Sajan ghar aaye tum-Concluding part, Pg 5 - Page 5

Congrats Ryka for becoming Goldie😉😆😆 All thanks to Michi😳😃

Krishi

Congratulations Ryka on becoming a goldie 👏 ..

Wow what a finish to a wonderful update.. It was really worth the wait.. Great work Ryka..

Please write a full fledged Fanfic... Please..

Originally posted by: $weet Ema

Let me the first to congratulate you on becoming a goldie Ryka di 😃 will read and comment...and thankoo for updating your ff. 😳

Phew! Wow...what a reading...Ryka dii, it was well worth the wait...just sooo beautifully written, Everything just makes perfect sense, i liked how you incorprated some bits of the serials in ur concluding FF..(the instances when Michi met) and everything else is so wonderful..I really don't know what to say..because am not good with words..but I feel at peace after reading the concl part..lovely ending.

Thank You so very much, Sweety. I personally liked Milind's behaviour after he met Prachi... I so wanted to go into his head and figure out what he was feeling... he acted strange in those 30 seconds... so me added my own stuff to fit a Michi fan😳😆 Peace, that is what i wanted for Michi and Neev-Ayesha and more over for myself... had this last part in my head when i started off itself... but just wasnt getting the narrative write and having finally put those thoughts to words... I feel just as peaceful😃

Thank U so very Much😃

Originally posted by: candyfloss

gr8 ending!will you write more ff??

Thank You candy😃 I am so glad to get an OK from you...cause i dont think anyone supports Michi on the forum with teh passion you do😃
More FF? Na re... I am too lazy for that. You must have guessed it by the time i took to finish a 3 part ff. May be someday if i can get a Michi moment in mind i will write that... a full fledged FF isnt meri bas ki bath.. Thank u once again.

Originally posted by: vishid

thank u it was great pl. post another ASAp i really love u
u did great job
thank u

Thanks dear. And Thank you for putting up with my delay😃

Originally posted by: sneha_17

I want you to continue this FF and keeping writing for few more das, it is really amazing 👏

Thank U so very much... I hope u enjoy the last part as well😃

Originally posted by: Pori

WOnderful Ryka..

Thank U Pori😃

Originally posted by: sum2005

wow nice ff,i loved it 👏

Thank u so much sweety, means a lot coming from you😃

Originally posted by: marigold16

Your story jaan is justlike so awesome. I loved the milind prachi scenes. Soooo cute, yaar. 😃

😃 Thank you so very much... I am so glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: sweety82

Ryka iwas too good no words to describe It was simply awesome 👏

Thank u Sweety, I am truly touched😃

Originally posted by: knumnum

Ryka My darling

How r u yaaar??? Been a long time since i have seen u😳

Awesome FF yaaar.. Its sooo sweet and short.

And the most beautiful part is u have put such wonderful dialogues, scenes for NA tooooo👏👏👏

I luved how u brought Shabbo into this FF😆😆😆, Hailaaaa, M knows to paint???😉.. Tats really sweeet of u to connect all the incidents so well yaar. They are perfect.

Thank u sooooooooo much Ryka for the wonderful FF👏👏👏

Hope I see u writing some nice stories on the rockstar tooo😆😆

Krishi

🤗 Krishi... I miss you so very much. I am so glad u liked it...coming from someone who I have known since i started off... makes it all the more special for me🤗. I knew I can get away with Michi... was worried about Neev-Ayesha... knowing how baised i can get didnt want to do injustice to them... feeling a lot better hearing u liked their scene aswell.

Apna duffer doesnt paint dear, he sketches...pencil portraits mostly. And Shabbo angle... I did that as a tribute to Shabbo... he single handedly was the inspiration to the story and esp the last part. So just put it in for his sake😳

And coming to apna Rockstar... I will write for him aslong as he is ready to get rid of that girl in his life.. or atleast whack her hard on the head that she forgets how mean and selfish she can be (not to forget how evil she will get now😡) and get back to being the innocent girl he fell in love with... Till then I cant see him waste his life over that girl😡😕

Originally posted by: knumnum

Congrats Ryka for becoming Goldie😉😆😆 All thanks to Michi😳😃

Krishi

Thanks honey... but are you forgetting our Rockstar? My 1st post was in defense of Rockstar when that Chawla family attempted mass suicide🤢😕 Anyway... has been fun in both the forums... i guess i feel more at home here thanks to the aliens they made out of RaKa and u guys are here aswell... so me dont miss much😃
Thank u Krishi once again😃

Lots of Luv🤗

Hello Ryka dear I must say a very very passionate end and to be honest it felt as I watching it in my mind's eye. Not illusion rather imagination. I knew you'd end it well just loved the confession part it was sweet soft and touching.Makes me think all women want their men that way... 😊 you'r depiction of them together is very beautiful also the Neev Ayesha part was done justice with. As for dragging it for months yes that was rather a very long wait but now I believe it was worth it. Your work is very commendable and deserves high accolades. 👏 Do continue writing I for one would love to read something from you besides updates. 😊

Originally posted by: blind horizon

Hello Ryka dear I must say a very very passionate end and to be honest it felt as I watching it in my mind's eye. Not illusion rather imagination. I knew you'd end it well just loved the confession part it was sweet soft and touching.Makes me think all women want their men that way... 😊 you'r depiction of them together is very beautiful also the Neev Ayesha part was done justice with. As for dragging it for months yes that was rather a very long wait but now I believe it was worth it. Your work is very commendable and deserves high accolades. 👏 Do continue writing I for one would love to read something from you besides updates. 😊

Thank You so much dear...It means a lot, I am truly humbled😃 I am glad u liked what u read... and Thank you and Sorry for putting up with the long wait😕😆😊. I am too lazy to write a FF ... but if someday i can... then i surely will give it a try thanks to the wonderful support u guys give me😃.