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Posted: 17 years ago

#671

Originally posted by: tweety_me14
JC this part was lovely! Im so happy the Neev and Ayesha are still married! The dining hall sequence was cool! Loved the way Neev compared Ayesha to a cat!! 😆 ..
What tragedy awaits Anjali???Im scared for her.....Hope she'll be alright....
Waiting for your next update!

She'll be alright don't worry. Even though she may not be a main character of my FF...i do love her.😃 My next update...hmm...i won't set a date. I am working on it but its a huge chapter and i am trying to see if i can balance Neesha and Michi portions in one chapter. But its looking like that may not be possible so i'll have to do 2 chapters. Its still a long and intense chapter. So it might take me a few days more. I also have school work to finish...thats why i am not able to write so much.

Originally posted by: blind horizon
Jc read the update faster this time 😊 Well I liked the family part with Michi bonding also liked Neev and Ayesha together they feel cute if only it were for real in the serial too. 😊

danx. I know my Neesha are just😳 I know ppl feel the lack of Michiness in my FF currently, but like i said, Michi are at a gradual pace in their relationship...whereas Nessha are right at the climactic point. Once their issues resolve, the drama will revolve mainly around Michi and they will become more like supporters/opposers..depending on...

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Posted: 17 years ago

#672

Originally posted by: zcbcc34
JC!! Neev, he is such a cutie!!! LOVE HIM!! Forget Ayesha...he can have Meeeeeeeee! lolz....Ayesha is not so bad yaar..you'll see why she behaves the way she does sometimes. But ya, Neevu is such a darling. I'd like him to have me instead.😆😆😆

My Fav scene was where he is waiting by the car for her and she comes to kick him...such a sweet moment.
😳more sweetness coming your way.😃

Have to admit, I skim read it quickly before work (though I was getting late😛 ) 😭😃I understand. and couldn't comment. But Am glad the way you handled Neesha Divorce...was really very good. Thankyou

CANNOT wait for more!! seriously...am loving these two so much! coming up next.😃

Aww when he didn't say anything but put his hand on hers in the car...that part really got me when she slowly pulled away. I didn't really expect them to be all lovey dovey straight away so glad you have done it the way you have and you said you have a reason for Ayesha's distance...really want to know what that is...
It'll come next update or an update after that. I just hope i write is well enough that people understand why Ayesha is the way she is and is somewhat justified.

ALSO Jungali Billi!!! awwwwwwwwwwwwwww lol poor guy, she must have bit him hard! for a moment I thought they were holding hands Michi style. haha. She did bite him pretty hard. She was very angry and acting somewhat irrationally.

THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago

#673

Originally posted by: shabzc1
the divorce didnt go through 👏 Nope i loved the way neev was joking around with ayesha, the poor woman was gutted when she thought the divorce had happened, the best part was ayesha finding out the truth and battering neev, I initially had a dialoge for him then...that he would sue for assault especially since they are outside the court he'll have witnesses...but then considering Ayesha's state of mind, i didn't think it was considerate to joke too much at that point. i didnt think id ever say this but he deserved those beats 😆 lolz, yes he did. 😆😆ayesha indeed is a wild cat waiting to be tamed by neev. lets c.

so anjali is off to meet kavya...hope all goes well for her. yes yes. I'll make sure she is ok..though she'll definitely have to deal with some sadness first.

thanx for the quick update JC 😊 Thanks for reading and commenting

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Posted: 17 years ago

#674

Originally posted by: pragalbha
I finally got to it JC!!!!!! 😃 😡thankyou😆

Chapter 32 : Milind actually apologized 😲 😲 😲 I am sure that's a first in his life!!! 😆 😆 😆 hey, hes not like that. He does apologize when he feels he did something wrong. But he has to think that he is wrong first.😆😆
The Ritwik, Prachi and Milind scenes were very cute 😊 And Prachi blowing Milind a flying kiss was soooooo endearing though a little unbelievable! 😆 why unbelievable??? She loves the guy. but can't tell him nor show any attraction towards him while he is awake. So she blows him a kiss when he is sleeping...her heart's desire. Why so unbelievable???
OK JC.....I have a guess/theory about those letters! Maybe, they were actually written by Prachi??? 😳 But somebody else gave them to Milind??
Mmmmm wait for it.😆😆😆
And I wonder why Anjali felt that her whole world was going to end or change?? I am curious to know about the Kavya-Anjali track.
well, Anjali was expecting something from this trip that would be big enough to be characterized as her biggest desire in life. So if she gets it, then she would be the happiest person in the world...so kinda like a big change in her life.

