FF:Aankhein(MP/NA) Complete, Pages 1, 2 and 3 - Page 25

Originally posted by: tweety_me14

Sorry for the delay Rima... I loved your update- as I always do..! aha...thanks Tweety😃 and no problem hun...
So Ayesha is Inder's daughter- exactly what I had also thought...But Im glad that Ayesha here is more sensible, sensitive and understanding, and the fact that she doesn't bear any grudge against Prachi makes me love her all the more... me too..I think its rather unfair to blame the family when they dont know anything either right...
So Neev has seen Inder there?ahah...yes I guess Neev will be able to take the truth out of her and probably this will make them come closer..! Just a thought....!! pretty close one Tweets
Loved the Michi scene...! ahah me tooIm in love with the way Milind comes to save Prachi all the time..!kash koi hume bhi aise bachata😉 Wish we had fot glimpses of that in Kayamath...! If only...*sigh*
I loved your update...! Dying to read the next one...!

Thanks hun...maybe tomorrow...😃

Originally posted by: azam12neelab

This was really wonderfuly written! LOL! 👏Thanks Neelab...

As sweety said i surely like ayesha for that reason too of her being more sensible and understanding!Yeh me too and she mad at the one person she has a right to be mad at... great part! plz don't make inder die in yr ff as i really like him and hope things get sorted out soon, i hope ayesha gets to be part of the family as i really her in your ff, you'll see what happen and he wont die till it's time...😊 and havn't really liked her before in other ff's as she is always with the kalnaayak types!! 😡 LOL..yes of course...

awwwwwwww miland saved her again!!!haaanji and i loved how he said that he would have to save her every time if she comes then! just so cute rimas! awww glad you thought so...thanks for the updat and hope he keeps on saving her everytime!LOL...

update quick plz,thanks!!!!! 😊

Thanks hun😃

Originally posted by: fahimataq

Rima an absolutely wonderful update!! I reallly loved it. aww thanks and glad you enjoyed it...

Ur story is like the kayamath one except NA and prachi been blind right. But the way you have wrote it, its jus brilliant. aww thanks again and yes you're right...it's like that...

I love the part where milind bashes those guys for prachi..hes so sweet!LOL..I know...little scary too... I hope he stops smoking for prachi, tht would be even more sweeter, wich i think he will.you'll see what I do with that... When he brings her to his house, i actually thot they would hug passionately considering the way prachi was holding his elbow. nahin yaar too soon for that yet😳...but dekhte hain...😉

So Ayesha knows that Inder is her father, thts different too.yes deff... I wonder what she will do. nothing much....yet...Inder, i reli never liked him and dont like him in this too, he is too selfish sometimes. I thought he was rather selfish too but I sitll loved him...it's going to be hard doing him justice actually...

I completely love the way you r brining NA together.ohh really thank you... I like the fact that Neev in your story is slightly more intelligent and cute.well even in the show he is...😊...damn creatives just dont utilise it enough... I think Ayesha will fall for him but im seriously curious to know what happens next. you'll find out soon enough...

Update soon!! 😉

Thanks hun...😃..

Originally posted by: MURALIDHARAN99

grt part yaar 👏👏Thanks rewa

loved the conv of ayesha and inder esp when she says "Bolaane aaya, tou bhi kisi aur ke liye"😆😆😆hehe why are you laughing hun...😆😆😆...its suppossed to be sad, but now you've got me thinking thats funny actually hehe😆😆

"Roz aayi, tou roz bachana padega…" aww........that s so cute 👏👏haan bachna padegha milsi ki naazroo se 😆😆LOL...Perfectly put...haina...

pls continue soon 😊👏will try hun...thank you😃

Originally posted by: milindkidewani

Ok Rimz....WHy did u have to think that I didn't like the update?? Did or didnot I wrote and I quote" mazaa aa gaya pad kar" I had to leave for dinner...samjha karo yaar!!! 😉 😆 😆 yaaar dont blame me...sab padh ke khayab ho rahe the...😆..maine socha jooth bolana pade iss liye sab baag gaye...😆😆😆

Ok I loved the way u wrote Ayesha and Inder's convo. Very very apt when she says "Bulane to aaye par kisi aur ke liye" 👏 👏 👏 Have I mentioned I love Ayesha's dialogues the most? 😳 aha, Yes you have...I'm glad you liked it actually...I thought people might find it too hard with Inder...
I love the fact that Inder is alive to take Ayesha's wrath and the poor girl doesn't go around bashing Prachi and her family for Inder's fault like in the serial.Yes you're right...thats exactly what I was thinking...I dont udnerstand the logic in the family having to suffer when they didn't even know about it... So for how long has Ayesha known that Inder is her father?? I m guessing not too long as then how didn't she know that Prachi is her sister opps I mean half sister. Yes...not that long...

