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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: wande

JC darling u know what now where this lovely FF of urs is going and I very happy about it.



lolz..Wandu i was just about to ask you why you didn't read yet. But yes you know where the FF is headed...its headed to reveal all the secrets but it'll be a slower process than you think. I think by ch 50 the MAP puzzle should completely be revealed with no questions remaining.😃 Thats my goal...thats what i am trying to achieve. But meanwhile, you'll have to bare something that are not gonna make you too happy hun. Hope you'll stick around for the better stuff that will come later.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
JC me not reading ur very own FF u have got to be kidding me babe😊and u know what everybody is crying in my house and all that I can think about is ur Rishtey that's how much I love it😳
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: optimist

Wow, JC finally you have bestowed your kindness on us poor readers and have started unravelling your mysteries. As promised, I will start my comments now that you have. lolz...i have given a trailor...the rest is to come after the next chapter.😃

So my guess fairly hit the mark. Prachi had written those poems and I guess she was under the impression Milsi knew who they were from. The last one may be the one conveying that she wanted to break ties with him and may have been written after the Suki-Alaap mishap broke out. The fact that he did not acknowledge her after they met must have led her to believe that she was only a passing fancy to him and her strange condition to him of not falling for her was to ensure that he kept it that way. behaviour towards her since marriage leads her to think that he did not know the identity of the person behind the poems no thats not what caused her to believe that. which is a fact since Milsi believes that they were written by Anjali. So I guess that solves the MAP puzzle except for the little details as to how Milsi came to think that it was Anjali who had written those poems. I have a feeling that Milsi may have initially used the poems Prachi had written to woo Ayesha but later fell in love with the writer herself not realising she is not the one he thought she was. tododo...😛 wait for it. Akka your guess were partly right...but there are holes in it that are basically due to minute details that you are missing. I'll be filling it in soon.😃 But the rest of this chapter will be about giving Prachi an excuse to leave Milsi. And the next chapter is less about Michi.

Now that she sees these poems had been carefully preserved in all these years she realises that Milsi never really got over her but his
Loved the way you are developing Milsi's feelings towards Prachi. I am glad he has finally decided to let go of his past as he thinks it is. Poor guy does not realise he cannot, considering the woman he wants to let go is the woman he has fallen in love with. Will there be a confronatation between Anjali and Milsi regarding the past? Now that the poems are gone, I dont think there may be one soon since he has already decided to let by gones be by gones. Without the confrontation the guy will still be in darkness as to to the fact that his past love is his present love. well the past has to be brought up and you are right without the black satin Milsi has nothing to really confront Anjali with and now that he has let go of his past he doesn't feel the need to confront her...so then how will he know the truth😉 I am so gonna enjoy that chapter and so will you.

I hate to think that Prachi will leave him without this guy realising the truth atleast about the past. But I guess you want to torture him for if he knows it he would have hopes of getting her back which you would want to scuttle for some time and make us suffer in the process. haha..me make you suffer...no...its all Prachi's fault. Voh duffer hai toh mein kya kar sakti hooon akka.😆😆😆

I was disappointed you did not let us into the Anjum-Anjali mystery by making Milsi a dumbo. hey Milsi is not dumbo i just make him one because there is a right time for everything.😆 When Prachi mentioned that Anjum is Anjali's sister should not the use of present tense make him wonder where she is? ahaa...the point is that Prachi didn't use present tense. She said Anjum "WAS" Anjali's sister and therefore duffer is not a dumbo to think that Anjum died in the accident.😃 Instead the duffer assumes she died with her parents. As a result we are still in the dark as to what Prachi really knows about Anjum and how Anjum got separated from Anjali. Hope you dont stretch that mystery for long. like i said, that mystery is hardly related to MAP puzzle. So don't fret over it. It'll be revealed.

Loved the way Milsi woke up with Prachi in his arms and his legs across her. I think you know the reason why.😳 Yes i know the reason why.😳 awwwww. Anyway since you are not letting them physically express themselves when fully conscious, happy to note that atleast in their subconsious, they end up seeking physical proximity to each other. they need that much. Dono kitna tadapte hain ek doosre ke liye. I had to give them that much.


I had already PMed you about what I think would be Prachi's reason for leaving. So did I get it right atleast this time? mein bhool gayi. I must go back and search for it.