Chapter 33 : Ahhhhhh......my Neesha!!!! I read it twice!!! Stupid Ayesha hey........still beating round the bush 😡 😡 😡. No no hun. She knows she loves Neev and Neev knows it too. But there is reason for her behavior But I am glad that atleast Neev is on track and has decided to bring her on track too!!! 😆 😆 😆 oh yes. He is fully charged and ready to tackle his difficult wife.😆😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part 😃

thanx for the comments.

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Posted: 17 years ago

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great going! i really read every FF in this forum for kayamath and i think they are all so good! can;t wait for MICHI part! hope they relise their love for each other soon! At least this keeps me happy other than the stupied track in the show! plz continue! can't wait!

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Posted: 17 years ago

#676

Originally posted by: jinc118

Because.......we don't know the background yet hence cannot feel the emotion that Prachi is experiencing. Till now we have seen them get married out of compulsion, we have no idea what happened in their past....hence I am not able to relate to this feeling of her's. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

#677

A major part of this chapter was done today so i apologize if it looks like a hurried job.

Chapter 34 – Disappearing Walls
dedicated to Saima and Rima😃

Ayesha was again standing by the window of her room. How many times had she stood there pondering over the solutions to her problems. And how many times had it given her a solution, a peace that allowed her to sleep. But today no amount of staring into the darkness gave her any peace. When had Neev become so important in her life? When had she gotten herself so attached? It had been so much easier to believe that she didn't care. But now she had no excuse. Neev saw through her now. She couldn't lie and she didn't want to. She was tired. She was really tired. She turned to her bed but today the gap between the beds seemed wider. She walked over to the bed and grabbed her hand bag. She took out the card that her lawyer had given her this morning and stared at the name. She made a mental note to make an appointment the very next day. Though she didn't like the idea, but she knew this was probably needed. She didn't want to loose Neev. But she also didn't know if what she was about to do would bring them closer or push him further away. Either way, she was tired of hiding, lying, ignoring and most of all she was tired for being unhappy. She wanted to be happy. She deserved to be.

She heard Neev heading towards the room and quickly got under the sheets and closed her eyes turning her face away from the door. Neev was a little disappointed to find her asleep. She usually didn't sleep this early. He tried not to make too much noise as he changed his clothes and got into his own half of the separated bed. He stared at her sleeping back for a long time and didn't realize when he too fell asleep.

The next few days were quite busy for him as he rejoined the company in his old position. The office staff was really excited to have him back at work. They noticed the change in Ayesha's behavior towards him. Though they wouldn't say anything in front of him, Neev knew the little gossips going around during the breaks. Neev and Ayesha would come to work together, and that meant that Neev would miss his extra half hour of sleep after the alarm went off, and Ayesha would show up to work a half hour later than her usual time, they still made it a habit to go together. The morning rides would mostly be quite. Neev would try to bite his tongue every time he thought he wanted to crack a joke. He still had no idea what could tick her off and what would make her smile. The tough part was that she never made anything obvious. He would really have to observe closely to see the changes in her mood and that meant shutting his mouth and paying attention to her silence.
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Asha tai: "Prachi!!!!! tumhaara phone hai".
Prachi picked up the phone thinking it was her mom.
Prachi: "Hello.."
"Prachi," came a serious voice which was unmistakably Anjali's.
Prachi: "Anjali?, how are you?" Prachi chirped, glad and surprised to hear from her. "Aur Turkey kaisa hai. What disasters have you brought upon that poor nation?", Prachi joked.
Anjali: "Mein theek hoon Prachi. Tum kaisi ho?"
The warning bells were ringing in Prachi's head. Anjali didn't sound well. Something was wrong. She sounded…very upset.
Prachi: "Anjali, whats wrong? What happened?"
Her mind raced with the worst possibilities as she only heard silence for a while.
Anjali: "Prachi I wish…I wish you were here"
Prachi confirmed that something was terribly wrong because Anjali was chocking on her words and to her dismay she heard her crying on the phone. Anjali was crying. The last time Prachi had seen Anjali cry like this was at Inder's death. But even then she had been the strongest among all children. She had taken the burden to comfort all of them especially PL and help them get through the difficult time. But now she sounded broken and in despair.

