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Posted: 17 years ago

loved this part yaar 😊

loved the family bonding 👏

in this part Michi was mindblowing👏👏👏esp when they saw neesha holding their hand together under the table so milsi also thought to do that😉😉 JC uski wish puuri kar dona 😆 😆 😆 😆

Wohhhhhhhhhhh so milsi wrote poems 😉😉😉

Neev was cute when he played the pranks on prachi 😆Jc aise type ke scenes zaroor likna .............. i really love it 😃😊👏

Priyasha is such a sweet name 😃😊

waiting for d next part 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sailat

Hey JC:: will make this quick!! i loved the update!! Thankyou and felt sad forvPrachi who thinks she or her life is beyond hope *sniff sniff*.....am hoping both MP get to share an intimate moment wherein atleast M kinda voices out his feelings oh he will more than just share his feelings.😉..but his feelings need th time to grow stronger....feel that poor P....she's soo selfless at all times taking others miseries upon herself, thinking its her responsibility to do so. yup thats her.

Again, thanks for the lovely update!! i wanted to write more but then thought against it since i wudn't want to go back in my memory and account for P's behaviour and her reasoning for doing so!! I certainly think that HAMESHA song might be P's fav coz it was Milind's fav song!! something like that!! something like that but not quite.😆😆😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: MURALIDHARAN99

loved this part yaar 😊 Thankyou.

loved the family bonding 👏

in this part Michi was mindblowing👏👏👏esp when they saw neesha holding their hand together under the table so milsi also thought to do that😉😉 JC uski wish puuri kar dona 😆 😆 😆 😆 lolz...woh apni wishes kudh poori karega...don't worry...he just needs to realize that Prachi loves him too.

Wohhhhhhhhhhh so milsi wrote poems 😉😉😉 Theek se pado yaar.

Neev was cute when he played the pranks on prachi 😆Jc aise type ke scenes zaroor likna .............. i really love it 😃😊👏 hehehe...ya i like those pranks too.

Priyasha is such a sweet name 😃😊 ya...i suggesting it as a name for my niece.

waiting for d next part 😊 hmm...donno when its coming.

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Posted: 17 years ago

Chapter 45: Phone calls

This is a short one cause don't have the time to write more.

He had dialed the number a few times but everytime the person who came to the phone was not the one he wanted to talk to. He wished he didn't feel so compelled. But not knowing about Anjali was making him restless. He threw the phone on the bed and laid on his back and sighed. He would have to make that call…the call that he had been avoiding for years and he had been so strong but now his concern for Anjali was overriding it all. Why he was concerned about her was not a mystery to him. But he just didn't want to deal with that feeling. It had started on the day Anjali had the accident. Having found her at the accident site being taken to the hospital in a stretcher, her face and body completely covered in blood, he had felt like he was right in the middle of his worst nightmare. He had tried many times to imagine what it would have been like if he had witnessed Anjum's accident, if he had been there with her in the hospital. He no longer needed to imagine because he went through it with Anjali. The first 24 hours had been hell for him. Not knowing if he would ever see her alive again...he didn't sleep and paced around the hospital, alone and scared and he had thought he would die or atleast be driven to insanity. Then finally when he had been allowed to see her, he was bombarded with feelings all at once that overwhelmed him to an extent that he didn't know what to do anymore. He had stood looking at her injured face, hands and legs, watching her rhythmic breathing. At that point it would have been futile to tell himself that she wasn't the girl he loved. The thought actually didn't even cross his mind. Instead he had sat by her holding her hand and prayed for hours to see her wake up. When finally her eyes had made a movement he had suddenly felt alive again. He had felt alive after years of being numb.

He looked at the phone and once again made his mind to call. He remembered Anjali's parting words to him. She had earnestly looked into his eyes and implored, "Kisiko bhi apne se baandh ke rakhna bandhan hota hai Kavya. Aur pyar kabhi bandhan nahi hota." She had let that message sink in before whispering, "Let her go". With those words she had removed her hands from his and the nurse had wheeled her away. It was that moment he realized that he had let go of Anjum sometime during the past month and he didn't even feel guilty about it. How Anjali had managed to accomplish that with him, he didn't know. Maybe it was the relief of having shared his pain with someone, someone who understood and cared…someone who felt a lot like Anjum herself. Now he was driving himself up the wall wondering how Anjali was doing because he hadn't been able to contact her since she left.

