FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 31

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Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Rims, i loved it! loved it! loved it! awww deeps...😊

NA part was cute and hot. Awww...he picks her up and she blushes.😳 Haina...sab Neevu ka asar hain...😉

Prachi wants to meet Milind again and again. Loved the MP scene...u r too good with some scenes especially the dialogues. Milind saying "Makhi" made me laugh. 😆 LOL...You know seriously...I knew you'd find that funny...😊...and thank you deepa...

So hero is going to break the matki. Make the janmaastmi part ekdum dinchak.😛 aha...how did you guess?😆...zaroor zaroor...I'll see what I can do...

Waiting for the next part.

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Thanks hun...btw...those smilies are sooooooo cute😆

Originally posted by: Heeba

Ok... I'm back... whoooooooohoooooooooo

And yes Loved the Neev and Ayesha part a bit more than Michi...You are really making us fall in love with both the couples... That was the plan...Michi are great...but Neesha can be great too right?....😊

Neev is just too cute...and him wanting to kiss her again...It will happen soon right 😉 aha...you know me soooooooo well...😉
Loved it when he says "Jou hukhum sarkar"...Rims you are too good with dialogs... Lol...aww thank you...must be all those moviess...btw...did you get a chance to watch the one I said for your other fic?

The Michi was cute as well...can;t beleive he actually says "Makhi"...that made me laugh...Our hero can be no1 duffer at times...lol LOL...I know right....😆😆

Awww they want to meet each other again...janmaastmi... should be interesting.... I'll try to make it interesting...but it'll be a bigger step for Michi that part...😉...or maybe NA...😕...

Thanks for the update hun🤗 No probs hun...😊

Byw...when are you updating Andaaz..I'm still waiting for the third kid😉 😳 😆 Lol...I will...I know I keep saying soon...I just need time to think about it...lol...

Thanks Heebs😃

Originally posted by: panache

Rimz.... The last part was really really really interesting..you are building up the story like a jet express!! (I don't know if there is really one!!! 😆) In 5 chapters you have managed to make NA fall in love...MP - attracted to each other....Wow!! 👏 👏 LOL...Its because of all you guys!!!...I distinctly remember the Andaaz days...😆

Also, as Heebs said, i really enjoy your dialogues...why can't you become the dialouge writer for Kayamath...at least that way we won't hear Mere Milind...etc..etc... Lol...gladly hun...where do I apply?

But i am liking this FF...good good. Seriously, you are making it hard for me to choose....but your Shachi ff still remains the one FF that is very very close to my heart!! I wonder why?😉and also i loved the intensity and the storyline of Andaaz... 😳awww thanks...

Thanks Sangee...gosh, I hope you are not worn out now😉😆...hehe just kidding but seriously appreciate it...thank you😊

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

Thanks Heebs😃

nice part Rima 😊

milind ko prachi ki dhadkhan ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi ............... that so cute 👏

Milsi want to see prachi once more 😍

i really liked the part of PL and Ayesha scene 😊

waiting for d next part

Originally posted by: MURALIDHARAN99

nice part Rima 😊Hey Rewa...thank you hun...

milind ko prachi ki dhadkhan ki awaaz sunayi de rahi thi ............... that so cute 👏awww haina...aage aage dekho hota hai kya😉

Milsi want to see prachi once more 😍Deff...everyday, all the time if possible...

Neesha scene was so cute yaar esp when he was carrying ayesha 😍😍😍awww glad you're enjoying Neesha too...

i don t understand 1 thing yeh Neev hamesha ayesha ke lips ko kyun dekhtha rehatha hai 😆LOL...Bauhat sharati hain hamara Neev is liye😉😆

i really liked the part of PL and Ayesha scene 😊Yep, me too...thought there should be some bonding between them...

waiting for d next part will write as soon as I can hun...THANK YOU😃