FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 136

hey jc wow, after such a long time🤗..🤗.i was wonderin about wat happeneed t ur ff...anyways....wat can i say about this chapter its absolutly fabulous (lolz shabbo's tounge🥱)...but i have to say the way prachi cried out for rithwick really surprised me...its like as if rithwick is really her child😕....n the way mr.mishra was missin his prachi was just too cute😳...hope this duffer realise soon that he luvs her and tells her before itz too late. please jc clear the misunderstandings before they even start😔...i just cant wait t see them confess their feelings for each other😊

Originally posted by: (**sia**)

hey jc wow, after such a long time🤗..🤗.i was wonderin about wat happeneed t ur ff...I know...kahin kho gaya tha...anyways....wat can i say about this chapter its absolutly fabulous (lolz shabbo's tounge🥱)lolz......but i have to say the way prachi cried out for rithwick really surprised me...its like as if rithwick is really her child😕 well, she does think of him as her own...she is that much attached to him....n the way mr.mishra was missin his prachi was just too cute😳...hope this duffer realise soon that he luvs her and tells her before itz too late. he has started realizing already...but maybe he won't tell her so soon please jc clear the misunderstandings before they even start😔...areee yaar misunderstanding hone toh do...then only i can clear them...😆😆😆 varna story kya reh jaayegi.

i just cant wait t see them confess their feelings for each other😊 hmm...it'll be 'different' way of confessing your feelings...😉😆😆

continue soon....😊😊😊 sure will.

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

reserrrrrrrrrrved! BACK after work *cries*

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Sorry hun late as usual I read it at office but wasn't in a state to comment thanks to my boss *Munee thinking of wringing her boss's neck*😡 anyways. Do you like torture JC I think you do....
*JC making innocent face* aisa ilzaaam...hai mein mar kyun nahi gayi. Me torture you guys...kya baat kar rahi ho.😆 Sangeetha is the biggest torture inflicter in this forum...mein usse toh kam hoon.

Prachi and nightmares I do not understand this combo... what has happened in the past? From the first part onwards I have not had a hint or trace of Prachi undergoing any serious havoc besides her brother's actions and her bearing the brunt. Its not the past that haunts her.
Do these nightmares relate to her emotions for Rhitvick or Milind. Going by her actions i feel she's afraid of losing Rhitvick..... that's understandable. yup.

The big mystery still unsolved why does she want to leave Milind is there no hope in her mind for her marraige to work out. Why can't she give it a shot? Why has she closed all doors to reasoning, does she not understand or accept any change in Milind's behaviour or has she blinded herself to it purposely. Her character by far is most intriguing. i've mentioned at several places how hopeless she is...and it doesn't necessarily have to do with Milind changing his attitude towards her...she will remain the intrigue of this story until her reasons are revealed...thats just the demand of script.😆😆😆 I feel like i am writing a mystery novel.🤣

Milind poor soul is the most bashed up Prachi does not talk Sukriti seems to have her own mind and Alaap is an enigma to him. Going by hs conditions it's really very apt for him to conclude this as a conspiracy on Prachi's part. I am so glad to hear that from everyone. that was my fear really that it wouldn't sound logical for him to jump to that conclusion.
I'm deeply saddened because just like Opti I had hoped for him to pine for Prachi now I'm angry and I want him to slap some sense in Prachi. How can she alone make decisions for everyone around her. I must say you've sketched her character really well she's as stupid here as she is in the serial, presuming, believing, concurring things that are not to be. Anyways I should not vent my boss's wrath on the poor creature. She has her demons to fight. OMG Munee...boss pe itna gussa..what did he do.😆😆 Vaise meri doll ko baksh do plz...she is not that terrible..yes she thinks differently than the rest of us mortals but stupid nahi hai...at least i don't think so yet...😊
Thank you for a lovely update continue soon now.😊 I've already started writing the next part.😃

Originally posted by: zcbcc34

😃Hello Mein kab se intezaaaaaaaaaaar kar rahi thi...i shall give you two whacks later for forgetting.

OMG...I was NOT expecting Prachi's dream/nightmare...😭...damn, you know what I could just feel her terror and panic...the way she was hugging Ritwik to her chest was just heartbreaking...JC...in dono ko judaa hote mujhse dekha nahin jaayega......Prachi will just fall apart...urgh, it's too painful to even think about...its very painful...lekin Prachi will have to...its the only thing she can do..😭😭 as for her falling apart...i think you dont' give her enough credit...she'll be miserable but she'll put herself through it for those she loves.

I'm just marvelling at the strenght of this girl...her convictions to leave Ritwik and Milind behind are firm but her subconscious is unwilling to let her do so...😭...JC...why oh why is Prachi putting herself through this torture...I have remained patient until now...but mujhse uski yeh halat dekhi nahin jaati...awww...i am sorry hun...Milind se bhi nahi dekhi jaayegi...and thats what i am aiming for.

Okie...I LOVED how Milind wanted Prachi to open up to him and for him to be able to help...you know what...I was kinda thinking Prachi being frightened would be the point when Milind would console her, help her like she has done so for him all this while...but he was sort of shunned by her and he accepted it without a fight. I feel this was perfectly done, if he had forced her to I cant think of another term but open up to him...so please forgive me...then I could see a cute scene but the way you've done it makes it all the more realistic, your Milind isn't like that...he's not going to make her (does he feel he has no right to?)...perhaps as he was already very tired, he could exhert himself further...anyway...I'm pretty sure none of this will make sense to you...LOL...but I had to get it out, I have like all these muddled things I wanted to say about the update... it makes sense what you are saying...and Milind might have pushed further but he is not sure if he has the right to..right now...as i had hoped to convey that Prachi was acting weird for some time...she was not talking to him much and the ease that once was there between them was removed by Prachi herself...its back to being strangers. Plus i didn't have him force her to tell because right now is not the time to tell him any of it. He'll make her talk though when he feels that he has all the right to know.

Can I just say...SUCCESS!!!!...whohooooooSee...I knew it would work out...because you're so flipping good at it! Lol...I love the way you sowed the seeds of doubt against Prachi in Milind's mind...none of it seems irrational or illogical...it's perfectly down...*claps* too lazy to find the emoticon...LOL...hate the new layout! Thanx Rima...i really have you to thank for easing my nerves.

JC all in all Fabulous...

I read what Sonia had written...and when I read the PM I thought so too...there is a difference in your writing...it was always good but this update just seemed extremely well written... Haila...sachchi...😕 yaani ke mujhe breaks lene chahiye..more often.😆 Thanx Rimz...i still don't see tho why you guys feel that way.

Originally posted by: kubare

JC darling....got ot read both the parts😃....an have to say....fantastic dear👏 Thankyou Di...kahaan the aap.

The way you have described each an devery emotion and mental turmoil an dthoughts of each character is really brilliant.👏👏👏 I do try to make it relatable and logical...as much as i can. I am so so so glad my efforts paid off. Milind really was the hardest to put on paper...it can be difficult to justify why he does things of thinks the way he thinks..so often he comes out looking like the bad guy and its not my intention...but i am so glad at this point everyone understands him.

Loved the Suk and Alaap...part along with Milland understanding of the importance and meaning of Prachi in his life😆.....and the way you described Prachi's nightmare.....wow...👏👏👏

Aww...so we will have Milli doubt Prachi.....over the whole Alaap -Suk business.....

Can't wait to see...what we you have in store for us.😃 Its important for Michi to go away from each other for a while...it'll only help them. It'll make Milind realize just how much he needs Prachi in his life.

Love

Krishna Thanx Di. 🤗