He dialed again and this time forcing his fingers to complete the call he took a deep breath before putting the receiver to his ears.

Female voice: "Hello, Hello?? Helllllllllloooooooooooo? Hello this is the Nanda residence. Who is this?
Kavya was about to speak when he heard a male voice in the background asking, "Disha, who is it?" and Disha answered, "Pata nahi. Koi subah se blank calls de raha hai."
When the guy came on the phone and started yelling at him for being a pest Kavya finally spoke
Kavya: "Shlok?"
Shlok answered after his shock subsided. "Bhai…bhai aap hi ho na? Maine theek se suna…apki awaaz thi."
Kavya: "meri awaaz bhoole nahi tum itne saalon mein."
Shlok: "Bhai…ek din aisa nahi gaya jab meine aapko yaad nahi kiya. Aap kahan chale gaye. Vaapis aa jayiye bhai…apne ghar."
Kavya: "Shlok tum jaante ho mein kyun chala gaya tha. Aur vaise meine phone purani batein karne ke liye nahi kiya. Mujhe ek help chahiye thi…and I couldn't think of anyone else. So for old times sake…mera ek kaam karega?"
Shlok: "Bhai aap mujhse request kar rahe hain…mein itna paraaya ho gaya aapke liye?"
Kavya felt bad for using that tone with Shlok. He knew Shlok would never hate him but he had worked so hard to harden himself against his concern for that family…the family that regarded him as less than. He didn't want to get pulled into that emotional hole again.
Kavya: "Shlok a friend of mine is in Shimla. She is injured and disabled. I haven't been able to get in touch with her. I think her phone is out of service. She doesn't know anyone in Shimla. If I give you the address can you please enquire if she is ok."
Shlok: "Saalon baad apno ko yaad kiya aur voh bhi kisi paraaye ke liye?" Kavya could hear the hurt in his voice clearly but he refused to acknowledge it.
Kavya: "Shlok she is not a stranger…Anjum ki behen hai."
Shlok was silent as Kavya expected him to be shocked. "Lekin Anjum toh.."
"It's a long story Shlok...shayad Anjali kudh tumhe bata de. So will you do that much for me."
Shlok: "Zindagi mein pehli baar aapne mujhse kuch maanga hai bhai. Ofcourse I'll do it."

