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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Heeba

JC...absolutely loved this part...

Love the way both Milind and Prachi are behaving...just like a real couple...seems like Ritwick is helping them bonding...

The whole part with Ritwick was nicely portrayed....really liked the part when PL entered and saw the three of them laughing...

And now back to those "papers"...I believe they are from PRachi and not Anjali...or something like that...

Thanks a lot for the update...can;t wait for the next part...hopefully the divorce wont take place

P.S. hope ur exam went well 😊



My exams were fine hun. thankx. As for Neesha divorce...it'll be up soon. And Anjali_Milind business will be revealed much much later. So for now..just forget about it...😆 Just like Milind doesn't think of her until she is in front of him...don't think about it until Anjali comes back.😆😆

@Milindkidiwani and Charmed: Ayesha is not yet going to open her mouth. She is not ready to yet...and there is good reason for it (at least i hope its a good reason😆). But this is a Michi and Neesha FF so no worries. In the end all will be well.
Edited by jinc118 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Wow!!Superb!! Absolutely loved it.

Mi and Chi are talking and seems more friendlier now😳 Looks like Asha tai is fun 😃. Loved that line where says "woh ghade ko kabhi haste huve dekha hai". 😆 And also i think Ritwick is the one who is bringing these 2 closer..such an adorable kid 😳.

Now about Anjali and Milind. I have a crazy idea after reading this part. He read some letters which he thinks might be written by Anjali. But somehow i feel these letters might have been written by Prachi to him. And thats why Anjali is unaware of Milind's crush/love for her. 😕

Waiting for next part. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
i am thinking that Prachi was the one who wrote those letters. i'm guessin they never did reach Anjali/ or she mite have asked Prachi to reply [oohhhhh!! i think that's how Prachi fell in love with Milind, and him falling in love with Anjali alias Prachi. i don't think Anjali is insensitive to just walk over some1 like that or forget after much correpsondence....i wish he wud've given it to her...atleast the truth wud've come out then!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Brilliant as usual JC. Well, I sound like a broken record these days but then I cant find words to describe your writing. Well, is the reference to the tamilian friends directed at me? So I guess I will not get any more clues on MAP! 😡 I think the sheaf of papers Milsi has are letters written by Anjali to him(or rather Milsi thinks they are written by her). And if my guess is right the day he will return them to her is not coming any time soon, atleast not before he finds out about Kavya and her. So I guess you may give this angle a rest for sometime now. Am not complaining because that would mean Milsi will try and get on with his present and that means more Michi.

Btw sorry for bugging you about the VMs. Caught your big bold statement in your signature. It will not happen again.

ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Wow!!Superb!! Absolutely loved it.

Mi and Chi are talking and seems more friendlier now😳 Looks like Asha tai is fun 😃. Loved that line where says "woh ghade ko kabhi haste huve dekha hai". 😆 And also i think Ritwick is the one who is bringing these 2 closer..such an adorable kid 😳.

Now about Anjali and Milind. I have a crazy idea after reading this part. He read some letters which he thinks might be written by Anjali. But somehow i feel these letters might have been written by Prachi to him. And thats why Anjali is unaware of Milind's crush/love for her. 😕

Waiting for next part. 😊



again letters??😆😆 hmm..well Anjali is unaware of whats going on in Milind's head. and its not a crush darling. It was deep rooted...something...But the day she returns, she'll definitely find out.😃 and her reaction ...well thats a surprise.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
JC...loved this part ...esp b'cos i got to see the real character of Milind....

The one thing i would like ot know is .....what is the relationship btw him and Anjali...its drivign me insane...

I like Asha tai.... 😳 All old ladies are bent on bring Michi togehter...good! Very good! 😳

Milind has not made up his mind whether he still wants to hold on to the old or embrace the new...he better start embracing the new sooner than later...