Prachi: "Anjali please tell me what's wrong. Why are you crying like that? What happened Anjali?"
Anjali: "I am coming home Prachi," she said through her sobs. "And please don't tell Badi maa till I come back. Promise!"
Prachi: "Ok I won't. But tell me what happened. Why did you go to Turkey in the first place. You didn't even tell me that. I am really worried now Anjali. Please tell me that you are alright."
Anjali: "Prachi I'll be fine. I just…I just needed you…I'll talk to you when I come." Anjali seemed to have gotten a little control over her emotions. But Prachi was not at all reassured. It had been two days since Anjali left and she sounded devastated. What had happened in two days? But before Prachi could ask anything further, Anjali hanged up. Prachi didn't have a number to try calling back. She couldn't ask her mother for a contact number either. She would just have to wait for Milind.

When Prachi finally got the number and tried calling, no one answered. Seeing her concerned face Milind asked, "Is everything ok?" Prachi didn't know if she was supposed to say anything to Milind. Anjali had only told her to not say anything to her mother. Prachi was so worried about Anjali that she thought it might be a good idea to tell Milind. Maybe he could find out what happened from Kavya.
Prachi: "Its Anjali. She called earlier and she sounded…something is wrong. She was crying. She doesn't cry, Milind. She told me she was coming back and hanged up without saying much else. I am really worried about her."
Milind could see that on Prachi's face. He tried calling Anjali again but no one picked up. "Maybe she went out somewhere. We should try later" he said hoping that would ease her mind a little. Milind is right, Prachi thought. That's probably why she is not picking up and it wouldn't be right to bother Kavya. She could wait a little while. But her sixth sense was telling her something different. She didn't feel one bit of ease.

"You and Anjali…you guys are really close aren't you?", Milind asked seeing that the worried expression on Prachi's face was still there.
Prachi came out of her reverie at the question. She smiled a little at the thought of their relationship. "Yes, we were always close. When she first came home after the adoption, she would only play with me. I guess because we were the same age. It was much later that she accepted the rest of the family. I don't know if we are like sisters or best friends, maybe both. But she often tells me that we are like halfs of each other. I just laugh at her because we are both so different."
Milind could see the difference between them but he wasn't sure which half he liked better. He was surprised by his own thought and drowned it in the conversation.

Milind: "Did she really go to Turkey for some work related purpose? I was asking because…because her trip to Turkey seemed a little fishy to me."
"What do you mean?", Prachi asked curiously.
"She said she was going for work but honestly I don't buy that. And now two days later she calls you crying and says she is coming back home?"
Prachi didn't answer.
Milind: "I had my doubts when she came to take you for the pag phere with Kavya when supposedly they only met at the wedding. How does she know him so well? As far as I know Kavya doesn't entertain female attention and he has his reasons for it. So I was a little surprised to see them coming to pick you up together. So you can't blame me for thinking that they knew each other from before. Is it possible that she went there to see him."

Prachi also knew that Anjali hadn't gone for work. There was something going on between Anjali and Kavya which Prachi wasn't aware of. She remembered that Anjali said she was going to meet Kavya. But why? She also knew what Milind was saying could not be the reason. If Anjali was faintly interested in Kavya, she would have told Prachi by now. But then, hadn't Prachi hid the fact that she was in love with Milind from everyone. Maybe Anjali was doing the same. But why? Prachi had a good reason to hide Milind's identity. If Anjali liked Kavya why would she want to hide it? No, that could not be the reason.

