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Posted: 18 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: shananubis

Anju,, you included my boyfriend in your ff... He is my nephew and if he knows you are trying to keep him off his mama's milk then I'm sure he will make your life hell 😆 😆 . By the way he only 3 months old. But for Milind and Prachi's sake we will make him 1 yr old 😆

well he was cute and serve the purpose i used him, i love him he is soooooooooo cute.............

Arre why are you troubling my poor Milind yaar... As it is he has Ayesha in the show given by Ekta now you too creating misunderstandings... Mera bechara Milind 😭 😭 😭 Can't Prachi be little bit more specific while talking to baby 😆 😆 😆

array milind troubles himself too much, i dont even have to try😆, his life is all about assumptions. She was specific, what can sehe tell if he wants to believe what he saaw😆

Jokes apart gr8 part dear, but a bit short.. dont make us wait this long for the next update.

my brain works slow so thats why its short, next update comming in a hour
love
Shan

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Posted: 18 years ago
#82
Oh dear the vexation of having lost her... Somehow all of us here are hell bent to give Milind the time of his life in pursuing Prachi before finally getting them together... 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#83

Ayesha Meets Prachi Part 5A


8 months later


In a busy shopping complex, Prachi was busy adding some new collection to her wardrobe, collecting her bags, she walks back . Without realizing what happened prachi found herself in the ground with all the bags scattered around. A small gal about 3 or so had crashed into her making her fall.


Gal : Sorry


Voice : Prachi, i asked you to be careful, come here


Prachi looks up and finds herself looking at ayesha


but ayesha is more concerned about the child than herself, then ayesha is so shocked as she looks up at prachi. Stands there for sometime until little prachi tugs her back to this world


Prachi gives her a genuine smile: Hi how are you?


Ayesha still shocked almost chokes the reply : I am fine(after some time) slowly and u?


Prachi: i am good😃


Little Prachi: Mum lets go naa, I want icecream😃


Ayesha looks at prachi and : would you like to come with us, 😕


Prachi did not want to go and find out bitter truths😭, but her need to find out about ayesha and how her kid has her name got the better of her😒.


As they made their way towards baskin robins😊, ayesha was constantly looking at prachi, but she was loss of words. They got the icecream, but both of them were silent when little prachi wont stop talking.


Ayesha after a lot of thought and confusion: wooh mein.....wooh mein I am so sorry for all that😭,


Prachi: its forget the part ayesha, i have moved on, i think you should too😭


Ayesha starts crying 😭: if it weren't for you i would have never got my love [:'(]


Prachi heart tightened as she tried not to show her pain


Ayesha : " Would you forgive me prachi ? Please for all that I did to you, if only I was able to see through ur honestly", breaks into sobs


Prachi heart goes out for ayesha, she could feel the honestly in her voice. Hugs ayesha consoling her.


Prachi: there is nothing to forgive, if i were in your place i would have done the same


After a while, ayesha makes a determined face : Prachi, only you could be this kind hearted, would you come to my place, digging the address out, ayesha gave it to prachi asking her to come


Prachi very reluctantly agreed


Next day Prachi goes to see Ayesha in her apt, knocks the door and somebody opens 😊





Edited by red_chile - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#84
Anju you made Ayesha cry in front of Prachi 👏

I know who opens the door... Neev.. you made my Milind suffer for 8 more months 😡 . you are taking leap after leap... 😆 😆 😆 I like the way story is going....

Continue soon dear... Shan
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Posted: 18 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: shananubis

Anju you made Ayesha cry in front of Prachi 👏

I know who opens the door... Neev.. you made my Milind suffer for 8 more months 😡 . you are taking leap after leap... 😆 😆 😆 I like the way story is going....

Continue soon dear... Shan

What is that cul dude kids name ?

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Posted: 18 years ago
#86
For my own saftey and well being i have changed the character of krishna hubby to BE-WHOEVER-YOU-WANT )


be-whoever-you-want jiju had come to drop the kid of as if he sees krishna then he will whine and wail forever, so somehow they had got him to prachi place.

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you are so save now..... nobody will harm you.....not even krishna 😆 .....


milind walk out and that without a fight .....plus you have let him suffer for 8 month 😭 ..... kuch kero.... help him please 😃 ....

again 2 wonderfull epi 👏 👏 ....
so continue soon....

