Poem - Silent plea of a tormented heart - Page 2

these lines esp. brought tears to my eyes, opti:

Although I'm dying to reveal my love
To you whenever we're alone
Thoughts of your lover and of mine
Turn me into a stone

great 👏 👏
do take more long showers.

Yasmin, thanks for your appreciation. Michi really kindle all our latent skills I guess. I should really thank Michi for this.

Gawker, that was very sweet of you. I really did'nt realise I could make someone cry with my words! Thanks. Yeah, may be I need to take longer showers, that is if I can tear myself away from IF. I was desperate to get out and type out what was in my mind before I forgot the lines!

Opti 🤗 nice poem SHACHI SHACHI i loved it.

Originally posted by: optimist

Silent plea of a tormented heart

I know not when you entered my heart

I know not why you did

All I know is you invade my senses

Though to you I can't be candid

I try to bridle my feelings in a leash

But alas they always break free

Leaving me confused and unsatisfied

Till your beautiful countenance I see

I wonder if there is a bond between us

That dates back to our previous birth

When you and I could have been lovers

Rejoicing in each other's mirth

Although I'm dying to reveal my love

To you whenever we're alone

Thoughts of your lover and of mine

Turn me into a stone

I struggle with my conscience every day

Wondering what's wrong and what's right

All I know is that for you my love

Even death I'm prepared to fight

I cannot stand to see tears in your eyes

Nor remain quiet when you're abused

I'll fight all forces which give you pain

Although why, I'm still confused

I wake up each day with hope in my heart

That you may someday reciprocate

My love for you in the same measure

And free me from this present state

I want to unite with you, body and soul

And bind you in a scorching kiss

Forgetting the harshness of reality

I want to live with you in eternal bliss

So will you come to me, my darling?

Can you hear my silent plea?

For you I thirst every living moment

From my misery please free me.

Please leave your comments.

Opti darling.....just read Kits poem and now yours.....👏 Fantasti dear....really brilliant ...and superb.....👏

You brought out Milland feelings so beautifully......and if taking long showers and watching Milli shower😉😳😛 does the trick...in getting you to write poems again...then dear....do more of it...😆

WOW, cant say more than that opti, thats such a lovely poem 👏 👏

Thanks Sumu, nick-bon and shabz

Krishna, hope all my long showers are as productive! Thanks for your appreciation.

Opti how r u yaar ,,,MICHI dint won so r u dipressed like me 😭 😭

No Sumu, Michi does not need to win any stupid award to prove they are the best. They are the best for the countless Michians. Their love is pure and uncorrupted by OCD so far. This is itself a rarity in a BT soap. Hope they keep it that way.

OCD.., Opti, you and your abbreviations..I think we should have a thread with a list of the short abbreviations. Just the other day someone was asking what does Milsi mean.