FF:Freaky story!Last Part:Pg 33(20/08/09) - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asmi2009

you can write all parts dear. noone will come in yr way😆 copywrites are with u n mayu baby😆

We didn't copy anything
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: may268

We didn't copy anything

Oh Mayu baby you really dont know meaning of copywrite😆?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asmi2009

Oh Mayu baby you really dont know meaning of copywrite😆?

No but I am updating soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Enjoy!! This part is by our talented Sharvu!!

Part 2
Afternoon everyone in the house, Sara, vasu, Mayuri and Shravu goes into the kitchen and started to prepare Shabbir's favourite dishes. They also started baking his favourite black forest cake. they thought he would be happy seeing all his favourite dishes. Shravu was preparing curry, suddenly Sara comes. "so you don't know who Sandy was." Sara questions Shravu. but Shravu just nods her head in negative. Just then Mayuri comes there and pulls off sharvu before she could further explain about the reason. Vasu and Sara forgoes their favourite daily soaps inorder to cook his favourite dishes.

it was about 9'oclock when they finish the cooking. Seeing that everthing was going to according to their plan, all of them celebrate with a glass of mango juice. Though tensed, Mayuri goes of to study in her room, but she felt something was wrong. Vasu and Sara started seeing their favorite prime time serials. Sharvu, nothing knowing what to do in this tension, stated watching that serials along with them, but immediately dozed of to sleep, unknowingly supporting her chin with her palm. She just jerks backs hearing the door bell. She aimlessly goes towards the door, before anyone could and opens the door and leans on it and closes her eyes. She opens her one eye and sees her brother standing there with a huge grin on his face. She then turns to the other side and finds a woman standing there with him. "who is this", she lazily asks her brother. "this is Mallika.....", "what!" she exclaimed before her brother could go further. "is it our dog's name", she said absentmindedly. "what dog which dog." he asks her rather puzzled. Vasu, Sara and Mayuri who had came there was shocked hearing this. Mallika who stood there was shocked out of her wits."See Mallika,Sandy is our long lost dog's name." he explained seeing her shocked. "my sister is in sleepy mood so she didn't hear you name properly." "what ! your sister is sleepy it's ok. your not sleeping na." Shabbir was confused by this."and for your information my name is Mallika not Sandy and by the way thanks for your hospitality." she stomps her angrily and goes away from there in a huff. "Mallika" he shouts and runs back her. Mayuri comes and shakes sleeping Shravu. She wakes up in jerk and sees everone glaring at her angrily. "what happened, why everyone are glaring at me like this and by the way who is Mallika?." Shravu asked Mayuri innocently who stood beside her. "nothing happened our plan failed becoz of you." Mayuri replied dully. Shravu thinks for somethime, aftersome time, slowly her mind started working remainding what just happend. "Shit! what did I do", she hits her head with her hand and runs inside embarssingly.

Note:- it's just a freaky one. not intended to hurt anyone just enjoy your self with this part.

If you like the update press the like button😃

Edited by may268 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey you could have changed the name, i would not feel about that
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravu

hey you could have changed the name, i would not feel about that

changed😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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No comments?
Well mamas will come online tommorow,they will tell me whether they like it or not.
By the way Sharvu are you writing the next bit?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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anyone wants to write part 3?

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: may268

anyone wants to write part 3?

isharaa think she'll be writing the part 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravu

isharaa think she'll be writing the part 3

No she said she isn't
I will be writing it then

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