Really good one! 😳 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: panache

JC...loved this part ...esp b'cos i got to see the real character of Milind....
Really, what do you think about it?
The one thing i would like ot know is .....what is the relationship btw him and Anjali...its drivign me insane...
hehe...sovvy has to wait.
I like Asha tai.... 😳 All old ladies are bent on bring Michi togehter...good! Very good! 😳
lolz. in her way Asha tai will i guess..but she is not like PL.
Milind has not made up his mind whether he still wants to hold on to the old or embrace the new...he better start embracing the new sooner than later...
he already has started, just doesn't realize it yet
Really good one! 😳 👏

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey JC this was really nice!
Wonder what transpired in the morning which Michi are unwilling to talk about! 😉
So thankfully they are behaving like a normal couple now! Thats good! 😛
And Neesha divorce??? Noooo...Please!!! But Im sure you'll have something in store for them! Will be waiting to see that!
Thanks for the great update!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Those who missed it, i updated ch 32 yesterday.

Chapter 33 – Celebrations and Good byes.
Lets assume that this is how divorce proceedings happen in the world of my FF.😃

Anjali and PL returned and Anjali immediately went up to her room to start packing. But she was surprised to find Ayesha still sleeping as she passed by her room. She opened the door a little wider and looked on in shock. Wasn't she supposed to be at the court? Anjali knocked on the open door. No reaction. She banged on the door loudly and Ayesha opened her eyes slowly and went back to sleep. Anjali was going to move in and shake the girl out of her sleep when Ayesha immediately opened her eyes wide and looked alarmed. She sat up and grabbed the alarm clock resting next to the bed. "OH MY GOD, I am late", she said more to herself than to Anjali and ran off to the bathroom. Anjali had served her purpose and headed back to her room. She gave another call to Kavya's cell phone but he didn't pick up. She called his official number but the office was closed too. Anjali continued to do her packing.

Ayesha rushed out of the car and ran into the court house. It was almost close to noon and the court would adjourn for lunch soon. The place looked packed and Ayesha slowed down not wanting to look frantic. She had gotten about 10 missed calls from her lawyer and now that baldy wasn't picking up his phone, she thought as she searched for him outside. But instead she found Neev talking to his own lawyer, with a smile. Neev noticed her and walked over slowly.
Neev: "How nice of you to come, Ayesha. Did you have a good-night sleep?"
Ayesha: "Couldn't you at least wake me up when you left."
Neev: "Well I am not your servant anymore madam. I have been relieved of my husband duties to you as of this morning. So now you can find someone else to wake you up."
Ayesha just looked at him not knowing what to say.
Neev: "Hamara divorce ho gaya hai Ayesha. Ghar jaayo, khushiyan manaao"
Ayesha: "But I wasn't even here. How can the judge do that?"
Neev laughed, "Ayesha the judge had better things to do than wait for you to wake up."
Ayesha: "Ya but…"
Neev: "But what?"
Ayesha: "But…I"
Neev: "But you what?"
Ayesha: "I was…I was…" , she couldn't get anything out of her mouth. What was wrong with her. She looked down at her feet extremely worried about her own state at this moment. She couldn't believe how distraught she was. How could she have slept through such an important appointment. She had sat on her bed thinking all night and didn't realize when she had fallen asleep.
Neev bent his head down below her eye level to get a view of her face, and she straightened herself again.
Neev: "Wait a minute…don't tell me…you didn't change you mind did you?" he asked tentatively.
Ayesha: "Well I thought about it a lot last night and…"
Neev: "And you thought not showing up to court would be the best way to assure that the divorce doesn't happen and you never have to admit what you actually feel?"
Ayesha: "NO!!! I didn't sleep all night that's why I couldn't wake up on time."
Neev: "You know what, it doesn't matter. Now that we are divorced, I actually feel great. I am free again. I don't have to take all your attitude. I can have as many girlfriends as I like. Life is good again."
Ayesha: "Then why did you do all that drama yesterday?"
Neev: "Actually I too was thinking a lot last night. And it really is not that bad to be single again. You see that girl over there", he said pointing to a sophisticated looking woman in her late 20's. "Isn't she something. She is getting a divorce too, and she is getting loads of alimony from her husband. I think I might have a chance with her. We enjoyed quite a few laughs earlier."

