FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 133

Originally posted by: optimist

So I am back to square one, worrying over the MAP puzzle which I thought I had solved. You do compound my migraines!

I guess i expected everyone to read the first part and where Prachi says "He loved HER" i expected everyone to read that "HER" a her and not substitute "Prachi" in place of that "her". But i can see why ppl would read it as Prachi.

I think I will be so drained by then that it may end up becoming an anti-climax. Thats why i told you to chill with the guessing. Allow me to do the job. And just read an enjoy.😆😆😆

You are the creator of that duffer. So I hold you solely responsible like we hold OGF responsible for the behaviour of his characters!

hey i just borrowed OGF's characters...i didn't make them up entirely.😆😆😆

Yeah, I realised that. My mistake. I read it in hurry. Anyway the end result is the same. We are still in the dark regarding that mystery as well.

that mistery will come soon...very soon.

I know it has nothing to do with the MAP puzzle but you have successfully converted your FF into a maze of puzzles and I only want you to keep reducing them one by one as soon as possible so that we can get on with some unadulterated Michi romance!

lolz...kar toh rahi hoon...😆

Subconcious proximity is all fine but I want the real deal and I think we have waited for far too long. Its 47 gruelling chapters and Milsi is just about realising his feelings for Prachi and is willing to let go of his past! Gosh! I am sure if somebody else was writing this FF, you would not have displayed even half as much patience as we are doing!

i know i know...but you must give me credit...cause my FF is not just about Michi. I have a slew of characters that i have opted not to reduce to mere extras. The story is weaved around all of them. So you must give me that consideration.😊


I had already PMed you about what I think would be Prachi's reason for leaving. So did I get it right atleast this time? mein bhool gayi. I must go back and search for it.

You and your forgetfulness!😡 I still haven't found it.😕

Whatever you say JC! Me very tired of taxing my brains!!! so relax akka and enjoy the story. But I will still hazard my guesses. One I think will be Soumya's delivery haha cause you know that already and the other may be Suki-Alaap confrontation or breaking of the news of Anjali-Kavya's relationship to Milsi. you know which one it is now.

Originally posted by: shabzc1

just caught up with ur FF...its brilliant JC and very ADDICTIVE! after i caught up with ur parts i read the whole of ur FF again to see if there were any clues that i had somehow missed but u have done a brilliant job in maintaining the suspence....luckily for us u seem to be unraveling the secrets urself, phew! Thanx Shabz. You are the lucky one to read it together. PPL are ready to kill me here if i don't reveal everything soon. But its coming...its all gonna come out soon enough.

so prachi was the one who wrote those letters to milsi, and the poor duffer thinks they were written by anjali...i wonder how that came about?

i love how ur showing the gradual attraction/love milsi is feeling for prachi...he sees to be surprised about his own feelings too but he also seems to think that him and prachi can work. i loved his reaction when he saw prachi in the sari 😆 JC i loved how michi were snuggled together on the bed, it makes me want more michi romance....hope the two duffers get together soon. well thats for you to see...i wont' reveal much about whats in store for Michi.😃

JC i still havent figured out why inder would have wanted prachi to stay away from milsi, where exactly does inder come into it? please unravel evrything sooooooooon. Well thats a guess that ppl have...that Inder wanted Prachi to stay away from Mils...but i haven't confirmed that to be the actual deal. So keep mulling over it.😆😆😆

thanx for the updates. im looking forward to part 2. its up JC prachi seems adamant on looking for an excuse to leave milsi, i hope she doesnt do or say something which she may regret later well...there needs to be drama and for that we need something like that. please dont make michi go through more heartbreak. I had already warned everyone to have tissue boxes and buckets to catch your tears...its going to get emotional.

jc......i am still waiting for the second part! 😛

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sorry.......just checked...........you have updated........thanks!