"No, there is nothing like that. I am sure there was a good reason for why they were together that morning. And Neev and Bobby were with them too," Prachi said still in her thoughts. "I am going to go check on Ritwik" she said heading out of the room. But Milind knew that she herself was not convinced that there was nothing between Anjali and Kavya and neither was he. Whatever had gone wrong it had to do with Kavya. And the thought bothered him. It bothered him that Kavya had done something to make Anjali cry. He was also wondering why Anjali had called Prachi only to cry and hang up the phone. Why couldn't she have explained the situation instead of making others worry for her. If she didn't want to share her problem then she shouldn't have called at all. At least others would sleep in peace, he thought as he watched Prachi leave the room. How inconsiderate of her. But she was like that and he knew that from his own experience.

The next morning, Prachi tried calling Anjali again but there was still no answer. She called Milind at work and requested him to call Kavya to find out what happened. Kavya told Milind that he didn't know why Anjali might be upset. He did, however, say that Anjali had wanted to leave for India but had cancelled her plans at the last minute. She had decided to stay and finish her work in Turkey. Milind didn't want to doubt what Kavya said because he had never lied to Milind before. But some part of him wasn't sure that Kavya wasn't lying now. Yet he told the same information to Prachi with a lot more conviction and she believed it. At least she was not worried anymore. And neither was he going to worry over that inconsiderate woman. Why did they have to call and find out from Kavya that she had decided to stay in Turkey. She spared no thought for other people's feelings and Milind now was disgusted with himself for holding onto her memories for so long. Even though he had cursed his fate for years, now he felt that maybe it was good fortune that his love towards her was not reciprocated.

A few days later Anjali did call Prachi and she sounded much better. Almost back to herself again. She never did tell what had bothered her to such an extent and Prachi didn't bring it up thinking that it might upset her again. She was just happy that Anjali was fine. Prachi felt the urge to share this with Milind but he simply didn't care anymore what happened to Anjali. Later he felt a little bad thinking that he had been rude to Prachi. It wasn't her fault that Anjali was such a ****. She didn't deserve his anger. She was not Anjali or Alaap or Inder Shah. She was very different from them all and he had realized that in all these days. She was acting like his wife in front of Asha tai though it was not part of their deal. She was kind to Sukriti and actually took the initiative to help Sukriti when she knew full well that if Sukriti got better, there would be a custody battle for Ritwik. And Milind had no doubt that Prachi considered herself Ritwik's mother and nothing less. Yet she was doing this and he didn't understand her reasons at all. More over, she never held a grudge against him. Though he had been rude to her multiple times, she seemed to readily forgive all his actions. Why was she being so nice that he was finding it harder and harder everyday to keep his hatred for the Shah's alive.

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A few weeks later.

It was Sunday again and Ayesha as usual got dressed and left for church before anyone else in the house noticed. But she was shocked to find Neev waiting by his car for her. He opened the door for her as she looked at him questioningly.
Neev: "I'll drop you", he said with a small smile.
Ayesha: "Why are you awake this early?"
Neev: "Because I wanted to drop you" he said casually, starting the car.
Once they were on the road he asked, "Ayesha, why do you go every Sunday…I mean you never miss a single week?"
Ayesha: "That's not true, I do become lazy and miss a week sometimes."
Neev: "You think you are lazy? Then what do you say of me?"
She gave a small laugh in response and Neev noticed the unfamiliar ring to the noise she made.
Ayesha: "I go basically because I get some much needed peace there, and a sense of satisfaction from the work I do."
Neev: "Do you have any work to do today?...i mean the volunteer work you do."
Ayesha: "Why do you ask?"
Neev: "I thought maybe we could do something today, like go out or something."
Ayesha smiled. "I am free in the evening," she said quietly. "Perfect", he added as he made plans in his head.

