FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 61

Originally posted by: jinc118

Rims...jc...🤗

Deep Sigh.... uh oh😆

Main kya kahoon...i am disturbed a bit after reading...maybe because i know whats comingYes...I bet you wished I posted ages ago now...😆...otherwise i think i'd be really really happy that Neesha are making progress however slow it might beSLOW?!😆...They got married!! sse zyaad fasht kya ho sakta hain?😉. Ayesha is so so scared and withdrawn...poor thing. But i feel most terribly for Neev.I know! Me too...I actually empathised alot with Ayesha but soemhow it ended up like this...feeling worse for Neev I am glad that Ayesha is trying...tho the problem with not communicating is evident between them...still they are trying to be understanding. Yes, they are....

It was a bit difficult to get this kind of Neesha..like you said the continuity wasn't there.Yes, I knew alot of people would have trouble with that...I even considered posting it as a seperate sort of companion piece like for andaaz...but it would have been sort of the same anyway...it's because there was a large chunk in the middle for them that you guys have to just assume and I was too lazy to write. Neesha were like this when you left off and though you gave a brief on what happened, it was still hard to adjust to them being this way. I can imagine...But once that was done...i simply have no wordsLOL...😆...now thats not possible😉. I am so glad you chose to share this with us. Their story definitely needs to be told not because they didnt' get their due in the show but because you've done it so beautifully. aww Thats so nice JC...got this loopy grin on my face now!😆...

I will never be happy completely without Michi...but i needed to read this.Yes, I can imagine...but JC😡😆...I know you are one of the few who would actually appreciate them on their own. or you better be! Did you know I originally planned to write aakhein as a Neesha fic btw😆... Thanx hun.
Ok when will you post the next one.😛tom or friday I hope anyway.

P.S. i didn't go into details..but i did notice everything...the halva eating...what followed...the convo on the bed...the fact that he would extend his had before and never touch though she willed him to...and the ending...when i read her to be asleep i was just as angry as Neev but then i was glad she didn't run back into her room. This Neesha is completely different or maybe a leap higher than what i had imagined.JC😆😆😆did you just add those comments? Didn't read them the first time around...and OMG! I was wondering whether you had or not😲🤣...how did you guess?...but glad you did and hopefully liked them too! Thanks JC...now you update update update😃...

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Main kya kahoon...i am disturbed a bit after reading...maybe because i know whats comingYes...I bet you wished I posted ages ago now...😆..Yes i do..otherwise i think i'd be really really happy that Neesha are making progress however slow it might beSLOW?!😆...They got married!! sse zyaad fasht kya ho sakta hain?😉. Isse jyaada....haha...i meant within this part...even after being married for i think a while Ayesha has just now learned to trust him and try to convince herself that he is not going anywhere...Imean she got a commitment from him which her mother never got...he married her...phir bhi doubts to such great extent...tho i do understand her so not complaining...i just feel really bad for Neev.

i simply have no wordsLOL...😆...now thats not possible😉. Yes its possible...trust me.😆😆😆

I will never be happy completely without Michi...but i needed to read this.Yes, I can imagine...but JC😡😆...I know you are one of the few who would actually appreciate them on their own. or you better be! Did you know I originally planned to write aakhein as a Neesha fic btw😆... lolz...yes i do like Neesha for themselves...and i do have enough dose of Michi from the other writers..isiliye toh...maaf kiya tumhe. 😆😆
Ok when will you post the next one.😛tom or friday I hope anyway. Ok 😛

P.S. i didn't go into details..but i did notice everything...the halva eating...what followed...the convo on the bed...the fact that he would extend his had before and never touch though she willed him to...and the ending...when i read her to be asleep i was just as angry as Neev but then i was glad she didn't run back into her room. This Neesha is completely different or maybe a leap higher than what i had imagined.JC😆😆😆did you just add those comments? Didn't read them the first time around...and OMG! I was wondering whether you had or not😲🤣...how did you guess?...but glad you did and hopefully liked them too! Thanks JC...now you update update update😃... Yes i added that...thats why its called P.S>...grrr...hehe....i thought you might wonder...and i did love it and relished reading it. And i am working on the update...you wouldn't believe i have 5 sentences done.😆 no its only Milind that is making me get stuck...like i said..sometime i just don't have the right words.

Originally posted by: meteora_smt

Rima before I start reading... is this a part I've already read, or something new!!! 😊

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

JC--i for some reason can't get over the fact that the Michi storyline is left unwritten! if it were on the similar track i wouldn't have bothered but with her being blind and him being typically poor....it was such a novel idea!! i just can;t get over it!! :((

Originally posted by: shabzc1

WOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! thats all i can say at the moment...u really have a way with words, i loved his part. the awkwardness, reluctance and fear were depicted really well👏Thank you Shabz...glad you thought so😃made me really happy there...😆

i felt bad for neev when he would come home and eat alone but i loved how he took the first step and made ayesha realise their relationship is for keeps. Yes he did and I love him for it...now it's up to her...she needs to stop being so scared...i absolutely love ur neesha, its a shame ur not continuing with michi, but atleast i'l get my fill of neesha from u😊aww shabz...thanks for understanding.🤗

looking forward to the next part.Soon shabz soon😉😆 (you know what that means right?😆)