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Posted: 18 years ago
#87

(For my own saftey and well being i have changed the character of krishna hubby to BE-WHOEVER-YOU-WANT 😆)

be-whoever-you-want😆 jiju had come to drop the kid of as if he sees krishna then he will whine and wail forever, so somehow they had got him to prachi place😭.

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😆

Anju I just couldn't stop laughing dear......be-who -ever-you -want...😆

Just to make some of your readers happy ...you take away...Shaboo....not fair*stamping my feet* 😆

Though I like it too....this way no one whill know who I am marrid too except...me😆

Loved both the parts dear...adn you know I love your style...so how much will Mili be suffering dear????😆

Update soon.

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
#88

Ayesha Sacrifice and Prachi lecture

Part 8:

It was ayesha who opened the door, she let prachi come in, as prachi noticed ayesha had fully packed and little prachi was dressed to go.

Ayesha: aaj neev kaa bday hai, he will be here in 20 mintues, Me and prachi will be leaving from here in 5 minutes

Prachi sat there trying to grasp ayesha words then :wait why are u leaving , why did you call me

Ayesha: I messed up I am fixing it. I am leaving, when neev comes you can just let him know that I left, and give him this folder, it has all the legal proceedings, ( then talking to little prachi ) Chalo beta, saab layliyaa

Little Prachi: Paapa nahi aarahai hai mumma,

Ayesha: wooh baadh mein aayenge beta, ab hum chalthe hai

Prachi: ayesha what are u doing

Ayesha: I told you I am fixing my mistake, neev was always yours I was stupid did not realize my mistake, now I want to correct it, I want him to be happy. I know his happiness is not with me, I am just a majboori, he doesnot have to be stuck up with me, I want him to be happy, and I want you to be happy. You gave me your everything including your mother, love and life, and in return what did I give you, life of loneliness, you have always been the sister any person actually wished. For the first time let me do what is right prachi, let go of me let me do it right for once.

Prachi : who child is this one (pt to little prachi) harshly

Ayesha: mine, ( raised eyebrow from prachi) and neevs

Prachi: and you think he would be happy with me, why becoz you think he loves me, if he really did loved me ayesha, he would have never touched you *sigh* let alone have a child. We both have moved on ayesha, don't dig up the grave and turn ppls like upside down, trust me when I tell you I don't love him, in the years I have been away from you guys as many times I have thought about u is the same times I have thought about him. Don't do this to him and don't do this to urself, let it be ayesha let it be

Prachi left a thoughtful ayesha back

6 months later ( ok I am leap queen I know 😆😆)

Prachi has moved her base to Mumbai so that look after there company unit in mumbai

Prachi had clearly told ayesha she wont come to shah house, but would be staying in company flat. After having settled down in her apartment, today she was waiting for ayesha so that they go to sidhi vinayak temple together as it is her mum bday ( rather their mum's bday).

Ayes: Hi prachi, I think I will be late, why don't you come to the temple directly, I will meet you there

Prachi was a bit annoyed with ayesha, but took a cab to the temple

Prachi meets ayesha: Kya huwa problem kya hai!!

Ayesha : Tu chal naa, chal…..jaldi

Premlatha: ayesha beta where did u go, I told u not to go in beed baad in such conditions, haan chalo ab ghar chalo and only araam

Ayesha: maa please aap naa mujhe beemar ki tarah treat math kijiya, I am not sick I am just pregnant and its my second child for heavan sakes taking premlatha by hand

Ayesha gets her face to face with prachi, premalath is shocked and so emotional that after staring at praci for a while she starts crying badly hugging prachi, then hugging ayesha then group hugging. All the three cry , then after a long time and going back to prachi dig everybody part home reluctantly

Sorry the whole chapter 5 had no mili, but from now on it is going to get hotter and mili will be back in action

Reg

ANju

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Posted: 18 years ago
#89

Anju.......

No milli at all....but a lovely part dear....Ayesha truly has changed for the better and loved that she did the right thing by calling Prachi at the mandir and getting he rto meet her mother...😃

Now can't wait for Milli to make his entry dear......😉😆

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
#90
Anju... Where is my Milind.. Again a leap.. You are making my Milind suffer for so long.. while Ayesha and Neev are doing their cha cha cha 😆 😆 😆

Prachi stop all the bashans and sacrifices and go back to Milind...

Gr8 going dear 👏 👏 .. So will Prachi move to Shah house now? Let the fire works begin..

Shan

PS. Well the cool dude kids name is Ryan. He just needs evry one's attention on him. If he doesn't get that he creates a fit. I love him.

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