Ayesha was now boiling over with anger. "Neev!", she screamed and Neev turned to face Ayesha again. "Yes Ayesha" he said matter-of-factly.
Ayesha: "Do you even know what I went through yesterday, thinking that you really didn't want this divorce. I lost my sleep and my peace. And now you are standing here happy about the divorce and thinking whom to flirt with next?"
Neev: "Why were you worried Ayesha? What does it matter what I want and what I don't want. What should be important to you is that you didn't want to be with me. So why did you loose sleep over something I said. And why would you ever take me seriously Ayesha. You should know by now…"
Ayesha: "This is all a joke for you, Neev? Life is a joke for you. Marriage and divorce is a joke for you?"
Neev: "And you are saying that you take these things quite seriously? Like the way you used my weakness to your advantage in forcing me to marry you. That was you caring about marriage. And the way you treated my mother…was you caring. The way you made me feel like I am your servant, was you caring about this marriage."

Ayesha: "How dare you Neev. So I forced you to marry me. But it was still a marriage Neev and I have maintained its sanctity unlike you who keep running towards other women even when I am in the room. And you say that I don't care? I forgave your mother only for your sake and moved out of that house. I sent your sister abroad when she came begging that she wants to do medicine and after wasting so much money and years she decided to jump into modeling. I never complained because she is your sister. And now…I gave you a divorce because that's what you wanted. And I lost my sleep and peace when you made it seem like you actually wanted...and you are asking me if I care?"
Neev had known that a little provocation is all she needed but he hadn't expected her to get this emotional. Her eyes were moist and getting red in anger or pain, he didn't know.

Neev replied slowly, "So you came here to say that you didn't want this divorce?"
Ayesha: "NO!!...I don't know…Maybe. But what does it matter now. You got your freedom right."

They were interrupted by Ayesha's lawyer who looked at Ayesha with sternness. He took her aside and Neev opted to walk to his car. But he didn't get in. He stood there leaning on the side of it and watching Ayesha from the distance. He could still see the changed in her body language as the lawyer talked to her. After a few minutes the lawyer gave her a card and shook her hand and left. She saw him and walked purposefully towards him. He straightened up as he imagined what was coming his way next. She stood in front of him looking very angry and then as he expected she kicked him in the shin. He screamed in pain and held onto the car for support. "Ayehsa…what.." and she continuously beat him with her purse as he tried to protect himself with his hands. He held both her hands to stop her. "Why do you enjoy making a fool out of me, why?" she said without a trace of humor in her voice. He let her go.
Neev: "I am sorry. I just wanted to see if you would admit your feelings at least now. Why do you hide it so much Ayesha when it is so evident to the people around you."
Ayesha: "Somethings are better left unsaid, Neev. It allows people to forget and move on."
Neev: "And something should be said when they need to be said. It allows people to live on."
Ayesha didn't answer him and instead walked over to the other side of the car and opened the door to the passenger seat in the front. "I want to go home Neev". Neev looked at her with a smile, "In my car?". She shot him a glance that was sufficient answer for Neev. "And your car?" "The driver will bring it", she said as she got into the car. Neev smiled and shook his head as he got into the drivers' seat and they drove silently for miles.
Ayesha kept her attention either out the window or in playing with the car stereo system. Not knowing how to start a conversation, he slowly put his left hand on her right. She didn't react and he held her hand for a bit. But she slowly and surely removed her hand from his soft grip and he let it go. He wondered why even now she was distant. Why did she stop herself even now. There was something else bothering her. "Are you ok Ayesha?" he asked hoping that she would tell him. "Ya" she said still staring out the window.

