FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 64

Originally posted by: dipsyworld

Loved the 3rd part.

Nice to see Milind bonding with Ritwick and having fun. Prachi too joining them in their fun and the 3 made a nice family picture...only if it was for real.

Good that Asha tai told Milind that Prachi is helping Sukriti. The duffer is slowing seeing Prachi's goodness.
seriously, he is a duffer.😆😆😆 My poor Prachi.😭 He will realize, slowly...but there is a twisht waiting for him.😛
Update soon. 😳

Originally posted by: sweets

ur fanfic just caught my eye n i read it in one go...a very wonderfully written one...Thankyou. uve very deftly kept some things in the lurch n revealed quite a few things in a beautiful manner....i find anjali's story to be the most intriguing...she has her own issues to deal with at the same shes some how intricately linked to the other two couples stories... can't wait to find out how she deals with the anjum angle n how tht will affect milind n prachi....will eagerly wait for your next part.I have been trying hard to keep the secrets but its getting harder. See till now no one thought that Anjum had any connection to anyone in this FF other than being Kavya's dead lover and Anjali's look alike. But you seem to want a connection between Anjali's past and the two couples.😃😆😆 There maybe...then again there might not be. I just like to drive ppl nuts with the guessing game...when in reality the truth can be quite simple.😆😆 What is the whole deal between Anjum and Anjali will be revealed when Anjali returns from her journey, which will take some time actually.

Originally posted by: optimist

Just read Part 3. What I love about your FF is the attention to details you painstakingly give. I can just imagine the Prachi-Mlind-Ritik scene playing out before my eyes. So vivid is your description. And you truely make use of the audio-visual aids too considering this is an e-novel.😃Sometimes i think i'd just rather use all songs to tell my story.😆 Like making it a musical😆 hmm..maybe if i am crazy enough to write another one. Just makes everything so unique about this FF which I simply love as you know very well by now. 😊Thanku When I played that clip you had inserted for Ayesha's dance, my son who was on the way to school came up and was surprised to see me watching cartoons early in the morning! I had to shoo him off before he starts asking too many questions and misses his school bus! 🤣he must be thinking, mujhe school bhej ke mummy is watching cartoons instead and then she tells me not to watch them.😆

Originally posted by: pragalbha

Very very well written, JC!!! Enjoyed, all 3 parts.....totally!!!
Thankx Pragz.
In the Neesha track, I just wish Neev gets a little more aggressive!!! Because for Ayesha to come out on her own, it will take an eternity!!! 😆 😆
lolz...it will take her time. But the problem is that Neev is not an aggressive guy. If he were, Ayesha would never fall for him.😃 He is passionate but not aggressive.😉 And in his own way he will make her come out with the truth...because only Neev's handling will work with Ayesha.😃 Trust me on that.
Anjali track........good, that atleast something has picqued this high-placed Goddess' interest!!! 😆 😆
lolz...well that true, Anjali never lets things affect her but what Kavya sent her surely did...because...well...we'll just have to wait and find out.😃
Michi track........They have started to bond, even if accidentally......that feels good, very good! And Ritwik starting to get used to Milind gladdens my heart because he will now have someone in his life who represents a father figure!!! 😊
Me too. I am so happy that Ritwik and Mili baby are bonding. I was just waiting to write their part.😃
Great stuff.....JC 👏 👏 Thanku Thanku...always enjoy your comments.