As always your chapters are excellently written and I loved them all. I'll add a few more comments on earlier chapters when I recollect them. Now maintain this tempo and unravel your mysteries soon. yes but two major events need to occur before all is out in front of everyone and i guess that leap i was talking about earlier is coming soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Oh JC some light on the biggest mystery of the century. hahaha...MAP puzzle is not the biggest there is still one more even bigger one.😛 I completely agree with Opti's theory of Milsi falling in love with Prachi conseidering her Anjali. How many women was he in love with? lolz...you can count after a few more chapters. I wonder anyways the point here is we'll be getting more of this soon. umm...depends on how you see it. I thought I'd have a hot Neesha make out session don't you dare rob us of that. lolz...kya...hahaha..umm..well this chapter and the next are some heavy duty drama...Neesha are not gonna show up in this chapter...but next one might see them. I've been very patient with Neesha now. hey i gave lots of Neesha in the previous chapter...ya no make out sessions but you know me..i have a hard time with intimate scns...so i try to steer away unless its unavoidable. I won't include a steam session just to have one. There has to be a purpose behind everything.😆 The engravings on the frames were superb loved them. Thanx to hallmark😆 The act that Milsi is finally getting to know Prachi's feelings for him even though slowly is a relief I hope it progresses further with him unraveling the whole truth soon. oh he will...just as soon as he deals with some stuff...he'll unravel it all. Nicely done JC... 😊 Thanx yaar.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: wande

JC me not reading ur very own FF u have got to be kidding me babe😊and u know what everybody is crying in my house and all that I can think about is ur Rishtey that's how much I love it😳



omg Wandu may your grandma's soul RIP and not curse me for writing an FF thats takes you away from her mourning. I am so sorry for your loss Wandu. I had forgotten (what else is new). TC hun.
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Posted: 17 years ago
oh,no,no do not worry urself about that dear cause I really needed all of the FF I can get to take my mind off whatever it's that is going on my house,because I still don't know or get why they are all still crying the old woman is really old😕
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jinc118


So my guess fairly hit the mark. Prachi had written those poems and I guess she was under the impression Milsi knew who they were from. The last one may be the one conveying that she wanted to break ties with him and may have been written after the Suki-Alaap mishap broke out. The fact that he did not acknowledge her after they met must have led her to believe that she was only a passing fancy to him and her strange condition to him of not falling for her was to ensure that he kept it that way. behaviour towards her since marriage leads her to think that he did not know the identity of the person behind the poems no thats not what caused her to believe that. which is a fact since Milsi believes that they were written by Anjali. So I guess that solves the MAP puzzle except for the little details as to how Milsi came to think that it was Anjali who had written those poems. I have a feeling that Milsi may have initially used the poems Prachi had written to woo Ayesha but later fell in love with the writer herself not realising she is not the one he thought she was. tododo...😛 wait for it. Akka your guess were partly right...but there are holes in it that are basically due to minute details that you are missing. I'll be filling it in soon.😃 But the rest of this chapter will be about giving Prachi an excuse to leave Milsi. And the next chapter is less about Michi.

So I am back to square one, worrying over the MAP puzzle which I thought I had solved. You do compound my migraines!

Now that she sees these poems had been carefully preserved in all these years she realises that Milsi never really got over her but his
Loved the way you are developing Milsi's feelings towards Prachi. I am glad he has finally decided to let go of his past as he thinks it is. Poor guy does not realise he cannot, considering the woman he wants to let go is the woman he has fallen in love with. Will there be a confronatation between Anjali and Milsi regarding the past? Now that the poems are gone, I dont think there may be one soon since he has already decided to let by gones be by gones. Without the confrontation the guy will still be in darkness as to to the fact that his past love is his present love. well the past has to be brought up and you are right without the black satin Milsi has nothing to really confront Anjali with and now that he has let go of his past he doesn't feel the need to confront her...so then how will he know the truth😉 I am so gonna enjoy that chapter and so will you.

I think I will be so drained by then that it may end up becoming an anti-climax.


I hate to think that Prachi will leave him without this guy realising the truth atleast about the past. But I guess you want to torture him for if he knows it he would have hopes of getting her back which you would want to scuttle for some time and make us suffer in the process. haha..me make you suffer...no...its all Prachi's fault. Voh duffer hai toh mein kya kar sakti hooon akka.😆😆😆

You are the creator of that duffer. So I hold you solely responsible like we hold OGF responsible for the behaviour of his characters!

