FF:Freaky story!Last Part:Pg 33(20/08/09) - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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feel free to write..................

delibretly needed writers to extend the story line of this freaky FF.

please care to see this and try and feel free to write parts for this FF. new writers are happily invited. please post which part do you want write...from prt-4. plz,plz.plz...........................................................................

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravu

feel free to write..................

delibretly needed writers to extend the story line of this freaky FF.

please care to see this and try and feel free to write parts for this FF. new writers are happily invited. please post which part do you want write...from prt-4. plz,plz.plz...........................................................................

don't worry I will update The other parts
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

"Mallika"Shabbir shouted as he ran after her.Mallika who was furious just got into her car before Shabbir can catch up with her speed. Suddenly his mobile rang. It was his childhood friend Aritha "Hey Aritha"Shabbir said. "Shabbir,are you alright?" Aritha asked rather worried. " I'm fine, Mayuri found out about Sandy"he said in a gloomy voice. "What?" Exclaimed Aritha. "How did it happen?"Aritha asked.

"Long story,I will talk to you later" Shabbir replied trying to not to recollect that incident. "Shabbir, Do you love Sandy or Mayuri?" asked Aritha curiously.

"I don't know" Shabbir replied. "What!! You don't know." Aritha asked. She then hit herself on her forehead. "You fool!" she said rather irritated as then cut the phone.

Shabbir entered the house. It was dark and gloomy as the lights were off. He headed towards the living room he suddenly saw all his favourite dishes on the table.

He saw a note lying on to table. He picked it up "I'm sorry, Love from Mayuri, Sara, Vasu and Shravu" He smiled as he read it to himself. Then he saw another note which was much longer. He picked it up but he suddenly dropped it. He bent to pick it up when he saw another note. He picked up both notes. "Eat dinner in time and don't wait for us. Love from Sara" He felt sad that he had to ear dinner alone. He wanted to talk to Mayuri. H e then read the other note "We will come late go to sleep on time."

He felt even more disappointed that he had to spend the rest of the evening alone.

Having lost his appetite he slowly headed towards his room when he suddenly heard something fall.He rushed towards the kitchen and saw all of them cooking something.

"Papa,What are you doing here?" Mayuri asked. The others turned around shocked to see Shabbir. "I should be asking that to you" Shabbir replied. "Mayuri, I have to talk to you, come upstairs." He ordered as he left. Mayuri followed him. She had never seen her farther this gloomy. As she entered the room she saw her farther take out something which looked like a diary. "Baby doll, today you found out about Sandy but I want you to know about my whole life." He said. "I want you to know how your farther was before you were born. I want you to know every single detail about my life like I know about yours." He continued. " My childhood was fine I had friends and I had Sandy but he died as you know already. Aritha was my childhood friend but I had a crush on her. I once put a ring on her ring finger and told her that she was my fiance but she tought I was joking. I realised that it wasn't love. Then in college I found my Dream Girl. Her name was Shubha. She was like an angel from heaven.

Sadly it didn't work but we remained as friends. After that Sangs came into my life she made me laugh and with her life was so beautiful. She didn't love me. We still remained friends. Then Jo and Munee came into my life they were smart, intelligent

But we remained friend as things didn't work out. Angel, Kuku, Sia came I didn't feel anything for them even tough I found them absolutely beautiful. Then Minu and Jessu came into my life but they moved to a different college. Shali and tweety came into my life but I broke up with both of them. The pattern continued till I met your mom . Then we got married and had you. This is my life story." As he finished he looked at Mayuri and found her asleep. He smiled at her. He lifted her up and carried her to her room. He looked at his daughter take the whole bed while she slept. He stayed with her for half an hour as he kept counting how many times she turned 360 degrees while sleeping and without realising he fell asleep as well and both farther and daughter had a war at night pushing each other out of the bed and Sara slept on the couch watching them fight.
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Edited by may268 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Congo👏 Do you like it?😳
mehanandita thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great update dear
quite hilarious
ur papa seems had been given try to infinite girls to become his life-partner
loved the update every bit
nice suprise to shabbir,
and wht baby u slept off in half of his story, not fair hun(did u felt he lullaby u with his story)
both daughter and father fighting who will remain in the bed by kicking off other one is so cute😆😆😆
seems sara is guarding u both of them

continue soon
nice update, enjoyed a lot🤗

dont bother to include me 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: may268

Congo👏 Do you like it?😳


like it?
i loved it dear😛
gud try

keep on going👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: mehanandita


like it?
i loved it dear😛
gud try

keep on going👏👏👏


seems its only u and me online
cant able to see anyone

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Posted: 16 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: mehanandita

great update dear
quite hilarious
ur papa seems had been given try to infinite girls to become his life-partner
loved the update every bit
nice suprise to shabbir,
and wht baby u slept off in half of his story, not fair hun(did u felt he lullaby u with his story)
both daughter and father fighting who will remain in the bed by kicking off other one is so cute😆😆😆
seems sara is guarding u both of them

continue soon
nice update, enjoyed a lot🤗

dont bother to include me 😊

I will defenetly include you but the thing is the update turned out quite long so I could only fit half of the people in. The rest are in the next update😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: mehanandita


like it?
i loved it dear😛
gud try

keep on going👏👏👏

Thank you
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: mehanandita


seems its only u and me online
cant able to see anyone

Yeah asmi said she will read it tommorow
I sent PM to others coz the second updates had no comments so I got worried😕
I sent a Pm to siya but that lazy woman won't comment😆
I bet she didn't even read it😆
The whole point is tto people to read it and laugh at it😳
It's comedy..I wanted to do something different😳
Most ff are romance😳😆
I might give a go at romance😆
not now tough😆

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