SFF: 'Forever' (MP)Part 10, P.26, July 10 - Page 6

Originally posted by: madhu_vasireddy

The second part was brilliant hun.Nicely written.But it was very short though.I know I am being greedy but then can't help it.When are you updating? 😉

madhu.

Madhu,

Thank you😳 Yeah, I had to engage in some kanjoosi due to work... But um... I'm in the midst of writing an essay so in btw breaks, I'll type the next part which I hope to post on Thursday in the least😳 Thanks for the patience!

Cheers,

dc

Hey guys,

Terribly sorry to keep ya'll waiting... I will update this tomorrow. Please bear with me!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: desi chic

Hey guys,

Terribly sorry to keep ya'll waiting... I will update this tomorrow. Please bear with me!

Cheers,

dc

haila...tomorrow...itni jaldi...😲😲😲...the rest may think that u are late...but haila...i know you from 'way back'...this is early for you...wah wah mer dc...lage raho...😉😉😉...you know i love you 🤗🤗🤗...all jokes apart...cant wait...i have to update too 😕😕😕
JAZ

Originally posted by: jnawaz

haila...tomorrow...itni jaldi...😲😲😲...the rest may think that u are late...but haila...i know you from 'way back'...this is early for you...wah wah mer dc...lage raho...😉😉😉...you know i love you 🤗🤗🤗...all jokes apart...cant wait...i have to update too 😕😕😕
JAZ

Kaisi dost hai tu yaar... izzat ko yoon uchaal rahi hai😆 Yeah... "way back"... woh baat toh wahin pe atki hui hai na kahin?😳 ... Sudharja😆... and zara kaske maska maar😆 Of course u love me... its impossible not to right?😃😆 jk... Yeah, I still have yet to catch up on yours... Sorry babes, I will get to it tomorrow as well!

Cheers,

dc

awwwwwww such a cute part...BTW the dialogues seem xactly like wat Milind wud say... 👏 👏 ..update soon..
Arshia

Recap: He addressed her with startled eyes feeling her fingers brush softly against his lips… She held them there for a moment, as though making sure his sentence never completed… and as though once again aware of her vulnerability… she removed her extended hand just as quickly as it had hushed him. Her filmy gaze did not fail to meet his as she replied with a disappointed demeanour, "Aisi baat aap…" (Such a thought…). Her unstable voice faded out as she rested a hand over her mouth, turning hurriedly to leave…

Part 3

Her feet ceased mid-step… as the pain harrowing her… momentarily gave way to the instinctive surprise… Turning, her eyes looking on the long, sturdy fingers encasing her ornamented wrist… and trailed the journey to their owner… His firm features were contorted in an arrogant flicker of anger… a few nightly strands hovered over afore his face… barely obtrusive to the ever vigilant eyes… dark as the night… The eyes… they seemed to edge out everything else when it came to him… Despite the situation… his face remained blank… only decipherable to the most penetrating of a gaze… He had always this authoritative look… a sense of pride… something she had come to value… yet it somewhere had perhaps become an obstacle… Why did he always mask himself?

Without warning… or word… she felt herself being tugged towards the little oak table… upon which sat the most minimal ingredients of her devotion… After a moment of deafening silence… and intent observation of the components of the "aarti" as laid afore… her amazed gaze traced wondrously towards her unmoving companion… His eyes still tore at the traditional set-up… as though assessing it… yet keeping at a distance… At some point, the grip on her arm loosened… slowly, the fingers became undone… their touch leaving a reminiscing tingle upon her skin… For a long moment, she continued her observation… her state bewildered… yet a strange sense of calm present… It was as though he had consumed her attention entirely… the world beyond… momentarily forgotten… as she tried to unearth him… whilst he struggled to keep his reserve… Her unblinking eyes now rendered shameless… as her supposedly "inexpressive" companion turned his gaze to her… Quickly, she averted his stare…

