FF:Freaky story!Last Part:Pg 33(20/08/09) - Page 16

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

ya you are unique
who can better understand that

Originally posted by: may268

Yeah..BTW go and see the pic I posted on Dancing at midnight thread😉😆

Originally posted by: may268

Cool

I am going to update today!

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

in exactly how many time ?😲
mama wants to be first😆

Originally posted by: may268

I will update it when you're online

I will do it tommorow😳

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

how about in between 6 to 7 pm😕
tomorrow😳

Originally posted by: may268

I will PM u😳

Yo people!I made some characters in the fic more romantic as they asked.It's not my type but I gave it a goI got ideas from reading some kissing scenes in other FFs..lol I got inspired by Kuku's FF so I wrote a little bit about it

Shabir went back home and sat down on the couch. Sara came and gave him a glass of water. He pulled her into her lap and kissed her cheeks."What are you doing?" Sara asked surprised by his behaviour. He ignored her and continued kissing her face. "Is anyone home?" He asked. "No" Sara replied Shyly. He took her lips into a passionate kiss, which lasted for a long time. Both of them broke off as they were out of breath. Sara shyly buried her face on his shoulder.

As time went by Shabir didn't realise that he had to pick up Mayuri. Shabir went to the kitchen and hugged Sara. "Why are you always cooking?" He complained. "I am cooking my princess' favourite dish" She replied. Suddenly he realised that he forgot to pick Mayuri up.He went to the school as soon as possible and found Mayuri sitting there angrily."I'm sorry Babydoll" Shabir said holding his ears. "Don't talk to me!" Mayuri yelled. She sat into the car. Shabir took her to the shop and brought her favourite chocolate ice cream, which made her happy.

Then they entered the house and found Kuku and Bharat sitting on the couch. "Kuku!!!!" Mayuri screamed in excitement. They both hugged each other. Later on Mayuri spent lots of time chatting with Kuku and cracking jokes while Bharat felt left out and bored. "Babydoll, Can I have some Juice?" Bharat asked. Mayuri nodded and went to get some juice. Kuku went near Bharat and kissed him. "I'm sorry, I knew that you felt bored," She said.

"It's nothing like that" He replied. They both kissed each other. They heard Mayuri coming. Bharat was about to break the kiss but Kuku didn't let go and kissed him even more passionately.Mayuri who witnessed this stood frozen on the spot and her eyes were open so wide that looked like it was about to fall out any second.

Shabir went past and saw what was going on. "Oh my lord!" Shabir exclaimed. He pulled Mayuri out of the room. Kuku broke their kiss and stared at Shabir. "I'm sorry," She said holding her ear while Mayuri was still shocked and looked like a living ghost. Shabir took Mayuri into his room and made her come back to normal.

Later on everyone were eating dinner. "Papa, I want to have a sex change," Mayuri blurted out all of a sudden. Shabir spat his food out. "Oh my god, Where did you get such an idea from?" Vasu asked terrified. "Kuku's Fan fiction" Mayuri replied. Shabir glared at Kuku who turned red. "Why do you want to have a sex change?" Shravu asked. "Because I don't want to get married." Mayuri replied. "Why are you thinking about all this now, you have to grow up" Shabir said angrily. Mayuri nodded.

"Babydoll, from now on you will not read Kuku's Fan fictions" Shabir said. "Why?" Kuku and Mayuri asked in unison. "Because of what you just asked now," Shabir replied. "You thought I was serious?" Mayuri asked laughing with Kuku and Bharat. Shabir understood that they were pulling his leg and bang his head on the table, which made Mayuri laugh so much that she fell out of her chair.

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