Neev wasn't home when Ayesha returned. It was past 7 and Ayesha wondered if he had forgotten their little date. He wasn't picking up his phone either. And oddly no one in the house knew where he went. She was starting to get worried when she heard him and breathed a sigh.
Neev: "You are not ready yet?"
Ayesha: "I was waiting for you. What happened to your phone?"
Neev: "The battery died" he explained.
Ayesha: "Ok so where are we going? And why are you in a tux?"
Neev: "I think you would want to wear something formal too."
He went into his closet and took out a wine colored evening gown and handed it to her.
Ayesha: "When did you buy this?"
Neev: "today"
Ayesha: "And you knew my size?"
Neev: "I borrowed one of your outfits" he said taking out a silver gown that Ayesha had bought some time ago but never had a chance to wear. "why don't you get dressed and I'll just come back." He exited the room and Ayesha held the outfit to herself and looked in the mirror. It was simple and elegant, perfect. It was something she would have picked out if she went shopping for herself.

He stared at her too long when she came dressed in it. She had her hair done up and adorned it with a silver clip that matched her bracelet. The tiny hairs at the nape of her neck stood up as she let him gaze her. He cleared his throat breaking the silence and got up. "WoW, ok, I think the only thing missing is this", he said as he put a pashmina shawl around her. "It might get cold" he said in way of explanation. "Where are we going Neev?" she asked not able to hold the curiosity. "I thought we were just going to have a casual dinner. Why are we going to such a formal place?" "Well lets say the evening is going to be very special", he said with a wink and held out his hand for her. She felt a little nervous and gulped but she gave him her hand anyway and he tucked it around his arms.

They walked out of their room and as Ayesha was heading towards the stairs, Neev stopped and pointed to the other direction. He led the way and Ayesha couldn't hold her curiosity, "Why are we going up there Neev?" He didn't reply until they got to the top of the stairs leading to the terrace. He opened the door and she gaped at the sight. He had decorated the entire terrace making it look like a lighted garden. In the middle of the 'garden', was a small round table for two. She walked in with him and looked at him admiringly said, "You did all this, for me?"
Neev: "No, I just told others to do it." he said laughing. "But I didn't do it for you, I did it for us", he said pulling out a chair for her. "And don't worry, I had the good sense not to cook tonight.", he added with a brilliant smile and Ayesha laughed in return.