Originally posted by: blackcurrant

JC, when Milind & Prachi finally get together, you better reward us and them with the whole nine yards when it come to reunions complete with declarations of undying love, marriage renewal and babies. 😆 lolz..haha...umm...hehe...lets talk about it a little later.😆 That's the only way, Prachi planning to break Milind's heart by leaving is going to be forgivable. 😆 hmmm...she has a very good reason you know...but now i am doubting whether its a good enough reason.😆😆😆 but i'll continue anyway and you ppl can jooti me later. I'm in two minds about Sukriti and Alaap. I really believe he has changed but I'm not sure if I was in Sukriti's position if I would be able to forgive him, yet alone allow him back in my life. Well she believes he has changed and i'll try to reveal some of her reasoning in the next part so it'll be clearer why she wants to give him another chance. As for having him back in her life...there is more to it than just simply forgiving him.
Really excellent, can't wait for the next part. 😛 I am writing it...i did need feedback though on this part so i know what are some of the questions and concerns that i can address in the next part so no one feels cheated. Thanx BC.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

JC...I just feel like giving you a great big hug 🤗 🤗 ...How I have missed your updates... awww..🤗🤗i know i was late. It after like two weeks. But got lazy😆😆😆 and didn't want to write when i am not interested in writing.

But it was beautiful! absolutely...the scene in the bedroom...just lovely. The pictures, the engravings...I dunno what it was about that...I just have this image of them, its hard to explain...they're so stuble in the way they behave and it makes it even more beautiful... hai Rima...thanx darling. I know i can always count on you not to pressure me into giving more than i am willing to give. Thanx so much for that. I like the subtleness..the small things...tho i enjoy the explosions and passions just as much...but simplicity touches my heart much more.

JC, I loved the way you incorperated Milind's onscreen character into this...the whole being spawled across the bed thing...I loved how she woke up in his arms...and that he noticed that she was about to touch him...I like that he doesn't negate the fact that she too could feel the same way about him...well she hasn't given him a reason to think that..and he has plenty hints to think that she might feel the same way about him. I think that when the time does come, he will not shy away from telling her how he feels because he knows there is a possibilty she feels the same... well lets c about that.😉

The only thing I had expected from your fic was the Alaap-Sukriti story...and I can totally understand Milind's anger but I am kinda proud that Sukriti is being mature and cool headed...I'm still not too sure whether Alaap should be forgiven, but it's only human to err and he is showing definite signs of remorse and repentance... what is this yaar. When all this time Milind, Suki and Prachi were mad at Alaap, everyone was sympathizing with the guy..you all wanted them to forgive him no? And now i show the characters trying to forgive him and you say that you are not sure he should be forgiven...😆 me confused hai😕😕😕

Loved it...absolutely... 👏 Brilliant, Brilliant stuff...Lol...acually I re-read a few chapters a few days ago and I realised, I loved it even more the second time... 😆 .you re-read...awww. Makes me so happy.😃 Glad you enjoyed. Thanx hun so much.

Thanks JC 😊

loved d update JC 🤗

so our prachi wrote the letters huh ................. that s so cuteeeeeeeeee😉

loved the scene between michi 😍

i hope u will include more romantic scenes of them 😉😉

waise when r u uniting our michi 😆

thnx for d update dear🤗

agla part jaldi likna 😉😉

Originally posted by: MURALIDHARAN99

loved d update JC Thankyou🤗

so our prachi wrote the letters huh ................. that s so cuteeeeeeeeee😉 maine aisa kaha kya?😆

loved the scene between michi 😍 me too. really want a scn like that on the show.😳

i hope u will include more romantic scenes of them 😉😉 umm...well now all their secrets need to come out in the open...so its more drama than romance...but there is romance in the drama too...but of a different kind.

waise when r u uniting our michi 😆 good question, i don't know.😆😆😆 i don't want to give myself a deadline as i know that when i start writing, things take a different turn that i plan.

thnx for d update dear🤗

agla part jaldi likna 😉😉 hmmm...i am attempting to. Lekin always some issue or another is interrupting me.

Thanx for the comments.