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Posted: 17 years ago

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munezza brillant part 👏 i loved prachi-preeti interactions 😳 de r so cute 😳

Thx Minu dear. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
Sumu and Minu I've jotted down part 4 still am not happy with it I need to get it right I'll update tomorrow Inshallah!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Munee darling what ever u write about MICHI will be fine sweety just copy the content what u wrote and paste it here.we will read it .
then u can paste anather version what u find is nice tomm.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Really cute FF
Love the interaction of Prachi and Preity

Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Honestly I tried to make it concise.....😆 For Sumu hun hope this keeps you going through the weekend.

Part 4

The meeting had finally been called to an end Milind rubbed his temples wearily as he closed his eyes and laid his head on the cool glass top of the black mahogany table. What a day first the nanny then this meeting he had finally been able to convince his financers that the inauguration would be held at a later date. His head throbbed from fatigue and desire for a smoke, he still hadn't even had lunch. He checked his watch which confirmed the time as six thirty it was past office hours all his employees would have left by now, he was instantly reminded of Preeti. Picking up his coat from the chair he sauntered to Madhu's cabin.


Madhu's desk was a mess piled high with data, statistics and current cash transactions as usual she was the last one to wrap up her work she greeted him with a warm smile as he stepped inside. She explained that the girl was Prachi Shah and had come to inquire about him she wanted to return him his file and was looking for hers. Madhu then gently shook Prachi's shoulder to awaken her, she awoke with a start not registering her whereabouts as familiar but Madhu gently reminded her that she was at Mishra Towers and that Mr Mishra was over with his meeting. Prachi then noticed the stranger studying her intently she carefully picked up Preeti from her lap and handed her over to him. It seemed he had had a tiring day his eyes were bleary and his appearance was greatly altered his coat hung loosely on his arm his shirt sleeves had been folded half way up his arms and the top three buttons of his shirt were left open revealing his bare chest. His hair was messed up and covered his forehead.

"I'm sorry woh aankh lag gayi thi meri." I'm sorry I dozed off Prachi had apologized she was surprised at herself she normally didn't doze off in unfamiliar territory yet here she seemed to have slept soundly. "It's ok " he had replied retrieving his file from her, Preeti's head now lay resting on his shoulder while her arms circled his neck. "Tang to nahin kiya iss ney?" Did she worry you now he had inquired as they walked towards the elevator "Nahin" No she smiled "Meri file ?" My file? she had asked as they stepped in the elevator. "Mili nahin kiya bhijwaiyi to thi mainey!" Didn't you get it I had sent it pulling out his cellphone he called up his manager it seemed that the guy had been busy somewhere and had subsequently forgotten to deliver the file to her.

They reached the parking lot and waited patiently as the manager returned in a few minutes along with the file "Sorry Sir woh Mehra Sahab aa gaye they or phir der ho gayi . I'm sorry " Sorry Sir Mr Mehra was here and I got late. I'm Sorry this time he had apologized to Prachi. "Koi baat nahin" No problem Prachi had managed with difficulty it was hard thinking about the answer she'd have to give to her mother. Seeing her lost in her own world Milind proceeded to strap Preeti in her seat in the car." I can drop you if you want." he had offered afterall she had taken care of Preeti the whole evening it was the least he could do." No thanks main chali jaungi" No thanks I'll manage she had replied and walked out of the parking lot, once at the stop she waited for her bus in patience the evening traffic was thick and the buses were crowded. When the fourth bus sped past her she became irritated and decided to walk all the way home. She had not had anything since morning and felt dizzy with fatigue.

Walking down the road she was assailed with memories of her father she didn't recall ever having to go without food or walking on the roads in such deplorable conditions. Her life had been one of a fairytale and now it seemed very much real but she had to put up a brave front for her mother and Daadi. She thought of how quickly they had lost everything her brother Alaap had turned out to be the black sheep in the family. His money swindling had left them in piles of debt his father had been unable to keep up with his ever increasing demands, Shah Industries was a sunken ship and financers shirked away from it.


Ultimately Alaap had led them to their ruin Inder unable to keep with the mounting financial burden had died of heart seizure on a stormy night, the very next day his company's shares had plunged into nothingness Shah Industries was bankrupt they had not known it but Inder had and it was this increased mental pressure that had caused his heart to stop beating. Alaap had fled to Simla with his rich and boisterous girlfriend Suyesha and now lived off her. Soumya had succeeded in attaining a scholarship and had left for Pune. Bobby had taken up tuitions which he conducted in the evenings his tuition money was used to pay rent and electricity bills. She herself had been working as an assistant to an interior designer who had wrapped up her business recently opting for greener pastures in Canada.

She walked blindly on the road and did not notice a car approaching her, snapping out of her thoughts she heard tyres screeching and felt the car fender hit her on her knees. She winced in pain trying to shield her eyes from the glaring lights of the car. "Arey dikhta nahin hai kiya? Abhi agar main brake nahin lagata to pari hoti kisi hospital main." Can't you see? If I hadn't stepped on the brakes you'd be lying in some hospital she heard a male voice lash out at her in anger. She collapsed on the road clutching her knees in obvious pain when she saw a palm extended out to her taking it thankfully she managed to stand on her feet she looked up to see the same charcoal eyes peer at her in concern.