He served both of them from the food prearranged and lighted the candles in the middle of the table but they kept getting blown out by the wind. Eventually Ayesha stopped him and threw away the pretty candles with their stand. They ate very little of the food and toasted the champagne to themselves. Mostly Neev kept joking and Ayesha kept finding him funny. Even though he wasn't that funny, she just couldn't stop smiling and the only thing she could do other than smile was laugh. At some point Neev abandoned the food and walked over to a corner. That is when Ayesha noticed that he had moved the stereo from their room and now he was playing a CD.
(Listen: Jab Kabhi)
Jab kabhi
Chaand na ho,
Andheri raat ho
Darna ho..., hoga mujhko
Agar tum saath ho
He walked back to her slowly fixing his eyes on hers and bend down on his knees and with extended hands silently asked for a dance. Ayesha got up and took a few steps towards him, and then pretended to be thinking about his request. Neev put on a dejected face and she laughed noiselessly and put her hand on his. He kissed the back of her hand and a shiver went through her body. Suddenly she was aware that the night had gotten colder.
Jab kabhi
Baadal chaye
Ya ghani, barsaat ho
Hogi khushi.., har ek boond mein
Agar tum saath ho
Neev slid his arms around her waist as he got up and held her other arm and they slowly swayed looking only into each other.
Is jahan mein koi mera
Ho bhi ya na ho
Har ek lamha, bhar jayega
Roshini se, bas agar tum saath ho
Jab kabhi
Aanso aaye
Ya koi saubat ho
Muskura lunga main to phir bhi
Agar tum saath ho
Both of them had a content smile playing on their lips. Slowly the gap between their bodies became lesser and they stopped looking into each other's eyes. Instead Neev breathed a sigh as she relaxed her body in his grip.
Tum yahan ho toh saari
Duniya hai idhar
Saare armaan, khaab saare
Ban gaye hain ab tumhari ek nazar
Jab kabhi
Dil ghabraye
Saamne maat ho
Jeet ke mein dikhlaunga
Agar tum saath ho
They had come so close that now her head rested on his chest and she felt so safe, so secure. They were rocking side to side so softly that she almost was falling asleep against him. But before she did, he lowered his face to her ears and his breath tickled her neck as he whispered… "Happy Birthday Ayesha". "Happy" she repeated half dazed and immediately moved her head off his chest and looked at him in surprise. He only smiled at her.
Jab kabhi
Hasde aalam
Khushiyon ki baarat ho
Zindagi hogi janat
Agar tum saath ho
He only smiled at her with what seemed like a world full of love in his eyes. How did he know? She had never told anyone. Not even Milind and Sukriti knew her birthday. Though they had asked her multiple times she had never told them because she never wanted to celebrate the day her cursed life had began. She never even liked to remember this day and so she hadn't today either.
Ayesha: "Who told you?"
Neev: "Your mom told me yesterday."
Ayesha raised her eyebrows in disbelief.
Neev: "But she also said that you were turning 6 today. So I checked your passport."
Ayesha moved out of his arms. "Neev no one has ever made my birthday special like this." She sat back down on the chair. She didn't know how to react.
Neev: "Don't think that Ayesha. I am not the only one who celebrated your birthday."
Ayesha looked confused.
Neev: "Inder uncle always held a special pooja on this day and I know because I was always invited. I even asked Prachi many times what was special about this day but no one knew other than Inder uncle."
Ayesha didn't know if she was happy that her father who refused to give her an identity had remembered her birthday every year. But she knew this much that today was the first time she felt blessed that she had a birthday to celebrate. A day that Neev had so thoughtfully made special for her. She was suddenly feeling like a princess in the gown and the 'garden', the stars above and the dance, it all was just so perfect.
Ayesha: "Neev you don't know what you have given me." Ayesha didn't continue because she didn't trust her voice to be unwavering.

Neev realized that she was truly touched by such a simple gesture and he had hoped for the same when he had opted for a candle light dinner under the stars instead of throwing a party for her.
But to keep her from getting weepy he told her that he wanted something in return for his efforts.
Neev: "I know its your birthday and I have bought you a gift and made this day special for you and now you want to thank me for it, right. Well, I'll make it easy for you and I'll tell you what I want in return."
Ayesha hadn't expected him to ask for anything in return but she let him continue.
Neev: "I want a promise"
Ayesha: "A promise??", she hadn't expected him to say that either.
Neev: "Yes, I want you to promise me something in the same way that I have told you what being with you means to me…"
Ayesha just looked puzzled. He put his hand in his pocket and retrieved a small remote which Ayesha recognized to be the remote to the music system and he played yet another song. This was a slightly faster song and he intended to dance slightly faster, though Ayesha's evening gown that was touching the floor seemed a bit resistant to such movements. She gave in gladly as the words to the song echoed in the silent night.
(Listen: Jab Kabhi)
jab kabhi main kho jaaun toh mujhe dhundh loge naa
jab kabhi main tanha rahu mera saath doge naa
jab kabhi mere behke kadam tum thaam loge naa
jab kabhi main kho jaaun toh mujhe dhundh loge naa
jab kabhi main tanha rahu mera saath doge naa
jab kabhi mere mushkil ho dagar tum sang chaloge naa
jab kabhi mere behke kadam tum thaam loge naa

jab kabhi de aawaz dil tum sun loge naa
jab kabhi toote khwaab toh tum bun loge naa
jab kabhi mujhse ho khata mujhe baksh doge naa
jab kabhi meri num ho nazar mujhe pyar doge naa

jab kabhi gham aye sanam tum baant loge naa
jab kabhi mere aansu bahen unhe poch loge naa
jab kabhi umra dhal jaayegi mujhe yun hi chahoge naa
lo kasam kuchh bhi ho sanam tum durr jaaoge naa - 2
By now Neev had pulled her back in his arms and they were both breathing slightly faster. He held her face and bent his head slightly, resting his forehead on hers. "Promise…", he asked again. She kept her eyes closed and nodded slightly, still trying to get her breathing in control as the words of promise filled the air.
tum hi meri jaan ho tum hi armaan ho
tum hi dhadkanon mein ho sanam
dil ka yeh iraada hain
tumse mera vaada hain
jeena marna tere sang hai sanam - 2

