Poem - Silent plea of a tormented heart

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Hi Akka😛 . Sorry i am so late in commenting. I had actually seen the topic of the thread and thought that it was about the torment that poor viewers of Kayamath are going thru for the past 3 months or so. 😆 😆 But ahh what a poem. 😛 Dil khush kar diya yaar. Shall i assume that you put a lot of thought into it. THats what i think. At least for me it would require a lot of thinking to write something like that. Long and well put together poem and so apt for Mili baby. Thankyou Opti. 😃

I am once again encouraging you to write an FF. I think you have the imagination and the writing capability to do one easily...just give yourself the chance, if you have the time that is. 😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Thanks JC. Actually this poem was born when I was in the shower taking one of my longest baths (maybe 1/2 hour long which by my standards is like eternity). Maybe I was reminded of Shabbo in shower! About the FF, I really dont think I can do it. I really dont have the aptitude for it. I can think up scenes but not a full scale story. Moreover, very soon I'll be saddled with loads of work. So I will hardly get the time to continue it even if I start one. Wonder how frequently I can visit the IF too. But thanks for those encouraging comments.

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@-JC-

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: optimist
Thanks JC. Actually this poem was born when I was in the shower taking one of my longest baths (maybe 1/2 hour long which by my standards is like eternity). Maybe I was reminded of Shabbo in shower! About the FF, I really dont think I can do it. I really dont have the aptitude for it. I can think up scenes but not a full scale story. Moreover, very soon I'll be saddled with loads of work. So I will hardly get the time to continue it even if I start one. Wonder how frequently I can visit the IF too. But thanks for those encouraging comments.

lolz...i guess shabbo in shower is really an inspiration eh😉😆 I will continue to remind you that you can be an awesome writer. Someday you might decide that you have had enough and just to shut me up...you can write one.😊 But i understand that FF is not something to undertake when you dont' have the time....i totally understand that. i am suffering for it now.😆

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