FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 135

Hey JC, this is my second time commenting on ur FF, and for some reason Im really nervous about it...but here goes, I liked this chapter, I didn't love it because there wasnt much romance in it, but I understand that its purpose was to build up the story.. and this chapter served that purpose.. it seemed to have a nice flow to it, but it left me a bit confused. curious regarding Prachi and Ritwik...

When I started reading this part 3, I was wondering why you were concentrating so heavily on Sukriti-Alaap, but after reading the conclusion of part 3, I understood ur intention... I must say, It was handled well, Milinds hint of suspicion regarding Prachi's intentions didn't come out of the blue, but infact felt logical and in character. I find that commendable, because its difficult to portray a complex character like Milind authentically.

About Prachi, I don't really know what to say, since with her character Im more curious than anything... What were the nightmares that she had? Why is she in such a hurry to get out of Milind and Ritwiks life??? Color me confused with her decisions.... I hope to know more about this soon...

Ok and last but not the least, for some reason ur writing in this chapter really stood out to me, I thought it was written really well and flowed so nicely... Maybe u should take breaks more often... coz I really liked the way u wrote in this chapter... seriously...😆

Anyways eagerly waiting for ur next update...hopefully we'll get the Michi confrontation and some answers to Prachi's confusing behaviour...

Thanx JC

Originally posted by: michi12

JC! you updated after such a long time.. and what an update!! loved every word and now craving for more :)

beautiful update... :)

Originally posted by: jdots

wow ..u updated after such a long time...missed ur FF...😊.now waiting for the next part.................😉

Originally posted by: meteora_smt

Hey JC, this is my second time commenting on ur FF, hey Sonia😛 I noticed. The first one was so long ago...thought you weren't reading after that. and for some reason Im really nervous about it...lolz...why?😕😆 but here goes, I liked this chapter, I didn't love it because there wasnt much romance in it, but I understand that its purpose was to build up the story.. Thanx for understanding and i really don't expect people to love this one...especially for what is to come. and this chapter served that purpose.. it seemed to have a nice flow to it, but it left me a bit confused. curious regarding Prachi and Ritwik...what else is new...i manage to confuse people with every update.😆 I hope to clear all confusions by ch 50...but you never know things may change as i write so it might be a few chapters after.

When I started reading this part 3, I was wondering why you were concentrating so heavily on Sukriti-Alaap, but after reading the conclusion of part 3, I understood ur intention... I must say, It was handled well, Milinds hint of suspicion regarding Prachi's intentions didn't come out of the blue, but infact felt logical and in character. I find that commendable, because its difficult to portray a complex character like Milind authentically. oh thankyou. This is like the best compliment i could have gotten for this chapter. You don't know how difficult i was finding this...trying to make it logical...and giving this chapter a nice flow so that things don't seem abrupt. Ask Rima..she'll tell you.😆😆

Another thing I liked was the fact that while I was on Prachi's and Sukriti's side regarding the Alaap issue, I could easily relate to Milinds decision to keep Sukriti away from Alaap. And I could relate to him because you portrayed his thoughts and his side of the story pretty well.Now I understand why the chapters name is "The Hardest Decision" Milind was easily the star of this update, as we got to see everything from his POV.
Again...very glad that my point is getting through. And i was so worried that i wasn't making sense. Thanks Sonia.

About Prachi, I don't really know what to say, since with her character Im more curious than anything...I expected that so no probz. What were the nightmares that she had? Why is she in such a hurry to get out of Milind and Ritwiks life??? Color me confused with her decisions.... I hope to know more about this soon...your questions will be answered with my updates and hope it'll make just as much sense.

Abt Alaap, interesting behaviour, but what did Prachi tell him that suddenly caused a change of heart in him? I am asking this because I have yet to catch with some of ur previous chapters and dunno whether this was addressed before or is yet to be addressed....Oh so you haven't read...hmm...i didn't really reveal yet what Prachi told him...and actually his POV is not really shown that much at all except that whatever she told him had effected him greatly, so much so that he wanted to change...but actually his change wasn't too sudden but to others it seemed sudden. Its in ch 37 actually.

Also another thing I want to ask is that does Milind know he is slowly falling in love with Prachi? yes he does. Or is he unaware??? Though there wasn't much romance in the chapter, I liked the Michi bits in this chapter... it showed that Michi had become good friends and Milind had somehow become dependant on her... I felt you handled this bit pretty subtly which was good...it wasn't an"omg i miss Prachi" but more of a "Milind felt a bit irritated without Prachi's company" *JC smiling ear to ear* 😆 yes thats was for him when he didn't see her where he expected to see her. but I feel thats its too soon for Milsi to realize he loves Prachi... if thats ur intention... with the "Milind was slowly falling in love with Prachi" line... oh he's been realizing that he's falling in love from way before. Actually i don't know...maybe you didn't read those parts yet...thats why it seems sudden. But he has surely realized that his feelings for Prachi are beyond friendship now.

Ok and last but not the least, for some reason ur writing in this chapter really stood out to me, I thought it was written really well and flowed so nicely... Maybe u should take breaks more often... coz I really liked the way u wrote in this chapter... seriously...😆 Hey😆 now how am i supposed to take that...you give a complement and a criticism at the same time.😆😆😆 Sill i'll say that the break was needed and i've improved...tho i don't see it.😊

Anyways eagerly waiting for ur next update...hopefully we'll get the Michi confrontation and some answers to Prachi's confusing behaviour... umm...Prachi will continue to confuse for another chapter...after that things will be crystal clear.😃

Thanx JC Thanks for the comments.🤗had fun reading.

Originally posted by: Pori

wow read it after a long timee
I hope Miland lisens to Prachi's part and then makes a decision

Originally posted by: optimist

Thanks JC for this lovely update. 😃really i was dreading this because you seem to want a clue at every step and stage...and this chapter had none. So the separation is round the corner? yes To be frank I did not see this coming, no, not that they are getting seperated but that Milsi will misunderstand Prachi over Alaap. well i needed some valid reason Somehow I thought Prachi would just leave without explanation and Milsi will be pining for her, clueless as to why she left and where she is. no she can't leave him searching for her...she needs to leave him where he won't even think about her... I like this line more though. good good.😃 Prachi's prayers seem to be answered. Prachi seems to have got her opening to make her getaway. yup Afterall now she will have to relinguish her claim on Ritwik (which she will be more than willing to do) since she seems to have plotted with Alaap to keep Ritwik with her (atleast in Milsi's eyes). well i don't know how willing she will be...given that she just had a nightmare again and was hysterical...

I cant help but feel saddened by this turn of evets although this was only expected. aww...i know akka..its natural even if you expect the worst when it happens you still feel sad. Looks like Prachi's 'nightmare' was also part of her plan (though I may be wrong here). Plan??? Akka now you don't believe Prachi was plotting for this do you...are you misunderstanding my doll just like Milind?😭 Loved Milsi's response to it. The guy ca't bear to see her in pain. No he really can't Will he remember her soft and caring nature later when she has left him or will he continue to remain blind and prolong this seperation? Wish that he brings her back not because he found evidence to the contrary but because he believes in Prachi's goodness. Want him to do all he can to unravel her secret and not wait for chance happenings to put together the puzzle that is Prachi. His reasons for wanting her back will be different...not her goodness really...but more his need for her.