Anjali was headed out to buy some necessities for her trip when she noticed Neev's car coming in through the gates. But to her surprise, Ayesha was with him. They had returned together, in his car. She walked up to them as they both got out of the car.
Anjali: "Tum toh alag hone gaye the na? Saath hokar kaise laute?, she asked with a smile.
Ayesha didn't didn't answer her and went inside. Neev explained, "Today was just the preliminary hearing. And according to the Hindu marriage act, even if a petition for divorce is filed with mutual consent, the couple needs to wait about a year for the marriage to legally dissipate. So we are still married. And from the looks of it, we are going to remain married I think." "Congratulations", Anjali said with a bright smile and Neev smiled back. Somewhere he knew he should thank her but he didn't think she wanted to hear it. Neev headed towards the house as Anjali walked back to her jeep. But she remembered something and called out to him.
Anjali: "Neev, I am glad ki tum dono ka problem aaj hi solve ho gaya. We should celebrate. Besides, I am going to Turkey this evening. It was a sudden plan. Don't know when I'll be back. So lets have lunch together. Aur apni Ayesha ko bhi bol dena." Neev nodded in agreement.

PL, Anjali, Neev and Ayesha joined together for lunch. PL had tried to quickly make some sweets for the day but she didn't have enough time as it was already past noon and everyone was hungry. So Anjali had offered to buy some cake on her way back from her shopping. PL never liked getting food from outside but right now she had no choice. She would make some gaajar ka halva for Neev in the evening, she thought, it was his favorite.

During lunch, PL noticed that Neev was eating with his left hand again. She had noticed him do that yesterday night too and here he was doing it again.
PL: "Neev tumhaare haath mein kuch hua hai kya? Tum ulte haath se kyun kha rahe ho?"
"Voh…haan, chot lagi hai right hand pe…isliye", he said a little startled.
PL: "Dikhao toh, tumne pehle kyun nahi bataaya. Kaise lagi chot". She got up from her chair and came over to Neev and took his right hand. There was a gauze bandage around it. Ayesha looked up worried. She had noticed the bandage on his hand when she saw him at the court but she didn't ask anything because she knew he would ask her why she bit him and she had no answer.
PL: "Neev kaise lagi aise chot. Aur tumne dikhaya kyun nahi."
Neev looked at Ayesha who tuned her attention again to her plate and said with a cunning smile, "Maa ek billi ne kaat liya tha."
PL looked alarmed, "Billi??? Kahaan? Humne toh koi billi nahi paali."
Neev: "Maa paltu nahi hai. Jangli billi hai. Lekin mein usse paaltu banane ki soch raha hoon".
Ayesha looked at him angry but seeing the mirth in his eyes she lowered her gaze and continued to eat. But she was aware that she was probably red as a tomato now.
PL: "Neev hum koi billi nahi paalenge. Mujhe jaanwar ghar mein bilkul nahi pasand. Dekha nahi abhi tumhe kaise kaat liya."
Neev: "Maa yeh toh isliye kaata kyunki mein usse pareshaan kar raha tha. Varna pyar ke badle pyar dena toh jaanwar bhi jaanta hai." The stress he put on the last sentence didn't escape Ayesha but she didn't acknowledge it.

After the main course Anjali brought out pieces of tiramisu torte. They tasted like heaven in their mouths. Neev asked her multiple times where she bought it from, but she didn't tell him. "That's my little secret" she quipped as she put another piece in her mouth. "If I tell you where I got it from, then you can go there and get it when ever you please. But now, everytime you have dessert, you'll think of this sweetness and therefore will remember me, even if it is to curse me for not telling you where I got it from." She laughed and went away to her room.

