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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 2:

M couldn't believe his rotten luck😡, he had lost her *sigh*👎🏼. Flipping through the project paper with disinterest[;(], M couldn't help but wonder if she was real or did he imagine her😳. It was very likely that he had mistaken somebody for her😕. It has been 5 years since the day she had walked out on him. He had looked for here everywhere, somehow after she had left he was not the same😭. He did not even get to apologize to her for his behavior😡, when he is angry he just cannot seem to contain his temper, and always have taken it on her😒. But what is the use of talking all this now she was gone, heck he did not even know if it was her😡. It for going to be another long night without her, thinking of her. 😭


Next day morning, as usual he was late as he did not sleep until late. Finally arriving at the Tech city, he makes his way through the security. He was suppose to meet his PA, Mona here ( i took if from ajitji's Mona darling 😆).


Mona: Sir thank god aap yahan aagaaye😉


Both of them walk towards the door, M was continuously fiddling with his tie🤢, he hated to dress up🤢, why cannot ppl just chill, they had to kill themselves with the tie and all the formal crap, when its so hot(like 50 C its common in hyd 😉) He felt like a chicken inside a barbacue 😆. Thank god for small mercies the building for air conditioned.😆 Just as they are waiting for the elevator,


Mona: Sir aap chodiye mein karday thi hoon ( she doesnot leave one chance of getting near M, but M never seem to get the signal but she never quits trying 🤢)


It was early in the morning, it has been some time since she had been waiting for the elevator, there was only one working all others were under service*sigh*. The line was getting longer , she was getting really late. She had a meeting and presentation in half hour, sangeeta would be already freaking out. It was a very big venture they were getting into. She did not know what the problem was with this elevator , as she moved forward to see what the problem was, some idiot was making out in front of the elevator🤢. God Men, neither see time space always ready to take their pants off ( sorry for the language, she is bitter towards men for the obvious reason). The frame looked familiar, but prachi just shrugged, walked towards them😛. She could only see, two heads moving against each other as if they are kissing.😆


Prachi holding the bag tightly showing her disapproval🤢. Decides to give a piece of mind.😡


Prachi; Excuse me!! 😡


Milind is like Now what😡, already Mona was irritating taking too long with the tie😡, upar say somebody wants to talk to him😡


Prachi a bit louder with a touch of disapproval🤢: Excuse me Sir!! 😡Do you mind😡, Unlike you others have work to do, it is highly improper to 😲


Milind turns around looks at prachi with surprise not shock🤔. But prachi was shocked for a second or two she did not expect to see him ever, let alone now that to with a woman clinging in his hand😡. Oh why is she surprised, the gal was so typical😡, she was good looking, with ample assets displayed😡, typical PA. Regaining her composure, prachi gives a disgusted look🤢 and


Prachi: Never mind with the improper speech, I did not know it was you. Hurries into the elevator


Prachi as the elevator was closing tartly😡: Sorry for the interruption please continue , the elevator door closed on her


Mona: Oh god how rude, apne kuch kaha kyon nahi sir😡


Milind was looking at the closed elevator, he was so happy😃 that she worked here, now it was easier to track her.


Here, prachi had so many emotions running through her, she was particularly proud of her ability to talk to him not to get tongue tied😭. She knew it was inevitable to see him someday , but have always feared she would be tongue tied as always, walking out of the elevator, she went to the powder room, to make sure she looks ok.


Prachi to herself: Chal prachi the day came and went, you lived. Maybe it hurt a little😭 but what can you expect, him to come behind you begging for you to come back. For heavan sake, just grow up, you are not that prachi anymore. You know how this world works now be a doll and get ready for your presentation. You probably never see him again😉


Well thats where she is wrong😆


It was a launch of their product, all the work was done. She was giving techincal presentation today regarding the features and how it was better than the other products. Today she was addressing around 100 ppl, which had been a normal thing for prachi. She finished her presentation as scheduled. Then with a brilliant smile she looked up the audience😃


Prachi " Any Questions😃" seeing nobody ask anything " Alright then, I will let Sangeeta take from ..."


One unmistakable voice " Actually I have a few questions "


Her rotten luck he had been in the room all through the presentation, and now he was asking her ?s😡


Milind : "May I"😉


Prachi : " Sure Sir( stressing on it)"😡

Let me know what you think ladies,

Helps me to continue

Reg

Anju

Well this part was just introduction, wait until the feathers get ruffled in the next part, which is launch party 😆, some voilence from the cave man😆











Edited by red_chile - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#12
Awwww.. good one.... I liked the bit abt him asking questions and she being all miffed! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awsomeee.. seriusli liking the new Prachi.. somehow I find her character close to Mukti's 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Mind blowing .... Please continue
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15

Sareeta

Thanks for the lovely pm, I am from HYD too but not any more. Moved away from India.

Pooks

Now that you have already read my ff in KS, it's the same style but I guess I can identify more with Michi than with JB so I am here writing my ff. Thanks for liking it then and now with kayamath. Hope I will be able to do some justice

Sangeeta

Thank you so much for the reply. I couldnot give a character sketch becoz I dont know much about kayamath. I blame it on my dear friend meli she told me the story showed me some vides and here I am with a ff 😃 Will try to give more insight on what I am writing

Nihita

Yes they both are separated, well its after the fiasco on sep 30 or so. I might write my own a bit dramatize it

Shali

Long time no see, thanks for liking it. Will be back with more

Sareeta

Well wait and watch, I am usually called by my friends as Queen of twists I Promise I wont shock you guys atleast not with my first ff

Meli

Its all your fault you showed me that scene and I got inspired from minnale 😆 thanks for reading, make the comment a bit bigger

Thanks you ladies for all your wonderful comments, keep them comming, trying to write something different especially with prachi, not that i dont like her but i am trying to show her as a woman who is scorned in love or something similar.

Reg

Anju

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Anju..sweetie...Awesome...i loved it!! Totally ruffled feathers hah!!!
yeh kya chakkar hai! Hyderabad! 50 degrees.....Tech city...
Can't but laugh as i was just in Hyderabad and Delhi on business in July...and will totally agree abt the heat and the suites!! LOL
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Anju, loved the second installment. Hmm..so Mills felt like a chicken being roasted in the bar-b-que but that did not make him stop that idiotic Mona from touching him and all 🤢 Loved the attitude and confidence you have given to Prachi 👏 The girl is too Mahan for her own good in the serial.

I don't want her to take in Mills shit and want her to give it as good as she gets. Mills will really need to make up for his arrogance and mistakes for the past 5 years. Let's see the game begin in the next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww...good to see you here Manju darling,

And a ff for Michi darling...they are sure a cute couple dear...much better then you know..who😆

Good beginning dear...can't wait to see..what you have in store for us next.

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Awwww.. good one.... I liked the bit abt him asking questions and she being all miffed! 😆

well this is nothing wait until next one 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: kubare

Awww...good to see you here anju darling,

And a ff for Michi darling...they are sure a cute couple dear...much better then you know..who😆

Good beginning dear...can't wait to see..what you have in store for us next.

Love

Krishna

Kishu di,

What are you doing here huh? that was a shock😲. You have made a typo in my name 😉 change it. I am so over you know who, i kind of like this two for now until i see somebody better.

Thanks

Regs

Anju

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