Milsi baby is just too cute. Haina...unintentionally though...😆He loves saving her but doesn't show it. yes exactly...actually I adapted that scene from an MA scene...😕😆😆...Loved how whe muttered under breath that he will have to save her everytime she comes to chawl. LOL...me too actually...Seems ur Milind speaks a lot and has a hell of a temper.Yes thats true...though I loved silent Milind tooo Bechari Prachi ko daraa kar rakh diya... 😆 Haina...but he made up for it after...wiping her tears...😳

SO Neev saw Inder's car and he knows he came to meet Ayesha.yes he does... I m guessing if and when he finds out the truth about their relationship his bond with Ayesha will strengthen.that's what I'm trying to do... The only person I m worried about now is PL. me too...I hope you like what i'll do with her and Inder...

All in all a wonderful part. Thank you hun...
Love u Jaani!!! 🤗Love you tooooooooooooooooooooo, Hoon tari kubh abhari chu, teh maru saat aapu, thank you...<<<<First gujji lesson, treanslate please...😆

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey Rima lovely part 👏 so Ayesha is Inder's daughter n she knws it...sounds really interesting... 😉 Michi scenes were cute 😳 Very eager to c Prachi's reaction on knowing the truth...Plzz continue soon 😊

Thanks swetha...yes Ayesha knows the truth...glad you liked the Michi scenes hun...I know...the truth will come out soon enough...and Prachi will be quite distraught...will try to write asap!😃Thanks hun

Originally posted by: jess.amit<3

LET ME MAKE THIS CLEAR RIMA..this is all for fun! okay!🤣! no taking anything seriously babes!😉Jessu...jaani...I'm disappointed...itne dino mein tum muje bad itna hi jaanti ho?

now imm gunna comment on ur beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaauuuuuuuuuuuuuuuttttttttt ttttiiiiiiiiiiifffffffffffffffuuuuuuullllllll
update!😊FINALLY...Yaar 1 hour turned into 24!!!😆

Originally posted by: jess.amit<3

🤗*C-H-I-D-H-U Ki C-H-A-M-C-H-I*🤗And damn proud😳😆...
Haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii R-I-M-A😉😎 Ki haaaaal chaal thhode😎😆Sab changa ji...tussi batao mainu...
Achha sorry hun for the late comment..kal mujhe kahin jaana thha.Sara din!!😡😆😆
Prachi being blind still has such good sensors😆.LOL...Wah jessu...you caught on pretty quick about that😆.she sensed tension between ayesha and her father so quick.. I KNEW IT! HA! i knew this was coming..Ayesha is Inder's daughter!LOL...well done dear👏😆
i really love this line.
"Bolaane aaya, tou bhi kisi aur ke liye..." awww me too...
Awww Ayesha..i feel so bad for herHaina...never thought that would happen...
LMAO! Milind nain bhi kiya entry maari ek baar fir se..sab gundon ki waat ch lagaa di na😉..ohhhh i loooooooooooove him!😆 Bikul filmy hero ke maafik😉...yaar just imagien him...vest...budgling muscles...😳
And that cigarette scene was toooo funny and tooo cute! Yes milind, thats right..slide ur hand thru ur beautiful hair, turn around and smoke ur cigarette in peace😆 Sho adorable! hai main marjaaaaaaan😳 Loved this scene😳❤️aha...good good...more Michi moments yeh...ab khush?!!
Muaaah! my jaanu..beautiful part!Thanks hun...
Aaj update karde naaaaa please..aur haan doosra bhi😎😳Aaj waqt nahin milla...maybe tomorrow...😃
Love uuuuuuuuuuuuu! Love you too jaanu....Gujji lesson number two...Aapdi dosti, koi nathi toodi sak waanu...samjan padiyu??😃😉
Jessssssu<3

JENU forever<3😆CHIDHU ROCKS!

Originally posted by: zcbcc34