"Kiya ker rahi thi beech road per ?" What were you doing in the middle of the road? he asked crossly. Not being able to bear the searing pain that coursed through her legs she felt her vision blur as tears spilled on her cheeks, she picked up her file and smoothed her shirt. Milind saw her tears in the dazzling light cast by the car headlights he understood she was hurt and softened his tone "Ab betho gari main" Now get in the car he had ordered and she silently obeyed seating herself in his sleek black Kompresser. She could not believe her fate she had twice been caused to fall that too by the same man. She watched him drive in silence his eyes focused on the road ahead. Preeti was now awake and gurgled in happiness as she saw Prachi, she turned around in her baby seat stretching her small arms to Prachi

"Preeti nahi" Preeti no Milind had reprimanded her but it fell on deaf ears.She had now started kicking in her seat and wailing mournfully "Agar yeh zid ker rahi hai to aap issey mujhey dey dein." If she wants to come here why don't you give her to me Prachi had been unable to see her this way, assuming this as the best possible way of stopping her whining Milind unstrapped her and handed her to Prachi sitting in the back of the car. From the rear view mirror he could see how Preeti doubled over laughing as Prachi gently tickled her tummy, she then proceeded to check out Prachi's earrings touching them in amazement. "Aapko chahiye kiya? " Do you want it? Prachi had asked kissing her on her cheek she smiled as she took off her earring and handed it to Preeti who gurgled in amusement."Kahaan drop ker duun?" Where should I drop you? Milind had asked focusing on the road ahead she proceeded to tell him her address and within minutes they stood beneath her chawl house. "Thanks " Prachi had said as she stepped out on the muddy path closing the car door with a thud she ascended the stairs to her house with a heavy heart.

She could hear voices emanating from her house."Behenji main kitni baar keh chuka huun keh kiraya theek waqt per dey diya karein lekin aap log suntey hii nahin. Mujhey har haalat main kal apna paisa chahiye warna yeh makaan khaali kerwa duunga." Sister I've told you countless times to pay the rent money on time but you people never listen. I want the money by tomorrow or else I'll get this place vacated It was the landlord and he certainly did not seem too gay Prachi watched him leave in a huff. She wiped her face and stepped in her house, her mother had been waiting for her return anxiously. "Kahaan reh gayi thi Prachi main kitni pareshaan ho gayi thi malum hai" Where were you Prachi I was worried she reprimanded her. "Interview kaisa gaya Prachi?" How was the interview? she had asked hope flickering in her eyes. "Maa woh interview nahin ho paya kal hongey interviews aaj to bas kuch hii candidates key interviews ho paaye baaqi logon key kal hongey." Mom I didn't get interviewed only a few candidates had theirs today the rest will be interviewed tomorrow She saw the hope die out in Premlata's eyes but she smiled at her encouragingly "Koi baat nahin tum kal chali jaana Prachi. Kuch khaya tumney?" It's ok you can always go tomorrow. Did you eat anything? She could see her daughter had had a rough day "Yeh chot kaisey lagi?" How did you get hurt? Premlata now looked at her grazed elbows

"Kuch nahin maa bas woh gir gayi thi halki sii to chot hai aap pareshaan mat ho" It's nothing mom I just tripped and fell it's a small bruise you don't worry nonetheless her mother had gone to fetch an ointment for her. "Maa ko kaisey bataaun keh aaj file badal jaaney ki wajah sey mera interview cancel ho gaya." How do I tell mom that my interview got cancelled because of the file switch she had mused aloud. Just then she heard a knock on her door she turned around to see Milind standing there holding her file "Gaari main bhuul gayi thi." You forgot it in the car he had stated handing it to her "Oh !" Prachi smacked her forehead gently "Main bhi na..." Milind had turned back down the stairs before she could utter another word.

Part 5 pg 20

Edited by blind horizon - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanks for the update...will read and come back 😳

Lovely update Muneeza....
I'm loving the way Prachi and Preity are bonding....so cute and natural...
Mr Mishra...u better appoint her as the new nanny...lol

I think Milind will her the job at his office...

Thanks a lot hun...do continue when time permits
Edited by Heeba - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

WOW!! U updated....let me take a read first!!!

Very nice update...loved the way Preety n Prachi have bonded.....felt so sorry for prachi!! She got knocked out 2 times coz of Milsi....😆😆

Did Milind hear the landlord??? I wish he gives her a job😳 Will wait for ur next update..😊

Edited by milindkidewani - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
fantastic part muneeza👏...poor prachi, she fell twice in the same day at that too coz of milsi lol...i feel sorry for her, she seems so defeated i was hoping milsi would appoint her as the nanny in the office itself, there goes my prediction down the drain 😆 i loved the whole scene in the car, preeti is one cute hun and her interaction with prachi was well written, and im glad milsi has noticed their growing bond.did milsi hear the landlord asking for the rent? i hope he did, maybe he will give her the job offer the next time they meet knowing full well that she will take it coz she needs it.

thank u sooo much for the update...eagerly waiting for the next part. 😃
Edited by shabzc1 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sum2005

Munee darling what ever u write about MICHI will be fine sweety just copy the content what u wrote and paste it here.we will read it .
then u can paste anather version what u find is nice tomm.
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Sumu Jaanu I updated now read it and tell how you found it.😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: swt_gurl001

Really cute FF
Love the interaction of Prachi and Preity

Continue soon 😳

Thank you so much sweetheart. And I will.😊

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