SS-Song of the Lark...(Part 17 Uptd) - Page 2

Reserving space..for my comment 😳
will come back and comment on part 1 😳

**** MY Comment******* (Read the part but had to run for a meeting as usual!!!My days have been filled with endless meetings and nothing else...)

I like this one for some reason...I guess may be it starts with hope or should i say tender feelings between the man and the woman of this story..For some reason whenever I read yours i can picture so many characters experiencing those emotions not just M&P.....

I liked the fact that this story shows him in a tender moment/light when he stares at her.. talks to himself saying that she sleeps like a child...I liked that fact a lot for some reason...

Awesome...! I think there is a difference in your style this time around....Am I right???

Beautiful as usual....Post the second part for me to read and comment...😳

Sareeta darling,this is not fair.You have promised me that you would post the entire SS all at a time to save me the pain of refreshing the page.What is this now? 😉 .I was just kidding,take your time honey.

Madhavi.

^^ Yaar Madhavi, blame it on work schedules... I jus couldnt type it all... during the break... abhi kar rahi hoon yaar... please bear with me... 😊

Aur waise bhi, this week is a hectic one for me...so I might be not able to really start anything new once I get this SS done with....

hurray hurray...its a new story today...

damn i just amaze myself with all that i come up with ! im just too brilliant !!!

moving on to you....yayyy....nayi kahani. and started off so dhinchakly...cuckoo woke him up...i laughed for 10 mins reading this cos all i could rem was angel of cuckooness... 😆
he reads....acha hai acha hai...i like intellectual men. whts he doing on the couch ???

aiyyoooo...shes so cute...sleeps like a baby..she has fingers curled up like a baby too.had she not been asleep i would hv pinched cheeks...but im big worshipper of sleep god and generally dont disturb ppl when they are being visited by him
..im just in love with the description of her sleeping and him looking on..and so sweet...he puts her haath uppar..

now continue sooon...im waiting...*taps her foot impatiently*

Beautiful start for a story but make it a full fledged story rather than a short one. Its always a pleasure to read what you write and I am waiting for the next update.

Sareeta darling,

It was a fantastic beginning👏....but...tooo short and what a place to end.....now that was not good of you dear.😆😆

Now be a good girl and post another part soon dear...and the next part better be a long part dear😃

Love

Krishna

Sareeta darling,

That was quick...good girl.😆

Now for my comments😉...dear what can I say that every part of yours leaves me wanting for more..as the one we read is not enough.

It was just fantastic, mindblowing, superb, awesome...am running out of adjectives dear..so will only say this👏

You do have a way with words and, that is whats so great about your writing dear. 😃👏

The way you go about expression the emotions and feeling of your character that one can feel them ...see them for oneself...it truly is like being there..

From....the bedroom....... the moonlight falling on her...... to her sleeping...him watching her...to him in the washroom splashing water on his face and in deep contemplation to his feelings, emotions and expression...in the party ...on seeing her and Neev.

Just tooo good dear....loved it all and update soon

Eggarly awaiting the next part dear.😃

Love

Krishna

Sareeta dear,

I knew it. Once you start you will be on a roll. you started a second ff already. 😊

I loved it. I am using the same word to describe this creation of yours as all others "beautiful".. The words in your fanfic make you actually see those scenes in front of your eyes while reading. I especially liked the way you described Milinds feeling, his trepedition and emotions while seeing Prachi with Neev. I could actually feel those. 👏 👏

Pls continue soon.

Love Shan.

It was great part!

I understand where you are going with this.. you are talking about each of them having feelings for each other but acting as friends towards each other esp. Milind....(Am I getting it?)

I understand the pang of regret he feels seeing the close friendship btw Neev and Prachi. He is a man in love which he doesn't know yet.

And the regret he feels for friendship is may be b'cos he doesn't know how to cross the threshold from friendship to love with his wife...

I like the way you line of thinking is moving with this one....Looking forward to reading the next part.

Awww, Sangeeta, aaapne tho poori kahaaani bataaaaaaaadi! 😆

*BIG HUG TO YOU* Thank you, I am jus so happy, you could see right through the words into my mind! 😊

Although abit of what you said is not what I am attempting, the rest of it is! Now which part is the one I am attempting... aapko pata chal jayega!
😉