Sajan ghar aaye tum-Concluding part, Pg 5 - Page 2

OH and i forgot to add...that song at the end, i was saving that song for an occasion like the one u have mentioned in ur story. I thought if it happens in the show i'll use it for the mix. 😉

WOW wow ryke kya baat hain hun I am stunned! 😳 Yaaar amazing FF! Totally loved it! 😳 you brought about all sorts of emotions throughout! MP rocked I just hope we get to see theses scenes! 😳

Thanks a ton for writing such a wonderful story would look out for the second part of MICHI! 😆 😛

Mwahhhh xxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Love,
Sima

it was a gr8 piece of writing and ur making me fall for Michi moreee 😳

Originally posted by: wassup28

very good..feels like this is wats goin to happen in the coming episodes.... 👏

Exactly my thoughts! It jus felt like we were watching what was to come in the coming episodes!

Absolutely enjoyed it! The best part was, the characters was exactly the same in the serial now and it was an extension of the current episodes! Thank you for the wonderful read! 😊

wassup28 - Thank u so much, I so wish it happens for real aswell.

meli- I want Prachi to experience Milind's life, Milind has adapted so well into her world... I want the same for her aswell... and their house is small and cozy compared to their huge Mansion and yes, Michi are way from all the Kabab mein Haddis😆 I am glad u enjoyed reading the Michi moment... I dont know if i can continue...kind of a block, but if i can write i surely will complete their trip to the chawl. Thank u so much for ur comments😃

Krishi, I dont blame u... I had completely forgotten abt this thread all along thanks to Michi fever that gripped us through the week😳 I was a bit apprehensive about the dialouges, ek tho Milind ki language upar se I am not good with conversation style of writing. I happy as long as it didnt wasnt out of place. Thank u so much sweety for the appreciation, means a lot😃

fatima4ever - Thank u so much😃

Anju - Thank u so much, I feel sad for Prachi for not having the experience of entering a new household, where the family welcomes her into their own and has so many expectations & responsibilities for her. I want a complete marriage experience for Prachi, being a Biwi, Bahu & a Bhabhi. I hope Mishraji comes back soon😃

jinc118- Thanks sweety, It means so much more to hear that from u😛 One more Mix? Arre Milind yaar, mujhe wo Mix chahiye... atleast for that apni Biwi ko Chawl ka sair kar aa😆

Zoe89- Thank u so very much for ur comments😃

luv_eijaz_anita - Thank u so much, I am happy that u enjoyed reading it.

Bugger - I hope u fainted for the right reasons😆 shall wait for ur comments whatever they are😛

Sima - Thank u so much dear... I really hope we get to see these scenes for real😳

Pori - Thank u so much... well anything for Michi😳😛

sareeta - That is so sweet of u Sareeta, I am thankful u felt it was close to teh show... i felt i took too much liberty and went off on a fantasy flight😆

Thank u everyone once again, I am truly humbled... I just hope it was worth your time😃

Luv u all 🤗

hey ryka...

that was an extremely enjoyable read. you've captured the nuances of each character perfectly. it was simple and just perfect.

great work girl.

-priya

it was fantastic u did a gr8 job what a FF i hope u r making more i mean telling what will happen after this ghar pravesh waiting for the second part. 😳

I have posted the 2nd part of the Michi Moment... Very little of Michi in this one... Promise, shall make it up with the next one😃
I Shall wind it up with the next part. Thank U for the wonderful responses🤗. I hope the 2^nd part was worth ur time aswell. Shall look forward to your reactions.

wow....luved the whole 2nd part...Neev Ayesha was AWSOME and Michi was as usual sizzling 😃

Ryka , great job yaar 👏 👏
i liked all MP momements 😳