Ikraar PART 5C Pg15 Hero's Entry - Page 4

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Posted: 18 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: kubare

Anju darling,

Interesting dear....very very interesting😉....and I see she loves Mahesh Babu....anything to do with him being your favourite hero????😆

no he is not, He is so not my favourite hero, i love him but i love SID More *Sigh* vikram and surya and so on 😆

Aww.....loved to see the jealously angel in the story dear......😃our Milli sure gets possessive where his wife is concerned.😆...loved this Prachi dear..

i am trying to follow Meli description of Milli, for me he is the cave man 😆 and prachi is just like you krishna 😉

.and...can't wait for things to get spiced up😉...and you living up to your name😛.😆

well i dont think i will get any twists as you know I am queen of twists, i will keep it normal, love story till i get bored then will end it 😆

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
#32
wow...you have posted 3 chapters, akka... 😲 I will read it as soon as I am done with Arase updates 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: meli

wow...you have posted 3 chapters, akka... 😲 I will read it as soon as I am done with Arase updates 😉

You betta hurry 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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I am posting my comments later!!!
Adi..pavi....you used me as a side kick but a really good one though!!!🤣
Very nice...Very nice!! 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: panache

I am posting my comments later!!!
Adi..pavi....you used me as a side kick but a really good one though!!!🤣
Very nice...Very nice!! 😆 😆

pinna, yenga sangeeta akka va kokka, yella imp scenes la yum neega erukeenga 😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
o.k..my pesky jaanu...!! 😉
Here is what i thought..I enjoyed the story so much that I couldn't help myself from laughing out loud at the scenes...
I loved it when he was holding her hands really tight..too cute and absolutely potrays my Milind....Awesome....
@ i loved milind being jealous...and he is for sure cocky...Very Very nice 👏 ...Update soon please...
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37

Part 4A

He was so enraged, How dare he touch her, How dare he hug her, that too infront of him, he so wanted to break this guys skull, but a little voice inside him told him that she went willingly. But another voice tells him Then why is she still using his name, he was so happy to check for Mrs Prachi Mishra, he had it all planned out, he loved it when she got angry, her eyes get brighter, her features glowed, she looked so pure like a fire. But that loser had to come and spoil the moment. Its not like she can marry him ( talking to himself, he has not given her divorce yet ) She was his and it is going to be that way ( conceited B🤬 he is was, with a smug look he was waiting for Mrs.Mishra to come)

Prachi just opens the door in anger : HOW DARE YOU? HOW DARE YOU DRAG ME LIKE THAT AND CREATE A SCENE. THREATEN TO KILL MY FRIEND. YOU HAVE NO RIGHT TO BEHAVE LIKE THAT

M taken aback , what no right and create a scene now he was angry too : HOW DARE YOU, USE MY NAME, CALL YOURSELF MY WIFE AND THEN GO AROUND WITH ALL THE MEN IN THE WORLD.

Prachi heart broke into pieces he was only worried of her still using his name 😭 keeps quiet trying to get into terms with harsh reality

M goes on in rage: IF YOU USE MY NAME YOU ARE MY WIFE, IF YOU DARE TO INSULT ME WITH UR SLOPPY AFFAIRS I AM NOT THE ONE TO STAND IT.

Prachi: MARRIAGE WIFE, DID I MISS SOMETHING, THE LAST TIME WE MEET DID WE GET A DIVORCE, WHATEVER HAPPENED TO THAT. WHATEVER NAME I RETAIN AFTER MARRIAGE IN MY BUSINESS NOT YOURS.

M: there is no way you are going to call yours self my wife and then go around with other men, ruining my reputation, if this a way for getting my name tainted then it wont work missy

Prachi: I GO AROUND WITH ANOTHER MEN, SLEEP WITH THEM WHAT IS IT TO YOU, YOU ARE NOT MY KEEPER, SO KINDING KEEP UR MEDIVAL ATTITUDE TO YOURSELF. if you excuse me, i would have to go vinod would be waiting for me

M: DONT YOU DARE TO WALK OUT ON ME, YOU LEAVE WHEN I AM DONE WITH YOU. HE HAS WAITED SO LONG

prachi raising her chin high calmly: bye have a good night

M: "Not so fast," dragging her into his arms, molding her body into his, making her aware of him

Prachi tries to struggle, : Let go!!!

M: So telling me prachi, what are your plans for tonight, where you guys going to go back to your house or his house or even better to some hotel 😡

i have go home now so far only this much, please do comment if you find it inappropriate😕 or if u by any chance like it

This part is dedicated to Sakala Kala Valli,

Reg

Anju(theeki)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Anju...Awesome! Its reminds me of my early university days..when we all used to read M&B's in the hostel and pass the book along to others...!!! 😆 😆

Awesome...I am enjoying this so much! Very nicely written...keep it up! Now, what happens after this..i am dying it to know... 😉

@ Thanks for dedicatiing to the sakala kalla valli.........LOL! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: panache

Anju...Awesome! Its reminds me of my early university days..when we all used to read M&B's in the hostel and pass the book along to others...!!! 😆 😆

Awesome...I am enjoying this so much! Very nicely written...keep it up! Now, what happens after this..i am dying it to know... 😉

@ Thanks for dedicatiing to the sakala kalla valli.........LOL! 😳

You are welcome, this villi can do that much 😆 😔 apparently ppl dont comment much in this section which makes me not sure about bother to write another part or just let go 😭

thanks for the comment

Reg

Anju

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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
Arree..they will comment as the story progresses...I jsut told one my friends on IF to read and leave a comment...

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