Before hanging up the phone Kavya made sure that Shlok would not inform anyone else of his whereabouts. He was sure if his grandparents found out they would emotionally blackmail him to return to India. And he had vowed never to return to that family. But he couldn't deny that it had been great to talk to Shlok again. Though Shlok was his step brother, he was adopted by their uncle and therefore they were raised as cousins. Yet the bond between them was very strong. It was for Shlok that his step mother had planned to take everything away from him…and it was for Shlok that he had walked away without a fight. Kavya gauzed that Shlok and Disha were married by now. It must have been a celebration at their house. His two cousin sisters, and three brothers…they must all be married too. They would all be happy, together and celebrating life. Only he was missing. He had missed out on a lot and that was his fate for thinking that his step mother would one day think of him as her own.
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Anjali: "Prachi yaar calm down. I didn't call because the phone was dead. I was trying to get it fixed. Aur haveli bhi kitni ujdi hui si thi. Sab theek karvaana tha. The servants thought that no one will ever come back here. You have no idea Prachi what the state of my house was. I feel so guilty for not having come here earlier.
Prachi: "Anju I was just worried because Ayesha said she tried to call you and couldn't reach. I thought maybe mamma too would have tried and was probably worrying where you are. So just call her now. I think Ayesha wants you help with something…it has to do with her wedding anniversary. They are celebrating it grandly this year.
Anjali: "Wow, that's awesome. I am so happy for those two. OK don't worry, I'll call home at least once everyday now. Khush?"
Prachi: "Achcha Anjali guess what. Ritwik started going to school. He is so excited about going there. I think he likes having friends his own age.
Anjali: "Well dah Prachi. Ofcourse he likes to play with other kids. Chalo achcha hai. Finally you got around to letting him out of your shelter. The boy needs that Prachi."
"Ya…I know." Prachi replied her tone mellowing down from the excitement it had earlier.
Prachi heard an unfamiliar voice through the phone asking Anjali if she needed anything else. She took a minute to answer and came back to her conversation.
Prachi: "Who was that?"
Anjali: "Voh Shlok tha. Kavya ka bhai."
Prachi: "Kavya ka bhai.."
Anjali: "yeh. His whole family is settled here. Nandas ka naam suna hai tune? Khaak suna hoga. Tujhe apni khayaalon ki duniya se phursat mile toh na."
Prachi: "Does your sudden trip to Shimla also have something to do with Kavya?"
Anjali: "Hooooo Prachi. Kya baat karti hai. Meine kahaa tha na. I just wanted to stay here…jahaan papa, mamma aur Anjum di ki yaadein hai."
Prachi: "Anju...mujhe bana rahi hai. Teri baatein kabhi itni seedhi nahi hoti jitni tu bataati hai."
Anjali: "Alright alright…fine. I am here because of him. Stop using that tone with me. Voh apni family se door rehta hai Prachi…and I know its killing him inside. Voh chahta hai ki vapis aajaye…lekin…I am trying to remove that lekin."
Prachi: "And why are you bothering with that 'lekin'. Kavya ki family matters mein tu kyun involve ho rahi hai." Prachi was smiling to herself because she already knew the answer. But it wasn't everyday that she would get a chance to tease Anjali.
Anjali: "Kyunki…kyunki mujhe aadat hai…sabki problem solve karne ki. Ab mein phone rakh rahi hoon kyunki mujhe badi maa koh phone karna hai. Bye" Anjali said forcefully and hung up. But Prachi could imagine the blush on her face right now.
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Ayesha: "Anjali, party is in a few weeks. Are we going to get everything done by then?"
Anjali: "You trust me na Ayesha. Don't bother about anything. I'll email you all the details. Just do me a huge favor. Hire someone to take the video of the entire event because I don't want to miss it. Mujhe saari details dikhni chahiye."
Ayesha: "Ok but I really wish you were here with us. Hamaari khushi mein kuch tumhaara bhi haat hai Anjali. And I never even thanked you.
Anjali: "Seeing the two of you happy together is thanks enough for me. And who knows maybe you'll get a chance to do me a favor someday. Tab vasool kar loongi.
Before handing the phone over to PL Ayesha reminded Anjali, "Anju tum kuch bhi bhool jao lekin the most important thing…"
Anajli: "Yes I know and I'll remember. Don't stress so much."
Ayesha: "You'r the best Anju."
Anjali: "I know" she chirped and laughed ending the conversation.

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Sukriti: "I won't repeat myself. Don't call me again."
Alaap: "Sukriti please give me one chance to explain. I really need to talk to you. Please. Meet me just once. You won't have to see my face ever again. I am not the same guy Sukriti. I am begging here…please."
Sukriti: "I don't care if you have changed Alaap. My life will never be the same, thanks to you. And I'll never forget it. So stop trying to see me. I've moved on and nothing you say matters anymore."
Alaap: "It matters Sukriti. It matters because of our son."
Sukirti: "ALAAAAAAAAAAP. Don't you dare call him our son. Voh sirf mera bachcha hai. Uska naam lene ka bhi hakh nahi hai tumhe samjhe."
Alaap heard the click of the phone when Sukriti hanged up and he sighed looking at the receiver. He had lost count on how many times he had tried to speak to Sukriti again. But he wouldn't give up because he couldn't. His conscience won't let him live in peace if he didn't speak to her. He would try again and again, until she listened…though he didn't deserve it…he was now desperate and his pride and arrogance stood defeated in front of his desire to ease the guilty soul.


I know many will be disappointed with the lack of Michi or Neesha...but i am still trying to get out my depressed mood and this is part is merely for informative reasons so that yall know whats going on with the characters...meantime. Next chapter will most likely be Neesha aniversary and its likely to be a long chapter full of romance.😳 (hopefully).

Takhliya
JC

[code] Translations

"Kisiko bhi apne se baandh ke rakhna bandhan hota hai Kavya. To tie down (or to hold onto) someone to yourself is considered a bondage Kavya Aur pyar kabhi bandhan nahi hota.And love is never a bondage"

