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Posted: 18 years ago
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@ you dare not leave me hanging like this...i want to know what happened..so you better write..... 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Warna..me coming to canada with a hockey stick or a cricket bat! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Anju darling,

Not a good place to leave dear😉....so you better start posting the next part soon😡...as can't wait to see what our Milli does now...and how Prachi reacts😆

It sure will have fiireworks ..knowing you.😆

So start posting the next part....pronto.😉😆

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Anju, just caught up with parts 3 & 4A. Yaar, Mills surely has attitude. Ek toh he is in the wrong, I mean he was the one whol told Prachi he wants a divorce and told her to leave and now he's acting all possessive. 😡 😡 What a jerk. Am glad that Prachi oozes confidence and gives it right back to Mills.

Waise I had thought that Prachi would revert back to her old name, Prachi Shah after being told off by her hubby that he wanted to divorce her and after she walked away and started a new life.

The sparks in the Board room were mind blowing. I'd like Prachi to come one up on her egoistic hubby 😡 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#45
hey theekhi Anju... Gr8 story.. I dont know how I missed it.. 5 years passed..hmmm..Milind is so jealous... He is digging his own grave by his words. I am happy your Prachi knows to speak back..continue soon..I am dying to read the next part 👏 👏 👏
Shan
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Apun aa gaya rei! 😃

I have finally decided to grace the Kayamath forum with my divine and holy presence! 😊

Kasamh Se has become a crashing bore and so I must migrate to Kayamath... and the best way to make this historic transaction is by reading and commenting on my Anju ben's FF! 😃

Right then Anju ben, first off a big round of applause for making the Ff suitable for chhota sa pyaara sa maasoom bachcha's (like myself) to read! 😃

Milind's talk towards the end did have thee potential to turn into conversation unsuitable for minors like myself... but luckily he decided not to be a nasty dude!

By the way, I like all stories that start off with a rainy day... the classic baarish starting is still the best! 👍🏼

It seems like the lead pair have some serious issues... it'll be interesting to know what the problems were that made them split!

In the mean time, I think we need fighting, beatings and whuppin's to be handed out! 😃

The thing is that I saw Shabir in Shootout at Lokhandwala and although his role wasn't that long, it's clear that the guy can hand out good whuppins! Therefore, feel free to introduce male characters that are there simply to take beatings!

The thing is that action rulesssssssssssssssssssss! 😃

Anyways, it's great stuff so far... let's see if more tricky situations will come up! 😃

And finally, lots of hugs to my wonderful Anju ben!
🤗

God bless.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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o.k..my darlin' anju...Now, that you see so many responses..you better start writing the next part.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#48

Part 4B

Prachi was so shocked, 😲 and angry, but then swalling her anger,

P: where do u think is better?

M is angry now, not only she is not denying it, upar say she is asking him

P: You know what mishraji, apki koi galthi nahi, jaisi aap hai, waise hi doosaron ko samjhe ge naa, i dont blame you, yeah to aap chote log ki problem hai, kudh move on ha chahathay hai, lekin doosron ko move hotay nahi dekhsakthay, anyways you have to learn to deal with it mishra ji, yeah achi baath nahi, aur har koi to prachi nahi hotha naa 😃

Just then Mona walks in without knocking, pretending as if prachi doesnot exist,

Mona: Sir we are getting late, we have a early fight to catch( one meanie she is ) then turns around and says " Oh i didnot see you, sorry for the interruption"

Prachi: oh dont worry I was just leaving, It was nice meeting you Mr.Mishra Have a good flight 😃

Walks off an angry milind and confused mona 😆

***

Half hour later, prachi took a cab and left for home as Krishna di and shabby jiju (😊 where coming to leave little Sanju at her place for the week end

*****

After sending Mona back, M had loitered around to come interms with his feelings, the only thing he could conclude is that he has to get her to feel something for him, but he didnot know what to do with Vinod. As he was going towards his car in the parking lot, he heard a couple talk, Vinod tum bahut buray hoo, aur us prachi ki bachi ko to mein nahi chodugi, you both tricked me into this, i really thought you were going out with her.

Vinod: Prachi is to like my sister, i only love u sweety

** basically vinod had asked prachi to pretned to be his gal for the evening so that his real love could confess😆*

M hears all this

Next part will be totally M point of view, i am thankfull to all the ppl who posted teh comment and to all those who did not , if any of u have any idea on who to move forward the plot feel free to pm me

THanks

Anju (theeki)

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Posted: 18 years ago
#49

Woooohoooo....so Milind finds out that she was acting!!!
Let the fire works begin!!! I am loving it so far...

Eagerly waitin for the next part!! 👏

@ by the way, I am not liking Mona...so krishna is here tooo...wow...i am realling loving it....

Edited by panache - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#50
yipee. milind knows the truth. cool.. atleast you didnt drag it like kekta. 😃 👏 👏

ab aayega mazaa. waiting for the next part...

Love Shan

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