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Posted: 17 years ago
wow I like neesha track...Michi track..kavyanajali track...
Simply superb!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awww Jc...this part was funny...I really enjoyed it

love the way Neev tried to bring her emotions...So finally things worked out for these two...yet there is still something bothering her...I guess thats whats coming up..

Even the conversation at the lunch table was hilarious...

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Enjoyed reading about Neev's antics even though Ayesha had reservations on it. Well she is a wild cat indeed, and wh better than Neev to domesticate her. "Taming of the shrew" is still my favourite Shakespeare play. BTW I think you have got the divorce proceedings right. Even in a case of deivorce by mutual consent the parties wil have to wait for a year before the divorce is finalised unlike in BT world where the divorce seems final even if the signed papers are just locked up in a cupboard and are not yet filed in court!

Well, what is this thing about a tragedy awaiting Anjali? Will Kavya meet with an accident, have partial amnesia and mistake Anjali for Anjum?

So when are you getting Michi back into the story? I am already missing them. It would be great if you can add a bit of Neesha and Michi in every chapter of yours. That would keep both the groups happy. Guess with all your school work it would be difficult though.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Heeba

Awww Jc...this part was funny...I really enjoyed it
lolz. For all the crying i might put you through later, i thought a little comic relief is good.😃
love the way Neev tried to bring her emotions...So finally things worked out for these two...yet there is still something bothering her...I guess thats whats coming up.. Yup and i need some time to write it as its going to be and emotion packed chapter.

Even the conversation at the lunch table was hilarious...
hehehe thankx
Thanks 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Enjoyed reading about Neev's antics even though Ayesha had reservations on it. Well she is a wild cat indeed,😆😆😆 and wh better than Neev to domesticate her. "Taming of the shrew" is still my favourite Shakespeare play. hmm...well for now i don't think Neevu has much to do but let Ayesha come out of herself. But later we'll see how he handles the wild cat.😉😆😆BTW I think you have got the divorce proceedings right. Even in a case of deivorce by mutual consent the parties wil have to wait for a year before the divorce is finalised unlike in BT world where the divorce seems final even if the signed papers are just locked up in a cupboard and are not yet filed in court! 😆😆😆 I knew that the waiting one year thing is true. But i didn't know if the judge would actually give a judgement without one of the parties being in court...especially on the first time. I think they are supposed to interview both people in front of the judge and then the judge decides what to do. But this was better for me.😃

Well, what is this thing about a tragedy awaiting Anjali? Will Kavya meet with an accident, have partial amnesia and mistake Anjali for Anjum?
You know i like to make a hill out of a mole.😃 But its a bit tragic indeed.
So when are you getting Michi back into the story? I am already missing them. I know me too. they have the best most powerful part of my FF> I can't wait to write it. But i'll have to wait cause i don't want to do a hurried job for that part. It would be great if you can add a bit of Neesha and Michi in every chapter of yours. That would keep both the groups happy. Guess with all your school work it would be difficult though. I'll try to. But honestly Michi don't have much going on except Mili baby slowly getting drawn towards Prachi. Their story will get interesting only after a short leap in my FF. But post leap Neesha are a happy couple, and that has its part to play in bringing Michi together, so i have to resolve all their issues now.

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Posted: 17 years ago
JC this part was lovely! Im so happy the Neev and Ayesha are still married! The dining hall sequence was cool! Loved the way Neev compared Ayesha to a cat!! 😆 ..
What tragedy awaits Anjali???Im scared for her.....Hope she'll be alright....
Waiting for your next update!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Jc read the update faster this time 😊 Well I liked the family part with Michi bonding also liked Neev and Ayesha together they feel cute if only it were for real in the serial too. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
JC!! Neev, he is such a cutie!!! LOVE HIM!! Forget Ayesha...he can have Meeeeeeeee!

My Fav scene was where he is waiting by the car for her and she comes to kick him...such a sweet moment.

Have to admit, I skim read it quickly before work (though I was getting late😛 )and couldn't comment. But Am glad the way you handled Neesha Divorce...was really very good.

CANNOT wait for more!! seriously...am loving these two so much!

Aww when he didn't say anything but put his hand on hers in the car...that part really got me when she slowly pulled away. I didn't really expect them to be all lovey dovey straight away so glad you have done it the way you have and you said you have a reason for Ayesha's distance...really want to know what that is...

ALSO Jungali Billi!!! awwwwwwwwwwwwwww lol poor guy, she must have bit him hard! for a moment I thought they were holding hands Michi style.

THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
the divorce didnt go through 👏 i loved the way neev was joking around with ayesha, the poor woman was gutted when she thought the divorce had happened, the best part was ayesha finding out the truth and battering neev, i didnt think id ever say this but he deserved those beats 😆 ayesha indeed is a wild cat waiting to be tamed by neev.

so anjali is off to meet kavya...hope all goes well for her.

thanx for the quick update JC 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
I finally got to it JC!!!!!! 😃

Chapter 32 : Milind actually apologized 😲 😲 😲 I am sure that's a first in his life!!! 😆 😆 😆
The Ritwik, Prachi and Milind scenes were very cute 😊 And Prachi blowing Milind a flying kiss was soooooo endearing though a little unbelievable! 😆
OK JC.....I have a guess/theory about those letters! Maybe, they were actually written by Prachi??? 😳 But somebody else gave them to Milind??

And I wonder why Anjali felt that her whole world was going to end or change?? I am curious to know about the Kavya-Anjali track.

Chapter 33 : Ahhhhhh......my Neesha!!!! I read it twice!!! Stupid Ayesha........still beating round the bush 😡 😡 😡. But I am glad that atleast Neev is on track and has decided to bring her on track too!!! 😆 😆 😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part 😃
Edited by pragalbha - 17 years ago

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