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Posted: 18 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: shali

nope hun.... my is fine very fine....

jai.... I was only giving him the look not more..... ( as god have given my eyes so I do use them😉....) but my getting married to this oen.... nope never...

the only man I wanted to marry was already married so I am looking further.... and sweety.... I don't wanna marry milind .... nope.... only want his jism....after that he is all yours..... I even will wrap him up...gifting him to you.....

😆 Have to agree with you dear...that Milladn /Shabooo....definitley has a wonderful jism......but dear...you'll have to wait till I am done with him😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: kubare

😆 Have to agree with you dear...that Milladn /Shabooo....definitley has a wonderful jism......but dear...you'll have to wait till I am done with him😆

I am so in need for my doctor milind now😉😃.... It's a emergency😳😳😳.....

and where you not the person calling my loony....

so please first the ill then the married😆😆😆......

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hiii I just started this FF and i must say its realy good please continue soon 👏 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hi there nice ff the change of environment adds to the effect. One more thing it's a hindi serial thats the actual back drop so it wud be appreciated if the dialogues were in hindi too. Else it wud give the feel of an amerian soap script. Hope you dun mind my suggestion. Keep up the lovely work. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hi there nice ff the change of environment adds to the effect. One more thing it's a hindi serial thats the actual back drop so it wud be appreciated if the dialogues were in hindi too. Else it wud give the feel of an amerian soap script. Hope you dun mind my suggestion. Keep up the lovely work. 😊

Hello Dearie,

Glad you liked it. I usually write in hindi, then i get requests to write it in english, so to save all the trouble i am posting in english. Well i will try to give hindi dialogues with anuvaad in english

Hope to see lots of your comments

Reg

Anju(theeki)

Edited by red_chile - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#76
Hey! Anju! Jaan!

Where is the update??!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
Anju,, What happened? Where is the update??
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Posted: 18 years ago
#78

Warning : Adult content read on your own discretion

sanju is the baby from shanu di siggy or avi

Part 4C:

M couldnot sleep for entire night, he was waiting for the sun rise, he wanted to go and see prachi, as for forgiveness and take her back with him, to where she belongs finally he is going to get all things right.

Excitedly, M leaves and goes to Prachi house

***

Here prachi has been waiting for sanju baby, she loved kids and especially sanju as she had been krishna since the child birth 😃, so even sanju who had stranger anxiety went to prachi easily. he had turned one last week ( before M had come into picture ), so they had decided to stop giving mum milk. SO it was decided to leave sanju with prachi so that he forgets about the milk part completely, when they pick him back after 2 days, ( well its a ancient trick followed by many families in india 😕)

(For my own saftey and well being i have changed the character of krishna hubby to BE-WHOEVER-YOU-WANT 😆)

be-whoever-you-want😆 jiju had come to drop the kid of as if he sees krishna then he will whine and wail forever, so somehow they had got him to prachi place😭.

****

As Milind entered the premisis he froze in shock😲

There was prachi, a very cute baby😛, and very handsome dude😉 trying to give the baby back to prachi, in the process, the baby pulls prachi mangalsutra.

baby: da da da to the guy ( actually they say that to all 😆 its their age)

As the dude leaves, the baby starts wailing again ... calling out mummaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mummumaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa 😭

Prachi is like : no no no sanju, I am here naa no crying ok............

then pacifies him for good 15 minutes before he forgets and gets on his own

M stands there in trance watching prachi with the kid.

Prachi was happyly playing with sanju in the corridor(like balcony), she didnot even bother to see M who was standing very close to her, then

Sanju 😈 😳 kind has already started flipping her shirt buttons for reaching his source of food 😳, every time prachi dodges him, he wants it again

Prachi 😡: Sanju No milk from mamma do you getit, now you are big boy, we are here to distract you and make you eat like us. No more trouble ma for milk ok

Sanju ( like he cares ) tries to do the same thing, keeping her apartment door open,prachi plays with sanju for longest time.

Well M looks at her achingly, thinks of the time

when prachi is pregnant, he fussing over her, when he first sees his child, 😭 then when the kid was his and he was with prachi, Prachi holding the kid, he holding prachi 😭, the kid exacty looking like milind very wild with long hair, both irritating prachi when she tried to cut their hair 😭. On her bday both father and son are groomed men to please her, the tears in her eye😭. It was all their but now there was no prachi, atleast here was no prachi for him.

She was married( mangalsutra), had a good looking and caring husband, has the most beauftiful child on the earth, who wouldnt stop saying mama😒 He had always given h er unhappiness, rather than going in there and asking for forgivenesss and digging the grave, he should let her live a happy life and move on

Very sadly Milind left from there, wishing all his heart that prachi is happy😭

**********The End*******

Reg

Anju

P.S. Should i run now 😆

Edited by red_chile - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#79
oh! lord! My poor Milind...he thought she was married...typical Ekta effect!! always reaching wrong conclusions!!

😭 😭 😭 My poor MICHI jodi!

Very good! now, do the next update fast rather than keeping us waiting...jk... 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Anju,, you included my boyfriend in your ff... He is my nephew and if he knows you are trying to keep him off his mama's milk then I'm sure he will make your life hell 😆 😆 . By the way he only 3 months old. But for Milind and Prachi's sake we will make him 1 yr old 😆

Arre why are you troubling my poor Milind yaar... As it is he has Ayesha in the show given by Ekta now you too creating misunderstandings... Mera bechara Milind 😭 😭 😭 Can't Prachi be little bit more specific while talking to baby 😆 😆 😆

Jokes apart gr8 part dear, but a bit short.. dont make us wait this long for the next update.

love
Shan

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