A chance at forever! epilogue pg 68 / 20-6 - Page 26

Loved the last two parts. I really don't know how I missed the last one, thought you only posted the pics. sorry. By the way, the pics were really good. The baby is a cutie cutie pie. Now, about the updates, quite emotional and loved the flow. The "smack on the cheek" was good 😆. Waiting to see how Shabbir will explain the situation to Karan now, he won't be as easy to fool as the maid 😉

Excellent update, Munee!! really enjoyed Anjali squirm when Shabir teases her abt the expense of the treatment. bechari ki appeptite chali gayi! :D i think i am a sadist 😛😃 loved Shabir's child-like enthusiasm on sleeping with Sanaya.....gosh, he really has a soft spot for her, doesn't he?!! :D the way he stared at her and funnily being smacked in the face when she does that cool somersault stunt :P chalo, atleast Anjali will be working at Shabir's place....now, i dont mind him eavesdropping in on her convo with God!!

Loved it!! Thanx for the update, Munee! :DD

Amazing update Munee,Loved Shabir teasing Anjali😃, and poor soul Anjali was ready to give her mom's akari neeshani to pay her debt to him it was heart touching😭.The way Shabir was bonding towards sanaya was so sweet,with both girls with him he even forgot to chat with his natalie.waiting to see karan coming in the story were this will lead next, Hope everthing goes for a good note. pls cont soon.

no update still....😕munee where r you gal???

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Awwww Munee....another super emotional part....or was it just me and my hormones....you had me balling my eyes out when Anjalie gave her necklace (her mom's last memory) to shabbir in payment of the hospital fees....and then again when she was praying for the courage to bo able t pay shabbir back for everything he has done for her.....she is too innocent....no wander that jerk (Sanaya's father) had his way with her...she is much too innocent!!! Love hoe Shabbo is drwan to her like a magnet....that he forgot his so called love Natalie online.....oops....tooo bad Natalie.....sorrry someone else has taken your place in Shabbo's heart now!!! Looking forward to the next part.....Poor Anjalie...what will she say to his friend Karan???

Thanks Nargis and sweety pie your hormones are absolutely fine it was meant to be an emotional update am glad it could be conveyed that way. Aw you got teary eyed on Anjali's fate me too sweety God I'm such a sadist bina dukh key khushi bardasht nahin hoti mujh sey. Yes Anjali is pretty innocent to the way the world works and so falls prey to others wrong doings easily. Natalie ka to ab patta saaf kerney waali huun mai. 😊

Originally posted by: layla44

intersting update one after the other..kiya baat hai..concentrating on one brings out the real quality in you i guess..😉..

aww shabbo he such a joker..torturing her for fun... so cute..

she gave her chain to pay the hospital bills and that too the only thing she has as a memory of her mother...so sad.😭.and the inoculation a dream.😔.gud that shabbo found out more about her , secretly listening...love the meditation scene..shes just an unlucky girl..

shabbo kept the chain??

lovd wen he offered to keep the baby in his room...wich gave her mom time to rest...and the ''sprite''[aww isnt it a cute name] woke up shabbo putting her tiny weeny leg across shaboo's neck..lol so cute..

its not easy sleeping with babies shabbo!!!😉😆

yey..shabbo left in the middle of a conversation with natalie..gud that he forgot about natalie..althou it was for sometime..

so he has sent the maid away secretly...getting more interesting..this guy already has fallen for her..lol...hope he comes to realize it soon..

hmm that was some lovly update dear...do update soon...

Hey Layla sweety am glad you liked the update.... I admit concentrating on one is less hectic though of late I have really not invested myself much seem to be losing the touch i guess. Well he wasn't torturing her for fun but sometimes some people incite you to certain stuff she incites him to teasing her innocence rather. Yeah she gave the chain to pay the bills and he did keep it. Shabbir can't help but be drawn towards her she has her hold over him. I tell you at four months children start rolling over even in sleep thus the changing of positions have been dealt with a few good smacks myself when I chanced to sleep with my neice and its so out of the blue person just can't get over the shock. He'll forget about Natalie soon I promise.

Originally posted by: ambul30

Loved the last two parts. I really don't know how I missed the last one, thought you only posted the pics. sorry. By the way, the pics were really good. The baby is a cutie cutie pie. Now, about the updates, quite emotional and loved the flow. The "smack on the cheek" was good 😆. Waiting to see how Shabbir will explain the situation to Karan now, he won't be as easy to fool as the maid 😉

Aw thanks Ambul you liked the pics... so happy to hear that. Yeah it'll be an emotional ff... I can't seem to get enough of it. Hmm with Karan will come some shape to the story hope you'll like it.

Munee are you updating today???

Originally posted by: sailat@PA

Excellent update, Munee!! really enjoyed Anjali squirm when Shabir teases her abt the expense of the treatment. bechari ki appeptite chali gayi! :D i think i am a sadist 😛😃 loved Shabir's child-like enthusiasm on sleeping with Sanaya.....gosh, he really has a soft spot for her, doesn't he?!! :D the way he stared at her and funnily being smacked in the face when she does that cool somersault stunt :P chalo, atleast Anjali will be working at Shabir's place....now, i dont mind him eavesdropping in on her convo with God!!

Loved it!! Thanx for the update, Munee! :DD

Thanks a ton Saima so you enjoyed Anjali in hot water :) Yes Shabbir certainly has formed a soft spot for the kid loves her to bits will realize it soon too. Yes Anjali will be working at Shabbir's place now a good way to interact and know each other really well. 😊 Even I didn't mind him eavesdropping.... 😳

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Munee are you updating today???

Nah sweety just started writing was enjoying my holiday today away from the computer... lol.