FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 60

Thank you so much Livelikeaqueen😃...

I apologise again to you guys...I just didn't have much of a story sketched out for Michi and I cant start now, it's too time consuming. Glad you liked them a lot though and there are many other wonderful FFs that have them so you wont be deprived. I want this to be a Neesha swansong😆

Originally posted by: fahimataq

ooohhh my gggood 😲

🤣WHATS WRONG?

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

🤣WHATS WRONG?

Originally posted by: fahimataq

nothing u finally finally posted it😆

im speechless right now....i simply LOVEDDDDDDD IT!! Dont know any other way to appreciate this part😳 Im gonna miss this FF soooooo much i will never ever ever forget it!!!😊😊😊

😆LOL...How longs it been a month now...I changed a lot of it...remember I told you...take a read of the end bits...😃...also I got 2 more parts coming up.

DID RIMA JUST UPDATE..OR AM I DREAMING😕😲

Rima...it was a really good! there is no end or no praise enuff to talk about your writing skills...you always bring the characters alive with your writing...even though i am partial to Michi..i enjoyed the Neesha track...My only genuine question would be why did you totally decide to stop writing about the Michi storyline...did you get bored with it....I always thought that you would not leave the story in such a lurch ..

Originally posted by: panache

Rima...it was a really good! there is no end or no praise enuff to talk about your writing skills...you always bring the characters alive with your writing...even though i am partial to Michi..i enjoyed the Neesha track...My only genuine question would be why did you totally decide to stop writing about the Michi storyline...did you get bored with it....I always thought that you would not leave the story in such a lurch ..

😆I'm glad you liked it! It took me ages to read that! I'm so surprised people have read it so quickly but glad to have your comments anyway. Everyone is partial to Michi, perhaps I am too but not in my fic and I guess it does show right. I did get bored/disinterested/uninspired...which is a terrible thing...especially after I've been advised multiple times to put aside my feelings for the show😆😆😆I kept thinking I would get over it but it aint happened, so I thought it best just to move on. I needed to post the Neesha parts because I felt very passionate about it when I wrote it and if I am saying this myself...I felt like their story needed/deserved to be read more than anything else, for myself mostly.

Thanks Sangee!⭐️

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Originally posted by: jess.amit_3

DID RIMA JUST UPDATE..OR AM I DREAMING😕😲

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gunna read asap rims..thanks jaan😛

😵 Nope...it's very much true😆...let me know what you think sweetie..

Oh Reems why do you do it get me addicted to something andthen leave it you sadist..... Ok Must i tell but I think I should it was INCREDIBLE..... I loved it fromthe very bottom of my heart not just the love making because it was complex..... rather everything. Neev's patience is applaudable and I'm sure had he been given the chance he'd have done the same in the serial too, given Ayesha a chance. Ayesha is scared, vulnerable but too much on guard though I'm happy she chose to reach out to him afterall. It's not easy being lonely specially when you'r bound to a person you crave the most. I hope your Michi are more hotter than this cuz if they're not I'm gonna break your skull.

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Oh Reems why do you do it get me addicted to something andthen leave it you sadist..... Ok Must i tell but I think I should it was INCREDIBLE..... I loved it fromthe very bottom of my heart not just the love making because it was complex..... rather everything. Neev's patience is applaudable and I'm sure had he been given the chance he'd have done the same in the serial too, given Ayesha a chance. Ayesha is scared, vulnerable but too much on guard though I'm happy she chose to reach out to him afterall. It's not easy being lonely specially when you'r bound to a person you crave the most. I hope your Michi are more hotter than this cuz if they're not I'm gonna break your skull.

Muneezaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...I'm sowieeee🤗 concerning the highlighted text! YOU CANT!😭I already explained to you!!!!!!! I'm not continuing this fic...just the last few parts I wrote ages ago...which are all Neesha...and I thought I wrote it in my note too...I'll check again...I dont want people to be disappointed, so I clearly mentioned it! Only Neesha parts...written mostly for myself😆 sad huh!

Muneeza...I knew how Ayesha felt...so it's alot easier to write her parts...and I enjoyed it evry much too I'm so glad you like it. 😊Thank you!

BTW! You completely ignored my comments on KIT😆