Unsure… yet determined… she extended her slightly trembling hands… curving her fingers at the edges of the plate… whilst bringing it afore… With each round of the aarti the world melted into him… and the minute… a minute lived… never to forget… Her eyes held a moment's hesitancy… a doubt dreamily vanished with his unquestioning demeanour… A gentle smiled dared fleetingly upon her lips… as he bent forth to receive the tikka on his forehead… Unwillingly… her eyes closed… as she held the sieve before her… a moment of sheer tranquility gushing through her veins… Silently, a prayer of sorts left her sealed lips… a prayer… for a moment… a moment that lasted… forever… Lifting her eyelids, she gave a petite smile… its tone… genuine… He remained unaffected… or so was perhaps the intention… but the slight glint in the dark eyes did not go unnoticed… by her own… Lifting the copper-toned container… he brought it to her lips… Her fingers gently assisting his… As her skin brushed ever so slightly… for the most fleeting second… with his… she lifted her gaze almost instantaneously… for a passing instant… daring to peer into those eyes… reading… knowing… he felt it too… Replacing the container, he turned to leave in urgent strides… Her soft eyes following him… noticing the retreating step… as he turned his head slightly… matching her gaze… making it fall to his in an unquestioning manner… A pause instilled in the air… as though in awaiting of his voice… Quenching the silent thirst he broke the silence… "Tere ko mere liye ye sab karney ki koi zaroorat nayi… aur… khaana kha lena…" (You need not do such things for me… and… eat something…)… a finality evident in is tone… acutely catching her ears… Looking up, she faintly caught his figure disappear…

***

Lifting her hand, she waved it lightly in the air… a gesture of farewell… Farewell… she thought unwillingly… It seemed like ages now… since that day… Yet she could vividly remember it… the day she had bid adieu… to what had become her life… She watched as the little figure waved back excitedly… the entire frame of the child corresponded to the movement… The toddler gave a huge smile… flashing a missing tooth… a forgotten void… its absence not felt… unlike the one haunting her… "Ma-ma!" She watched the little boy run quickly towards the welcoming arms of Gauri… a soft smile swayed from her lips as she accepted the look of assurance from the dear friend… knowing her amanat would be safe until return… As the two disappeared into the warmth of the house… she stood still… her eyes still penetrating the area recently deserted by the little boy… when a soft… feather-like weight, touched upon her skin… Opening her palm… she stared intently at the lines running across it… a mystery still yet to be solved… Looking to the open skies, she felt a tingle upon the open skin of her hand… as the snow droplet melted into the base of hand… Confident and deciding to go with the plan… the plan of not letting it come down on her today… she quickly balled her hand, stuffing it into the pocket of the dark cashmere of her long coat…

Three years had passed… three years… And eighteen days… Lifting her eyes… she silently observed the slowly awakening neighbourhood… It was a chilly morning… like most others in the London winter… Removing her hand from the comfort of the pocket, she turned her wrist slightly… the long metallic dial rested somewhere between the two and three… while the smaller sat around the seven… She had plenty of time… the meeting was not until nine… yet still she was fidgety… It was more out of habit now perhaps… Almost routinely, her eyes had found the ever-prominent keys of the clock… judging the continuity of time… Tilting her head, she avoided the sudden gush of icy natural breath challenging her stride… Shaking her head now, she attempted replacing the suddenly lost hairs… Suddenly, she lifted her arms… rubbing the length of them… whilst hugging herself… Winter… Her life was like a long… dark winter now… the child being the only grain holding her still…

* Ok guys, I know you're totally confused… I'll explain later… Just know that time has passed and MP are no longer together… well, physically… I will try and add more to this tomorrow. Sorry!

Cheers,

dc

Sorry guys... boring part... promise, the next will be worth it... thanks for the patience!

Cheers,

dc

plz cont and yeah it wasnt tht much boring

Originally posted by: YOOUSHA

plz cont and yeah it wasnt tht much boring

Thanks yaar, I tried😳... But it seems like I didn't attract much attention!😆

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dc

aww it was a wonderful update...post soon...w8ing for it 😃 😃