"Pata nahi. Koi subah se blank calls de raha hai. Don't know. Someone has been giving blank calls since this morning."
"Bhai…bhai aap hi ho na? Bro is that really you? Maine theek se suna…apki awaaz thi."Did I hear correctly…it was your voice.
Kavya: "meri awaaz bhoole nahi tum itne saalon mein."You didn't forget my voice in all these years.
Shlok: "Bhai…ek din aisa nahi gaya jab meine aapko yaad nahi kiya. Bro there isn't a day that I have not thought of you. Aap kahan chale gaye. Where have you gone away to. Vaapis aa jayiye bhai…apne ghar." Come back home bro.
Kavya: "Shlok tum jaante ho mein kyun chala gaya tha. Shlok you know why I left. Aur vaise meine phone purani batein karne ke liye nahi kiya. I didn't call to talk about the past. Mujhe ek help chahiye thi I needed some help…and I couldn't think of anyone else. So for old times sake…mera ek kaam karega?"Will you do something for me.
Shlok: "Bhai aap mujhse request kar rahe hain…mein itna paraaya ho gaya aapke liye?" Bro are you requesting me for something…are we that estranged?
Shlok: "Saalon baad apno ko yaad kiya aur voh bhi kisi paraaye ke liye?" You thought of your own after so many years only cause of a stranger?
Kavya: "Shlok she is not a stranger…Anjum ki behen hai. She is Anjum's sister."
"Lekin Anjum toh.." But Anjum was…
"It's a long story Shlok...shayad Anjali kudh tumhe bata de. Maybe Anjali will tell you herself.
Shlok: "Zindagi mein pehli baar aapne mujhse kuch maanga hai bhai. You have asked something of me for the first time.

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Anjali: "Aur haveli bhi kitni ujdi hui si thi. The house was in bad shape Sab theek karvaana tha. Had to get everything fixed.
Anjali: "Voh Shlok tha. Kavya ka bhai."That was Shlok. Kavya's brother.
Anjali: "Nandas ka naam suna hai tune?Have you heard of the Nandas? Khaak suna hoga. Like you would know any such thing Tujhe apni khayaalon ki duniya se phursat mile toh na."When do you ever come out of your dreamland.
Anjali: " Kya baat karti hai. What are you saying Meine kahaa tha na. I told you I just wanted to stay here…jahaan papa, mamma aur Anjum di ki yaadein hai."with the memories of papa, mamma and Anjum.
Prachi: "Anju...mujhe bana rahi hai. Anju are you trying to fool me Teri baatein kabhi itni seedhi nahi hoti jitni tu bataati hai." Your matters are never as simple as you tell them to be.
Anjali: "Voh apni family se door rehta hai Prachi…he stays away from his family Prachi Voh chahta hai ki vapis aajaye He wants to go back…lekin but."
Prachi: "Kavya ki family matters mein tu kyun involve ho rahi hai. Why are you getting involved in Kavya's family matters"
Anjali: "Kyunki…kyunki mujhe aadat hai…sabki problem solve karne ki. Because…cause its my habbit to solve everyone's problems. Ab mein phone rakh rahi hoon kyunki mujhe badi maa koh phone karna hai. Now I am going to hang up because I have to call badi maa.
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Mujhe saari details dikhni chahiye. I want to see all the details
Ayesha: "Hamaari khushi mein kuch tumhaara bhi haat hai Anjali. You have a hand in our happiness too.
Tab vasool kar loongi. You can repay it then
"Anju tum kuch bhi bhool jao lekin Anju you can forget almost anything but the most important thing…"

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Voh sirf mera bachcha hai. He is only my child. Uska naam lene ka bhi hakh nahi hai tumhe samjhe." You don't even have the right to utter his name. [/code]



Edited by jinc118 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
why r u dipressed JC,,,the same reason like a majority here were dipressed. 😕
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Mmm JC. Will comment after I have read your next chapter, that is if you give me clues. Since you are being so miserly in giving me any information I can use for my speculation, I am also going to be miserly in my comments till you do!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: KillSerpent

why r u dipressed JC,,,the same reason like a majority here were dipressed. 😕 i am guessing everyone else is depressed because of the lack of the umph in Michi reunion. Ya that adds to my depression.



@Wande: Lolz hun..phir se beautiful.😆😆😆
Edited by jinc118 - 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: optimist

Mmm JC. Will comment after I have read your next chapter, that is if you give me clues. haha...ok. This chapter doesn't have much to guess on anyway. But yes next ch may...possibly but maybe not as i'll try to make it all romance and not much else...but you never know, things might come up. Since you are being so miserly in giving me any information I can use for my speculation, I am also going to be miserly in my comments till you do!😭😭ok

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😆 😆JC it was really awesome and u did a very wonderful job love but has no Michi part at all and that's why I couldn't say much about it😳but still u did an awesome job thank u👏

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