...

I don't know who i love more. NA or MP...or NP, MA or NPL or PA😆 I love the link between all of them. its all sweet and hunky dory so far. Lets see where you are headed.aaaahh thats good...I like them ALL...headed towards it pretty soon...😆

THANK YOU JC! *Muah*😉

Originally posted by: chituku

READ IT,AWESOME JAAN WWWWOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW 👏 every charecther and charecterization is done beautifuy,i luv neev awwwwww such a flirt, awwwww millsi blushing i can totally imagine him,fantabulous ,awesome, damn gooooooooooooooooodddddddddddddd everything in the dictionary that hassame meaning jaan ilu ilu ilu 🤗 prachi is choooooooooo chweet i luv this girl sooooo much.ayesha i luv her toooooooooo.reminds me of someone i knew who doesn't think twice to slap someone who messes wid her and doc knows abt her he he he 😃 even though u r gonna hit me can't help it but ask UPDATE SOOOOOOOONNNNNNNN JAAN 😃

chitsssssssss *HUGS* AWW I lub you soooo much...like I always say...my biggest fan...(plus Jessu or she'll kill me...)😉...hehe...okay who does she remind you of? PM meeeeeeee right this intance!! Glad you like ALL the characters...they deserve it...😃 THANK YOU so much...😃

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

THANK YOU JC! *Muah*😉 lolz...luv you too hun.😃

Originally posted by: jinc118

Originally posted by: devilnangel

Wow u started a new FF aha...Yes I have...😉
Read the first 2 parts, LOVED IT aww good good...
I like the way u r portraying all 2 of them..Milind and Ayesha living in the chawl and Prachi and Neev bestfrinds Thanks you...hopefully you'll love them all...😃

When i was reading i thought Ayesha would end up working for Neev, but even this works phew...actually the first thought never crossed my mind interestingly...😆

This FF seems to be very fun-going hehe...at the moment...😉

Can;t wait 4 the next part, update soon!!

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Rima, fantastic update!! I loved every bit of it. This looks like a light-hearted ff. ahhh deeps I updated at 2.45...and then thought I'd just missed you...lol...um, it wont be light hearted...much...you know me and drama...

So Ayesha got a job to help Prachi. Now Neev will be in Shah mansion all the time. 😆 Loved PL-Neev conversation and he calls her sweetheart.😆 Yep...Neev will never want to leave...lol...yes, I love N-PL...even in the show...😭

Milind got the chance to meet Prachi again and that too when the light went off.😳 Prachi is so sweet.😳 hehe...both discovering each other in darkness....

Waiting for the next update. 😛