FF: WOH AJNABEE: Update:Part 48:Dec 6th 2009:p 172 - Page 21

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey! sorry for the long delay guys!

i have been so busy and i have had major writers block

i seriously dont know where to start writing

but dont worry i can tell everyone in waiting...so the next part should be up today or tomorrow....i will start writing it in a couple hours
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Posted: 17 years ago
CB your fan-fic is just brilliant!
Im dying to read the next bit of it..plz post it as soon as you can!
Thanks a ton! It makes a delightful reading!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey CB jus cant wait ny longer dear.......plzz post da next update quickly.....thanx......... 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Merry Christmas Guys! This is my present to you all! Hope you like it!

Please do leave your comments as I love reading them and find them really motivating!

Recap: Milind and Prachi are in Australia. Milind has gone on an important business meeting which is pivotal in determining the success of his upcoming projects. Meanwhile, Prachi decides to "spice" things up a bit by trying a new western avatar for one night. Milind and her are meeting after Milind's big meeting in front of the Sydney Harbour, where she will find out if the meeting was a success or not.

This is the dress that Prachi bought and intends to wear for her "date" with Milind, after his business meeting.



Part 17:

Prachi sat meekly on the steps of the Syndey Opera House. She looked up at the large clock and saw that it was already 10:15.

"Where is Milind?" she thought, "He was supposed to be here fifteen minutes ago." Getting impatient and worried, Prachi decided to call her husband's cell phone. No response. Now she was getting really worried.

"Don't be silly Prachi, everything is okay" she tried assuring herself in her mind. She called him again. This time there was an answer.

"Sorry Prachi," panted Milind on the other line.

"Hi Milind! How did you know that I was calling?"

"Yaar…I have callers ID!" laughed Milind.

Uff! Prachi was such a nervous wreck as she listened to Milind's voice that she could hardly speak coherently. She was glad of course that Milind was okay and answered her call, but she was extremely nervous about what his reaction would be to the sexy black dress she was wearing, with the fashionable accessories and even sexier pair of stilettos she had on.

"Prachi?" Milind asked on the phone, since Prachi had not responded.

"Sorry Milind…woh…main…are you almost here?" stuttered Prachi.

"Is everything okay sweetie?" Milind asked, with concern apparent in his tone.

"Yes of course everything is fine. What could be wrong? We are in Syndey on a warm summer's night, in a beautiful location with each other….everything is….sab kuch perfect hai," responded Prachi in a single breath.

Milind simply laughed on the other end of the phone. He could tell that Prachi seemed nervous, but he had no idea why. "Well okay Prachi, sorry for being late. The meeting just ended and I have some news for you."

"Is everything okay?" asked Prachi. Now it was her turn to be concerned.

"Well baby, you will find out when I get there. I'll be there in about 5 minutes."

"Okay, see you soon. Bye," Prachi said speedily as she hung up the phone. She quickly stood up and walked towards the water and put her arms against the railing. She was a nervous wreck!

"Will Milind like my outfit? Can I actually express how I feel about him fully? Did he get the contract? Is this dress too short? Is Milind here yet? Will tonight be memorable for him?" thought Prachi. Questions kept racing through her head, and she was getting more and more anxious by the second.

***

Milind quickly parked the car, and made his way towards the Opera House. He looked around to see people dining along the harbor by candlelight, with violinists playing romantic tunes. "Wow. What a perfect setting," he thought to himself.

He looked around to find his wife, and he also observed how everyone was dressed in western attire. He did not feel out-of-place at all, since he was dressed sharply in a sophisticated business suit, but he was worried whether or not Prachi felt comfortable in such a setting. After all, he thought to himself, his wife was only accustomed to wearing traditional suits and saris. He hoped to himself, that Prachi felt at ease amongst people who were dressed in lavish evening dresses and skirts.

Little did he know that his wife had quite a surprise in store for him.

***

Please don't forget to leave your comments!
Edited by canadianbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
no fair cb ur a big tease comeon atleast u give us a romantic evening.bt are not giving any pppppppllllllllllzzzzzzzz continue.and luved it 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: chituku

no fair cb ur a big tease comeon atleast u give us a romantic evening.bt are not giving any pppppppllllllllllzzzzzzzz continue.and luved it 👏



here is a hint: the evening is coming!

i will write the next part soon....i no longer have writer's block

expect it up tomorrow (christmas day) or the day after or the day after that :)
Edited by canadianbeauty - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey lovely part just cant wait to see milnds reaction
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: canadianbeauty



here is a hint: the evening is coming!

i will write the next part soon....i no longer have writer's block

expect it up tomorrow (christmas day) or the day after

thankoooooo sweety eagerly waiting for it😆

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Posted: 17 years ago
i loved your last part! i cant wait to see milind's reaction...can you pm me wen you post the next part? thx! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
CB - Anticipating the day aftr Christmas gift soon
lovely 👏 👏 👏

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