She made one more attempt to call Kavya and finally he picked up. "Hi, Anjali" he said, knowing that it could only be her.
Anjali: "What the hell Kavya. How many times did I call you. And you didn't feel the need to call me back even once. And the CD you sent me…what does this mean Kavya?"
Kavya: "Anjali I got your messages. I had a hectic day today, that's whey couldn't find the time to call you back. I figured since you are coming here, it would be better to talk face to face. I got Milind's call too. I'll make arrangements for you to stay in our hotel. Just tell me which flight you are taking and I'll have you picked up at the airport."
Anjali gave him the flight number and hanged up. She too felt that it was better to talk in person. "Just one more day" she told herself. She took a short nap because she never could sleep on a plane. In the evening, Neev and Ayesha dropped her to the airport and PL insisted on coming too. As PL bid her goodbye, she told her that she should now think of settling down. Anjali was the only girl in the family still unmarried. Anjali smiled and replied, "When I find the right guy, Badi Maa."
PL: "But how will you find a guy. A relationship needs time to grow, gudiya, and you don't stay in one place long enough to nurture such a relationship."
Anjali held her hand on PL's face and said, "Badi maa, aap please itni chinta karna chod deejiye. I promise, jis kaam se mein jaa rahi hoon na, agar voh poora hua, toh phir mein permanently India aakar settle ho jaaongi. Vaise hi jaise aap chahti hai. I'll even quit my job, Badi maa, I promise. And you know I always keep my promises."

She hugged PL and Neev and then a really tight hug to Ayesha who she knew didn't like to be hugged. She bid a sweet good bye to everyone and headed towards the tragedy that awaited her.

up next: i think the reason why Ayesha is so distant will be next.

[code]Translations:

Neev: "Hamara divorce ho gaya hai Ayesha. We are divorced Ayesha Ghar jaayo, Go home khushiyan manaao Celebrate"

Anjali: "Tum toh alag hone gaye the na? Did you guys go to get separated Saath hokar kaise laute? How are you coming back together

Anjali: "Neev, I am glad ki tum dono ka problem aaj hi solve ho gaya. I am glad that your problems are resolved today itself.

Aur apni Ayesha ko bhi bol dena And tell your Ayesha too.

PL: "Neev tumhaare haath mein kuch hua hai kya?Did something happen to your hand? Tum ulte haath se kyun kha rahe ho?" Why are you eating with the left hand.

"Voh…haan, chot lagi hai right hand pe…isliye" Yes I got hurt

PL: "Dikhao toh, show me. tumne pehle kyun nahi bataaya. Why didn't you tell me earlier Kaise lagi chot How did you get hurt".

PL: "Neev kaise lagi aise chot. How did you get hurt? Aur tumne dikhaya kyun nahi. And why didn't you show it."

"Maa ek billi ne kaat liya tha." Maa, a cat bit me.

"Billi??? Cat?? Kahaan? Where? Humne toh koi billi nahi paali. We don't have any cats."

Neev: "Maa paltu nahi hai. Its not a domestic cat. Jangli billi hai. It was a wild one. Lekin mein usse paaltu banane ki soch raha hoon". But I think I want to tame it.

PL: "Neev hum koi billi nahi paalenge. Neev we are not having any cats here. Mujhe jaanwar ghar mein bilkul nahi pasand. I don't like animals in the house. Dekha nahi abhi tumhe kaise kaat liya." See how you got bit.

Neev: "Maa yeh toh isliye kaata kyunki mein usse pareshaan kar raha tha. Maa this was because I was bothering it. Varna pyar ke badle pyar dena toh jaanwar bhi jaanta hai." Otherwise even animals know how to give love in return for love.

Anjali held her hand on PL's face and said, "Badi maa, aap please itni chinta karna chod deejiye. Please stop worrying so much. I promise, jis kaam se mein jaa rahi hoon na, agar voh poora hua, toh phir mein permanently India aakar settle ho jaaongi. If the work I am going for is successful then I'll come back and settle in India for good. Vaise hi jaise aap chahti hai. Just like you want.

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ok me first will read and comment

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