FF: Rishtey(MP-NA)- new prt updtd 12/25 new thread - Page 121

Originally posted by: dudley

really really nice part!!! 👏 👏
very touching, really one of your bests!! glad you think so. thankyou...i really had a tough time updating this...it just wasn't coming out right. But the fact that some of you still like it makes it all better for me.
they really felt like a family sitting together and having dinner, yup they are family
k update soon, lolz..i just updated.😆😆😆 ab ek aur...baap re...😆😆😆 but the next part is gonna be long with lots of little details....so it'll take time.
i really love your style of writing, everything is so simple yet sooooo deep!! ( i know kinda poetic but well i try! 😉 ) awww..thankyou...i am trying to make it that way so as not to make it confusing on top of the many secrets i am trying to protect.😆😆😆

Originally posted by: panache

hun! i did read it but can't seem to get my fingers to type my analysis 😆 its ok...i too am like that lately.

Truthfully, it was good but not great! (i mean this part 😊 ) ok now tell me why?

I loved the back story of Asha tai....Really sad and touching.... ya she is a sad woman. Its funny i just noticed all the females in my FF have a sad past to cry over. That was unintentional you know. Hmmm...interesting tho that it turned out this way.

NA - I was expecting soomething like this from you.... 😆ok what does that mean😕 What were you expecting and what did i give you. But Michi - have ways to go.... there is so many plots that i want you to start unraveling it now... 😃 The unravelling had begun Sangs...if only you weren't lazily reading it and looked a bit deeper...I basically gave you an update full of Milind's past...didn't you gather anything from it?

Originally posted by: ismita

Jc wonderful FF.This is the first time Iam commenting. Hey Ishu. Thanx for commenting now. Love to know my silent readers.
But Iam silent reader.I feel there is some mystery to Prachi's charcter in your FF. ofcourse there is.😆😆😆 I really loved reading it. Thankyou.
Why do I think Prachi is suffering from some illness and wants to hand over Ritwik responsibility? Oh i'd like to know why you think that too.😃 Plz do tell what gave you that idea.

But I really liked the way you developed all the characters 👏 Thankyou so much. Keep reading.

Originally posted by: optimist

Well, loved the embarassed Milsi. lolz...So the guy is desperate to keep his past loves a secret from Prachi well he is not sure as yet because he is clearly in love with her and her knowing that he was once in love with other girls might not sit well with Prachi in case he ever wants to confess his love for her...she can throw it in his face. and Ayesha was not helping him, was she? oh no...because she knows something that Mili baby doesn't😉 The guy was even writing poems for Ayesha? The crush seems to have been pretty strong. Seems to be. Thankfully Ayesha crushed it before it could develop into anything else. Thankfully And the song again, the root of MAP puzzle!ummhmm...now i gave you lyrics to ponder over too instead of just a tune. Now I think I can smile at what will be coming, not because you will slowly move us into the gas chamber, but because I need not worry my little head what the puzzle is. lolz..see this statement scared the hell otta me before i read your PM..lolz...but now i noe what you think you know...and that tells me that you don't knoe all.😳 lolz...luv you akka. But you are right...you can pretty much smile becuase i am not taking anyone into a gas chamber (EEEEEEEEEW horrible images...y did you use that image...not good not good).

So when the separation happens will Neesha take sides or will they play cupid? I think they will take sides and it will be up to Anjali to get these two duffers back together. Well...hmm...i haven't formulated their responses yet...well not Neev's anyway...but surely whatever they do will be for Michi benefit But ultimately it will be Anjali who will do the bhanda phodoing on all of Prachi's secrets.

Agree with Sangs. Get on with the Michi bit. Give us something juicy before splitting them up which I'm sure is inevitable in your plot. yes. its pretty inevitable...and the juicy part won't come because of the way they split...maybe i'll squeeze in something but no garantee...all the juice is on the other side of the split.

Asha tai's bit was moving. I am sure she too will play her part in getting Milsi to see how much Prachi really loves him when the going gets tough. Afterall she too remembers the song, does'nt she? yes she does...but she doesn't know Prachi too well..but she'll help Milind in her own way to deal with some things.

by the way did your mini leap happen already, or is it yet to happen? We are currently in the leap..lolz...right in the middle of it...see i was planning first to show Milsi softening towards Prachi and then taking a leap wehre they are split and then showing things in flashbacks..simply to avoid a really difficult part that looks like i am gonna have to write now. But then i decided it was better to show just how Milind falls in love and reveal the secret in bits at least leave clues to the secret before giving you guys a complete shocker...Tho you can be sure there is a few shocks coming your way. Umm...i still might leap a little...but the reason for it will be different now. If i do leap it will be after Neev-Ayesha's aniversary party which shoudl be in i donno...a month later in the timeline of my FF or after Soumya's baby arrives which should be in 3-4 months from where the story is now.