He smiled and planted a quick kiss on her lips and she put her arms around his neck as he hugged her tighter. After a few moments they both knew it was time to end the night, but not wanting to let go of each other, they held on. Neev then slowly lifted her in his hug, and walked downstairs as her feet floated a few inches off the floor and he held her by the waist and she kept her arms tight around his neck and rested her head on his shoulders.

I know is said i was going to resolve Neesha issues in this chapter. But then i thought of including the Michi bit. So didn't want this to get longer. Also i didn't time to write the next part for Neesha which is going to be...intense in a way. I'll try to update next on the weekend. Hope you still liked his part.

For those who want to know. The first song is from Jhankar Beats and the second one is from 36 China Town.

Takhliya
JC

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Posted: 17 years ago

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lolz. haha. I hope you are thanking me still after reading it.😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: jinc118

lolz. haha. I hope you are thanking me still after reading it.😃

Ahh! you scared me!! 😆

Okay was seriously going to kill you when I saw that small NEESHA part...thought you had side lined the poor babies...😡 But the you redeemed yourself but giving us a FABULOUS ending...

Rightio...*Takes a deep breath*

*Ab yeh Anjali ko kya hua???? This girl!!! lol...I dont know why I cant seem to understand her (Maybe because Milind still thinks about her and I dont want him to? Okay I realise that doesn't make sense either...😆)...but I'm going to wait patiently for your reasons before I pass more judgement...and trust me I have learnt the virtue of patience..

*But she often tells me that we are like halfs of each other. I just laugh at her because we are both so different."
Milind could see the difference between them but he wasn't sure which half he liked better. -I really liked this bit...but Milind really is in a pickle...I thought we were making some headway with the getting over Anjali thing? I only have one tiny thing is bothering me...his sudden anger over Anjali... although I do recall what he said at his wedding to her...so maybe he just hadn't had the oppertunity to express it again till now....

I liked the fact that Prachi confided in Milind and he sought to help her...though I suspect that may have been to ease his worries as well...

and I really appreciated this bit And Milind had no doubt that Prachi considered herself Ritwik's mother and nothing less because frankly she is...and maybe I need to go back and read again but where was he when Ritwik was a baby and needed someone? also unless I'm mistaken...did Prachi not agree that once Sukriti is better she'll give them the child?

First of all okay hun I'm KEEPING Neev for myself...it's decided....
this part just got me...so romantic!!! Ayesha: "A promise??", she hadn't expected him to say that either.
Neev: "Yes, I want you to promise me something in the same way that I have told you what being with you means to me…"
Haiiiiii!

I Loved Loved that he waited for her outside EARLY on sunday..but seems like he's become her perennial driver...😆 lol...jokes apart...My only wish would have been if she invited him with her into the Church...and he got to see what she was like there abit more than he already has...and he could have helped too and that would have been soemthing they do together etc...

Whoa! was not expecting it to be her birthday but that was very sweet...I thought Ayesha was perfect when, she did this... "Promise…", he asked again. She kept her eyes closed and nodded slightly, still trying to get her breathing in control as the words of promise filled the air. 👏

She didn't speak...like usual but atleast now he knows how she feels...was very well done...loved it!!

and I know you've set the Neesha part a few weeks later but are you going to revisit the past and show us how they became closer? I would LOVE to read that!!!😳 because I think that's why it may seem a little rushed, though it is beautiful...we just need a little more...I dont know what the word is...but background?

My Thank Yous still stand...😊

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Edited by zcbcc34 - 17 years ago

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