I was disappointed you did not let us into the Anjum-Anjali mystery by making Milsi a dumbo. hey Milsi is not dumbo i just make him one because there is a right time for everything.😆 When Prachi mentioned that Anjum is Anjali's sister should not the use of present tense make him wonder where she is? ahaa...the point is that Prachi didn't use present tense. She said Anjum "WAS" Anjali's sister and therefore duffer is not a dumbo to think that Anjum died in the accident.😃

Yeah, I realised that. My mistake. I read it in hurry. Anyway the end result is the same. We are still in the dark regarding that mystery as well.

Instead the duffer assumes she died with her parents. As a result we are still in the dark as to what Prachi really knows about Anjum and how Anjum got separated from Anjali. Hope you dont stretch that mystery for long. like i said, that mystery is hardly related to MAP puzzle. So don't fret over it. It'll be revealed.

I know it has nothing to do with the MAP puzzle but you have successfully converted your FF into a maze of puzzles and I only want you to keep reducing them one by one as soon as possible so that we can get on with some unadulterated Michi romance!


Loved the way Milsi woke up with Prachi in his arms and his legs across her. I think you know the reason why.😳 Yes i know the reason why.😳 awwwww.

I know you do!😉

Anyway since you are not letting them physically express themselves when fully conscious, happy to note that atleast in their subconsious, they end up seeking physical proximity to each other. they need that much. Dono kitna tadapte hain ek doosre ke liye. I had to give them that much.

Subconcious proximity is all fine but I want the real deal and I think we have waited for far too long. Its 47 gruelling chapters and Milsi is just about realising his feelings for Prachi and is willing to let go of his past! Gosh! I am sure if somebody else was writing this FF, you would not have displayed even half as much patience as we are doing!


I had already PMed you about what I think would be Prachi's reason for leaving. So did I get it right atleast this time? mein bhool gayi. I must go back and search for it.

You and your forgetfulness!😡


As always your chapters are excellently written and I loved them all. I'll add a few more comments on earlier chapters when I recollect them. Now maintain this tempo and unravel your mysteries soon. yes but two major events need to occur before all is out in front of everyone and i guess that leap i was talking about earlier is coming soon.

Whatever you say JC! Me very tired of taxing my brains!!! But I will still hazard my guesses. One I think will be Soumya's delivery and the other may be Suki-Alaap confrontation or breaking of the news of Anjali-Kavya's relationship to Milsi.

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Posted: 17 years ago

JC, forgot to mention those engravings. This gives an insight into the deep love and regard Prachi holds for her father and that in turn gives credence to my belief that her decision to leave Milsi has something to do with her father. I had given my explanation in my earlier PM. Let me know how I am holding up.

By the way what's with the Shah sisters? All of them are bent upon breaking my poor Milsi's heart, unintentional though it may be. I think you should have titled your FF 'Milind and the Shah Sisters'!

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Posted: 17 years ago
just caught up with ur FF...its brilliant JC and very ADDICTIVE! after i caught up with ur parts i read the whole of ur FF again to see if there were any clues that i had somehow missed but u have done a brilliant job in maintaining the suspence....luckily for us u seem to be unraveling the secrets urself, phew!

so prachi was the one who wrote those letters to milsi, and the poor duffer thinks they were written by anjali...i wonder how that came about?

i love how ur showing the gradual attraction/love milsi is feeling for prachi...he sees to be surprised about his own feelings too but he also seems to think that him and prachi can work. i loved his reaction when he saw prachi in the sari 😆 JC i loved how michi were snuggled together on the bed, it makes me want more michi romance....hope the two duffers get together soon.

JC i still havent figured out why inder would have wanted prachi to stay away from milsi, where exactly does inder come into it? please unravel evrything sooooooooon.

thanx for the updates. im looking forward to part 2. JC prachi seems adamant on looking for an excuse to leave milsi, i hope she doesnt do or say something which she may regret later please dont make michi go through more heartbreak.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: wande

oh,no,no do not worry urself about that dear cause I really needed all of the FF I can get to take my mind off whatever it's that is going on my house,because I still don't know or get why they are all still crying the old woman is really old😕



oh ok then.😆 Gald to be of use.

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